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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptyWed Dec 30, 2009 10:39 pm

LOL thanx Oly!

Yes... kinda... I actually took it from a friend of mine, her name is Olga, and she was begging me to put her in the story, so I did xD
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptyThu Dec 31, 2009 1:20 am

xD that's great! i hope she's kind in the story and not bad!
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptyThu Dec 31, 2009 1:45 am

You'll see you'll see ^^

It will be a hug surprise ^^ I hope >.> xD
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptyThu Dec 31, 2009 1:49 am

lolz ok Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySun Jan 03, 2010 3:50 pm

Part 11 ^^

The next day I arrived at school deliberately earlier than usual, I wanted to see if she would be early this day too. And I was right, she was.
“Good morning”
“Good morning?” she looked kinda confused.
“I’m Joe…”
“Oh… yes… Joe… hello” she said and smiled that beautiful smile of hers.
“JOE” I heard someone calling me. Of course it was Rose… would else would call me so violently.
“Yes, I’m coming” I shouted back to her place. “Sorry I have to go”
“Is she your girlfriend?” She asked looking at Rose.
“What? Her? No, no, we are just friends, I will see you later eh?” Of course Rose is not my girlfriend… who could ever be that things boyfriend? All she knows to do it shout at boys and punch them. I could never imagine being affectionate to her… disgusting.
“Yeah… see you later”
I turned around and left.
“Good morning guys” I said when I saw Lily, David and Rose standing in front of me.
“So… how’s the new girl doing?” David asked poking me.
“She’s a very nice girl… better than some others that are lurking around here” I said looking at Rose’s side.
“Oh f*** you” she said, stuck out her tongue and then crossed her hands like a stubborn child.
She’s so funny when she does things like that.
“Is that a way to say hello to someone that wwuuvvs you so much?” I said and hugged her.
“Disgusting… get away from me” she said and started screaming like crazy while David and Lily were laughing like hell.
“Shall we go to class then?” Lily asked.
“See you later love” David said and kissed her.
“Disgusting” I heard Rose muttering.
“What? Disgusting? Don’t wonder you don’t have a boyfriend yet.” I started teasing her again. I just love to tease her, she gets mad so easily. It’s very funny when she starts screaming out of nowhere, and her silky hair start waving while she punches the air and her eyes start glittering out of madness. WAIT… silky? Glittering? JOE WAKE UP! OMG!
“You just have to find the right lips to kiss… the right rainbow” Lily said and winked at her.
“Rainbow what? Did I miss something?” I said while we were walking to class.
“No nothing” Rose said while killing Lily with her eyes.
We went to class. Oli was there… she was sitting at the back sits in the classroom so I didn’t have any excuse to go there and talk to her. The lesson was boring as always. Who the hell invented this thing called physics? I hate him! I’m so going to sue that guy when I become a lawyer.
The bell rang and we all ran out of the classrooms as if we were sheep being chased by a wolf. I saw Oli there.
“Hello Joe” she said and smiled at me.
“Hello Oli, I’m glad to see you’re getting to know the school”
“Yes… you can’t imagine how much you helped me that day.”
She looked beautiful… her brown almond shaped eyes, her blonde a bit curly hair, wait… did I just say curly? HUH? Weren’t her hair straight today? No… I must be wrong… she can’t be making her hair at school. Stupid Joe imagining things.
“If you ever need anything else just ask me”
“Joe, are you coming?” David called.
“Yep, be right there”
“See you tomorrow Joe” she smiled and left.
I went at home a few minutes later. I was dead tired so I went to bed. When I woke up it was already 7 in the evening. Of course I had overslept and now I wouldn’t have time to play Final Fantasy. Damn you sleep.
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySun Jan 03, 2010 5:00 pm

awww cute part Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySun Jan 03, 2010 6:07 pm

Haha xD Talking to himself.. Shiny xD Angry coz he can't play a video game? Laughing

Amazing part Dimitra
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySun Jan 03, 2010 6:10 pm

Thankies Mar!!!

I was a bit afraid of writing from joe's side coz it's the first time I was writing how a boy thinks... xD
And I dunno if I got it right xD
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySun Jan 03, 2010 9:27 pm

hahahaha that was sooo cute!! i love Joe's thoughts xDD
but he must know that there is not just one guy that invented physics so he can't sue him xD
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySun Jan 03, 2010 11:32 pm

LOL I think he knows!

Actually my first thoughts when I created this story was that Joe would be the best student, he would have staright A on his marks and so on... but in this part he kinda reversed the whole concept on his own xD
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptyMon Jan 04, 2010 3:30 pm

hahaha it's ok! humans make mistakes! xD he wants to be a lawyer so it's not something he must know!
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptyMon Jan 04, 2010 5:26 pm

LOL yeah... I suppose xD
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptyMon Jan 04, 2010 10:21 pm

LOLL, Final Fantasy! xD
Hilarious part! I'm curious about the new girl there... Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptyMon Jan 04, 2010 10:38 pm

Really? LOL... thanks... I'm aiming for the funny side of the things xD

mmmm I'm curious about her too xD
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySat Mar 06, 2010 5:14 pm

Part 12

That’s it! Today I will ask Oli to go out with me! We already know each other for 2 weeks, I think that is enough! Besides it’s not like I want anything more than being her friend ~yeah right… anyway~
“Hey Joe… are you alive?”
“Huh? Take that thing away from me!” I shouted
“What thing? I just waved in front of you” Rose said angry
“Oh…sorry, I was thinking”
“Yeah… when girls do it, you call it daydreaming and you’re teasing them, but when boys do it… it’s called the hell of a thinking”
“Huh? What got into you? Why are you so angry again?”
“What got into me? As if you don’t know!”
Huh? What the hell is she talking about? How could I know what got her mad?
“What do you mean?”
“Uuhhh… nothing, just forget it!” she said and turned away to leave.
Lily with David came just then.
“What did you do again?” Lily asked ready to scold me.
“Me? Nothing! I was just thinking, and then she got mad out of nowhere”
“Oh… thinking huh?” Dave asked.
“Yeah THINKING!”
“And were you thinking while looking to THAT direction?” he asked pointing on the right.
“Why would it matter where I was looking while thinking?” I said and turned to see to the direction where David was pointing at. Oh My God! Oli was sitting there! She waved at me!
“Hello Oli” I said. She was as stunning as everyday! She was wearing a beautiful pink shirt that was brightening her eyes.
“Hello Joe” she said and smiled.
“I love her T-Shirt, but wasn’t she wearing a yellow T-Shirt this morning?”
“I don’t think so princess” David said looking at where Oli was.
‘Oh well… I may have gotten confused” she said, rolled her eyes and left.
“Go ask her out” David said, poked me and left me there unprotected.
What the hell Joe?! Can’t you hold yourself and go talk to a girl? What’s the worst she could do? Say no? So what? Life goes on… you shouldn’t be scared of stupid stuff like that! Off I go…
“Hey Oli… how are you?”
“I’m good”
“I was just wondering, maybe you would like to go for a walk with me tomorrow?”
“Oh… sounds good Joe” she smiled at me.
“Really? I mean… great… how about going for pizza? Do you know the pizzeria ‘El Palacio’ ?”
“Yes… I know it and pizza sounds great”
“Amazing… I’ll be waiting for you at the corner of the pizzeria”
“I’ll see you there at 7 then?”
“Yep, see ya” I said and left.
I couldn’t believe that I’d actually managed to ask Oli out… terrific… now all I have to do is wait for tomorrow.
“So… how did it go?” Lily asked when we were getting out of class at the end of the day.
“How did what go?”
“The Oli thing of course!”
“Oh… quite well, we’re going out tomorrow evening”
“Yey, that’s great Joe, I’m happy for you” she said, gave me a quick hug and left.
On my way to the gates I saw Oli… she smiled at me so I thought I’d say something.
“I’ll see you tomorrow” I said.
“Tomorrow?” she asked me and she really seemed confused.
“Yes… tomorrow, pizzeria ‘El Palacio’ at 7, in the corner of the shop?!” I said worrying if it was actually a no earlier and not a yes.
“Oh yes… right, see you tomorrow then” she smiled and left.
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySat Mar 06, 2010 5:24 pm

There's something odd about that Oli-girl Suspect
Joe's thoughts are cute you know Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySat Mar 06, 2010 8:39 pm

I was thinking the same... Why she doesn't "remember" their meeting...? Suspect
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySat Mar 06, 2010 8:59 pm

Maybe she has the memory of a fish..?
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySat Mar 06, 2010 9:36 pm

or maybe she have twin sis or something
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySat Mar 06, 2010 10:05 pm

No wonder she has two different shirts! Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySun Mar 07, 2010 10:38 pm

hahahahahaahahah xD You're funny girls xD
Actually Oli is one of my besties xD She asked me to name the char after her xD So it was obvious she would be weird xDDDD

I have the next part ready... I'm gonna wait for a week till I post it though Razz To let you think about it Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySun Mar 07, 2010 10:43 pm

You are meanie Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySat Mar 13, 2010 5:06 pm

Part 13

The only thing I could hope for now was that tomorrow would come fast and smoothly.
And tomorrow came faster than I had expected. Time went by as quickly as it had never had, and by 6:30 I was already ready for my date.
I was standing there, in the corner of the pizzeria ‘El Palacio’ at exactly 6:50 with a flower in my hand. I knew girls liked flowers so I thought it would be a good start if I gave her one. I was looking up and down, right and left trying to figure out where she was going to come from and I was… starting to getting… dizzy? What? Come on… boys don’t get dizzy! But… why where there two Olis standing in front of me?
“Hey Joe” they said simultaneously.
“Hi… girl…s?”
“Joe? Are you ok? You look a bit pale… did you see a ghost or something?”
“Yeah… why are there two of you?”
“What? Joe? You didn’t know?”
At that time several terrifying thoughts ran through my mind. Aliens? Witches? Crazy scientist dad who cloned his daughter just a few hours ago? Trying to think what would happen next. Will there be more Olis coming out from the corner in a few moments? Would they destroy the world and make it an Oli domination? Would they eat me or turn me into a frog to use my legs and heart in a potion to make the perfect prince fall in love with them? Or would they just kidnap me and get me to their planet to become their guinea pig?
“Know… what… exactly?”
“You are kidding right?”
Now I’d started sweating, I looked around with the corner of my eye and realized there were no people around us or walking down the street. had she arranged all this?
“Joe? And we’d thought you were a smart boy”
“Huh? I am a smart boy, I just don’t get THIS.” I said pointing at them.
“Joe… TWINS”
“Huh? What’s that?”
They looked at me with their one eyebrow raised.
“OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”
“Jee… Joe… you’re such a boy”
“Wait, then if you’re twins, and if you are Oli, then what’s YOUR name?”
“She’s Mary and you just got us mixed up, I’m Oli”
“Sorry”
‘It’s ok, wanna go for the pizza or you’ve regretted it?”
“No, no let’s go. It will be fun”
I was so relieved that it was that simple and not any witch and wizardry stuff. I mean.. I really should stop playing LineAge… my brain gets burnt. Anyway… at least the rest f the night was cool, and we had lots of fun with the girls. they’re both amazing, and I honestly think I was wrong… I may not be in love with them/her after all… but I sure am fancy of them!
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySat Mar 13, 2010 6:32 pm

Guinea pig? Laughing Talking about an overdose of videogames xD

Awesome part Dimi
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 5 EmptySat Mar 13, 2010 7:57 pm

Oh, so they were twins. What a Face
Funny part indeed Laughing
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