Nightmare ~Part 22

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nice part Mar! continue!!!

I'll try to finish part 6 soon, I need to make a list first

Part 6


Alex sighed and unlocked the door of his apartment. It was in the center of Quebec, and a few blocks away from the park. The interrogations with Katelyn’s friends weren’t really a big help. She was loved by the majority of her classmates and teachers, a good student, and didn’t made trouble at all. Of course she’d argues or fights with a boy when they broke up, but never so bad that the bloke could kill her. Quickly he flipped through the mail. Rental bill, car bill, ads for diet pills, and some letters for Elena. One was posted in Valencia. Her sister was the only person who knew about the reason why Elena had left Spain. Ínes wrote every now and then. Alex had met her once; at their wedding. Elena had been abused sexually by her dad since she was fourteen. After she had finished her study journalism, and French, she had stuffed all she could carry in a few bags and left. He laid the mail on the black coffee table and sat down behind the piano. Softly he began to play Suici De Pression. He closed his eyes, and let the music take him. Tears rolled over his cheeks. Hours and hours he had been holding them back, but now he could let his emotions take control of him. Suddenly the phone rang. Alex swallowed and opened his eyes. He took the phone and answered. ‘Alex Gaudet.’
‘Bonjour handsome!’ A smile came onto his face, while tears were still flowing. Elena.. ‘Hey babe. How are you?’ He wiped some of the tears away with the back of his right hand. ‘Had to climb into a tree to get some privacy.. Further I’m ok. And you?’ Alex laughed a bit. ‘I’m fine too.. Only working on a terrible case..’ He sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose. ‘Who got killed this time?’ Why was she always so damn curious? ‘Kate.. Katelyn..’ He could hear her holding her breath. ‘Díos mio.. Cariño, do you want me to come back? I’m done with interviewing. Jonathan can handle the photos himself.’ He shook his head. ‘I’ll survive, don’t worry. I want you to stay there. Enjoy of Argentina, ok?’
‘Are you sure about that? You know I don’t mind coming home..’ Her voice was worried. ‘Babe, listen. I’m 30, and I can cook, and clean, and do the laundry. I’ll handle it. As long as Carol doesn’t find out, it will be fine. Nicole and Ken will look after me, and save my ass from stupid things, promised. You go and make Córdoba unsafe. Show Jonathan your sexy moves, I want to see his face.’ He smiled. ‘Well, my sexy moves are only meant to be seen by you, you know that.. Ok, I will stay, promised. But, I’ll stay on the phone until you go to sleep. Come on, into the bedroom now!’ Alex laughed, and walked into their bedroom. ‘Good boy. See, you can be a good boy!’ He heard Elena chuckle at the other side of the line. ‘Ok, and now?’ He looked around in the room. ‘Lay down.’ He smiled. ‘Mmm.. I think I know what will happen next..’ He crawled onto the bed, and laid down. ‘Oh, you do? Hmm.. Close your eyes, imagine me to be there..’ Alex smiled and closed his eyes. ‘Are they closed?’ Alex chuckled. ‘Yes, they’re closed. You just walked into the room, walking to me, crawling onto the bed.’ Elena laughed lightly. ‘Good. I crawl onto the bed, and begin to unbutton your jeans..’ Alex smiled. ‘Ugh.. I have to go sweety.. Pierre wants to call his wife as well, and this is apparently the only phone here.’ He heard she was a bit irritated. ‘babe, that’s ok. It was good to hear your voice. I miss you, and I love you.’ Her voice softened. ‘I love you too. Bye handsome, try to behave.’ Alex laughed. ‘I will, you too. Bye Elle.’ And they hung up. Alex stared at the ceiling. The silence was rude interrupted by the sound of his growling stomach. ‘Guess it’s dinner-time.’ He smiled and patted his stomach. ‘Hold on mate, I’ll see if there’s something eatable around here.’ He got up, and walked into the kitchen. Quickly he pulled some pans out of the cupboards and some vegetables out of the fridge. ‘Look, we have cauliflower.’ Quickly he cleaned it, boiled it, together with some potatoes, and prepared a piece of chicken breast. Soon his dinner was ready. He grabbed a plate, and a fork, and ladle out some of the food on the plate. With a soda can in his hand, and the plate and fork in his other, he walked into the livingroom. Alex sat down on the couch, turned the TV on, and ate while watching the 8PM news.


Again small, I know.. Big parts aren't really coming now.. :\

The song Alex plays: Suici De Pression

It was perfect part...don't worry

Aww.. thank you

Nice story!!!! Cant wait to know who the killer is

Thanks Dimitra (:
You have to wait a bit before I reveal it

awww...love it!

Thanks Oly

When's the next part here?

When I finished it I've been on vacation for 10 days, and got some ideas, but I'll have to work it out

Cool!

Part 7


‘Hey Alex.’ Nicole greeted him when he walked into the office. It was one large room with four desks. In the eastern wall was a door, which led to Carol’s office. Alex smiled and sat down. ‘Morning Nicole.’ Nicole smiled. ‘You look much better. Did you sleep well?’ He shrugged his left shoulder. ‘I woke up frequently during the night, stayed awake for about 30 minutes, and fell asleep again. I kept on thinking who’d want to kill Katelyn..’ He sighed. ‘Maybe someone from Tom’s work? We’ll interrogate his colleagues today, ok?’ Alex nodded: ‘Good idea.’ He got up and walked into the break room. The coffee pot was standing on the draining board, waiting for him. Quickly he poured himself a mug and walked back to his desk. ‘Is Elena still in Argentina?’ Nicole asked. Alex nodded while sipping from his coffee. ‘She called yesterday. Elle had to climb in a tree to get some privacy, and just when it got nice, she had to go. Apparently they have only one phone there..’ He smiled cheeky. ‘Fun huh? I bet she made you forget about what happened yesterday.’ Nicole said and laughed. ‘Yup. She wanted to come home earlier, but I told her to stay. I have you and Ken to keep me rational.’ Nicole nodded. ‘If you want, I can come and stay over at your place. Rick will understand it..’ She looked worried at him. Alex shook his head. ‘No. You stay in your own house with Rick. And don’t argue with me Nicole Éthier. It will be fine, ok? Just a few days, and Elle will come back home. Trust me, I’ll survive.’ He smiled. Nicole sighed. ‘Stubborn pig..’ she muttered and sipped from her coffee. Alex made a face. ‘Fine.. But you can always call me, ok?’ Alex nodded. Nicole smiled mischievous. ‘Ok, where are you thinking about?’ Alex asked, eyes twinkling, his voice light. ‘About how much fun we’ll have during the coming interrogations. Come, let’s go.’ She got up, grabbed her jacket from the back of her chair, and shove her badge on her belt. She went with her hand through her hair. ‘Do I look good enough for them?’ she asked. Alex laughed and walked to the elevator. Nicole smiled and followed him. ‘Do you think that one of the colleagues did it?’ Nicole asked, and looked at him. Alex shrugged. ‘I have no idea. Tom isn’t a guy who gets into a fight easily..’ Nicole nodded. Soon they arrived at the basement/garage. The doorman was sitting in his little office. ‘Morning Chris.’ The guy nodded, and flipped the page of his newspaper. They walked to the car. It was a Lexus RX300. It was property of their unit, and every couple had one. The one of Jim and Bob was black, and their’s was dark blue. Usually they took Alex’ car, but Carol rather had that they used this one. ‘Who drives?’ Alex asked. Nicole shrugged her right shoulder. ‘You can. I drove yesterday.’ They got inside, and Alex took off. Soon they arrived at the building where Mr. Hollet worked. They walked to the reception. Alex flashed his ID, and threw one of his gorgeous smiles to the woman. Nicole felt sorry for her. The woman blushed a deep red. ‘My name is detective Gaudet, and this is my partner, detective Éthier. We are here because of a murder investigation on the daughter of one of the employees. Could you call your boss that we’re here?’ The woman nodded, and picked up the phone. Alex raised an eyebrow to Nicole, who shrugged. How do I have to know if the guy will be stupid enough to let us in? ‘You are allowed to go, sir. Fourth floor.’ She didn’t looked at Nicole. She rolled her eyes, and walked to the elevator. Alex thanked the woman, and followed his partner. They listened to the dull elevator tune, and got out on the fourth floor. Together they walked to the work floor of Thomas Hollet. ‘I bet for $5 that someone will run.’ Nicole said. Alex laughed. ‘Deal.’ They shook hands, and opened the floor. There were two things which were noticed by Alex:
1) Thomas wasn’t there,
And 2) When both had showed their ID, and told they were from the police, one of the guys jumped up, and ran away.
Nicole and Alex looked at each other, and Nicole ran off. Alex raised his eyebrow, and went to the workstation of the man. He chuckled dryly, and shook his head. Soon Nicole came back, the man handcuffed. ‘Never ever purchase a suspect on high heels. I broke the heel of one of them.’ She sighed annoyed and threw the guy on a chair. ‘Let’s bring him down to the office Nicole. We need to have a little chat with him.’ Alex said, and grinned a bit devilish. Nicole smiled. When he grinned like that, there would be fun. She nodded, and they brought him to the car.

Ooooh, I've finally read all the parts! (:
I have to say, I couldn't write anything like that or it would ask pretty much time and thinking.. But you have managed to write it very well. Congrats for that!
Can't wait for more..!

Thank you heli. You have no idea how grateful I am for authors like Kathy Reichs, Stephen King and so on Oh, and for the best thing ever made, television

Great part

Thanks Katja (:

Good to see you again, I missed you..

Awww...but it's good to be back

Part 8


‘I didn’t do anything!’ Alex flipped through a file, lying between him and the suspect. ‘Oh, you did. You broke the heel of my partner’s shoe, and now she’ll be cranky all day. Thanks a lot.’ Alex said, and sipped from his coffee. Sweat beamed above the eyebrows of the suspect. Nicole walked inside. She threw a bunch of photos in front of the suspect’s nose. ‘Emily, 8 years old. Angela, 10 years old. Katie, 7 years old. Annie, 6 years old, and I can go on much longer if I want. What kind of sick creature are you?’ She sat down, and narrowed her eyes. The man swallowed nervous. ‘Ok, ok! I confess! Yes, I have porn on my work computer.’ Both detectives remained quiet. The man shove the photos away from him. ‘Well, that’s new..’ Nicole said, and chuckled. Alex nodded, still looking serious. ‘Good, I think we can give him to Valens. He’ll know what to do with him.’ Nicole nodded. Alex shove the file towards the man. ‘Take a damn good look at her. If you help us, I might be able to help you.’ The man looked at the autopsy photo of Katelyn. ‘Do you recognize her?’ The man nodded. ‘Yes, that’s Katelyn, Tom’s daughter. What happened?’ He looked from Nicole to Alex. ‘Someone stabbed her. Any idea who would want to do that? Does Mr. Hollet have any enemies?’ Nicole asked. The man shook his head. ‘Look, Mr.. Anderson. If you don’t help us, we can’t help you.’ Alex said, and closed the file. ‘I told you what I know! Tom is a great man, everyone carries him away. Maybe some of my colleagues dislike him. Tom’s good in what he does, I have to agree. But that is no reason to kill his daughter, rather one to kill Tom himself.’ Anderson said, and shrugged. Nicole and Alex exchanged a glance. ‘Who would be able to kill Mr. Hollet?’ Nicole asked. ‘Oh, a few..’ Anderson said, and lent back in his chair. ‘Write them down.’ Alex shove a note block towards him, together with a pen. He got up. ‘I’ll call Valens.’ Nicole nodded, and Alex walked out of the room. He quickly grabbed his cell phone. ‘Brandon? Yes, hello, Alex Gaudet here. I got something for you. Not exactly no. He ran away when Éthier and I went to question some of the colleagues of the father of a homicide victim. No. He’s in interrogation 1, together with Nicole. Ok, yes. Bye Brandon. See you soon.’ And he hung up. He grabbed a new cup of coffee, and filled one for Nicole as well. They would have to go back to ITLT to continue what they couldn’t even begin. He walked back into the room, and gave Nicole her coffee. ‘Valens will be here soon to get Anderson.’ Nicole nodded. She got up, and left Anderson alone. Soon Brandon Valens walked to them. ‘Hey Gaudet! You told me you got somethin’ for me?’ Alex nodded. ‘Your present is waiting in room 1. Make sure he leaves the note block there. I need it.’ Alex said. Brandon laughed and nodded. ‘I’m going to take my sneakers from my locker. Walking on socks isn’t really good for my image..’ She wiggled her toes. Alex and Brandon both laughed. ‘Broke your heel?’ Nicole rolled her eyes. ‘No, I scratched your mother’s eyes out with it. God Brandon, duh! That guy there ran away. You owe me $5 Gaudet.’ Brandon grinned. ‘I’d better get the guy before Nicole will hurt me.’ He walked into the room. Alex let his hands slid in his pockets. ‘Sorry Nicky, you’ll get it soon. I left my wallet in my car.’ Nicole nodded, and walked away. Alex grinned. She looked weird, walking on her socks. He quickly walked to his car to get his wallet. Nicole was reading the list Anderson had written down. ‘Anyone we really should check out?’ Nicole shrugged. ‘Didn’t had a chance to run them through AFIS, sorry. Got my money?’ Alex laughed, and laid the five-dollar bill in her open hand. ‘Thanks, I might get my shoe repaired with it.’ Alex smiled, and sat down. Carmine came walking inside. ‘Hey pal. Found a suspect yet? Wow, at the length of your list, more than one..’ Nicole shook her head. ‘Possible suspects Carmine. We still need to do research.’ Carmine pulled a chair away from Bob’s desk, and sat down. ‘I ran a couple of blood tests on the vic. Clean. No drugs, alcohol. Not even medication. I tested the sand found in her bedroom, and as I thought, it’s sand out of the garden. No fibers of the killer’s clothes found. The knife didn’t left anything except the wound. I’m sorry guys.. this guy’s a pro.’ Alex shook his head. ‘The perfect crime doesn’t exist, Carmine. I thought you knew that?’ ‘Well, yeah! But this guy leaves no marks. Her blood’s clean, there are no signs of a struggle, no fibers of clothes, no fingerprints, no nothing! He only left a footprint. Do you know how many people wear Chuck and Taylor’s? And how many wear that particular size? Nearly half Montreal wears size 8 Alex! I really hate this guy.’ Carmine threw the file on Nicole’s desk, and sighed. ‘I know mate, I know. But there’s one guy out there with the knife and the shoes, and we will catch him, no matter what, ok? Ok?’ Carmine nodded. ‘Good.’ Alex smiled. Carmine got up. ‘I have tons of work to do. Later guys.’ He rushed off again. ‘Weird guy..’ Nicole muttered. Alex chuckled. ‘Weird, but the best one we have Nicky.’ Nicole rolled her eyes. ‘Oh, before I forget.. I need to ask Carol something.’ She got up, and walked away. Before disappearing into the office of their boss she turned around. ‘I have a date planned for tonight.’ She grinned and walked inside. Alex crossed his arms behind his head. He would have one hell of a date as well, only this one was unplanned..

Great part as always

Aww... Thanks Katja (:

Part 9



He sipped from his tea. His wife wasn’t home. She had a ladies-night out with her friends. He smiled, and took the last sip of tea. The radio was playing quietly on the background. He yawned, and stretched his arms. ‘Bedtime..’ He turned around. If he only knew what was waiting for him.. Just when he wanted to walk to the kitchen, a black shade caught his attention. He frowned. ‘Who is there? Dorothy? Is that you?’ He walked back. The shadow made a step forward, into the light. ‘Hello Anthony.’ The shadow smirked, his blue eyes twinkled. ‘Who are you? What do you want?’ He looked suspicious at the man in front of him. ‘Does it matter who I am or what I want Tony?’ Tony froze. How could this moron know about his nickname? ‘Oh, I know everything about you.’ In his eyes shined something. Tony recognized it; madness. Pure, uncontrollable madness, together with animalistic rage. It reminded him of all the criminals he’d caught. Tony walked backwards, into the livingroom. He felt the back of his chair against his legs. The man came closer. Tony’s heart sped up. ‘You, my dearest Tony, are part of my plan. And since you’re about to die, I think I might be able to tell you.’ He smirked. ‘You have been very, very stupid Anthony, very stupid.’ His voice sounded like he was going to punish Tony. ‘You, and that stupid little friend of yours. Now it’s time for payback.’ He laughed, and suddenly Tony faced the shiny metal blade of his death. The stranger smiled devilish. Adrenaline rushed through his veins. No matter how many times he would stab someone to dead, it would always give him some sort of rush, like he was on high. He played with the knife. ‘You can kiss this world goodbye Tony.’ His humorous voice had turned into a mean, hard one. This guy was a psychopath.. The man caressed Tony’s throat with the sharp tip of the knife. A grin formed on his face again. He removed the knife from his throat. ‘Wait! What.. What do you want? We can talk about it. Please, I have a wife.. Children!’ His begging wasn’t making any difference for what he had planned to do with him. ‘What I want, Tony, is to destroy him, take away what he loves so much, like he did with me. And that means that I’ll have to kill you.’ He said it like he was going to the park with his best friends. A chill ran down his spine. This man was more than psychotic, he was a complete insane.. The man stabbed the shiny blade quickly in his chest. A slight ‘oh!’ escaped his mouth, together with his last breath. The stranger enjoyed of the confused expression on his face, mixed with fear. He could smell it in the air. He inhaled it deeply; his favorite scent. He pulled his knife back, and watched him die. The hollow look taking over his eyes, seeing how the dead body fell down on the floor, staring at him without seeing a thing. He laughed and left. Part of the landscape, part of a nightmare.

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