| *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! | |
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Dimitra Administrator
Number of posts : 1208 Age : 31 Τόπος : Thessaloniki Greece Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sat Oct 24, 2009 4:47 pm | |
| I think I'll like a bad ending or a good ending the same!!! Can't wait to know what will happen | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sat Oct 24, 2009 5:32 pm | |
| hihi Mar! that's my payment for your story! Dimitra are you sure?? thanks for your comments girlitas!xD | |
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katjuzka
Number of posts : 873 Registration date : 2009-01-01
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sat Oct 24, 2009 5:35 pm | |
| you really know how to write | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
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Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Τόπος : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
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Dimitra Administrator
Number of posts : 1208 Age : 31 Τόπος : Thessaloniki Greece Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sat Oct 24, 2009 6:00 pm | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sat Oct 24, 2009 8:12 pm | |
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Dimitra Administrator
Number of posts : 1208 Age : 31 Τόπος : Thessaloniki Greece Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sat Oct 24, 2009 8:20 pm | |
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Heli
Number of posts : 392 Age : 33 Registration date : 2009-06-22
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:43 pm | |
| - Dimitra wrote:
You should be effected by me... write what you want to write... I just say I don't have a problem either way you finish it!
And btw...when the next part? xD i will! you just made me consider what will be like the other side-end =P i don't know yet.. i have to write it first =] - Heli wrote:
- ugh, that wasn't nice at all..
Can't wait for the next part thanks?..xD | |
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Dimitra Administrator
Number of posts : 1208 Age : 31 Τόπος : Thessaloniki Greece Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sun Oct 25, 2009 5:59 pm | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:53 pm | |
| hahaha yeah i knew that you meant NOT effected! that's why i replied that way xD | |
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Dimitra Administrator
Number of posts : 1208 Age : 31 Τόπος : Thessaloniki Greece Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Wed Oct 28, 2009 3:54 pm | |
| I like it that we understand each other even when we mean other things xD | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sat Oct 31, 2009 2:49 am | |
| hehehehe that is because i know the style of your answers (i don't know if that makes any sense xD) and sometimes somethings are kinda obvious | |
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Dimitra Administrator
Number of posts : 1208 Age : 31 Τόπος : Thessaloniki Greece Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:54 pm | |
| Doesn't make sense
Τι εννοείς? | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:28 pm | |
| lol
τάχα ξέρω ένα περίπου πως απαντάς και με πια λογική και ξέρω ότι δεν θα το έγραφες εκείνο κατάλαβες? επειδή μετά δε θα εβγαζε νόημα, δεν θα ήταν του χαρακτήρα σου, πως να το πω. xD | |
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Dimitra Administrator
Number of posts : 1208 Age : 31 Τόπος : Thessaloniki Greece Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sun Nov 01, 2009 3:10 pm | |
| Ohhh... got it got it | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Sun Nov 01, 2009 5:22 pm | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:59 pm | |
| next part girls!! wow!! xDD
Part 28
I got into my room and closed the door behind me. I turned my back and stand against the door as my feet were giving up till I sat on the floor. Then it happened just as quickly as David words were. I started sobbing and sobbing till I haven’t any other tears. I started groping in my pockets for his letter. When I found it I read it one more time and without thoughts I tore it up into thousands of pieces. But that didn’t help.. I needed something better.. I couldn’t just sit there and crying, I wasn’t that weak! I needed something or someone to tell me that all these things I had heard weren’t true, I needed him to tell me face to face what his feeling was for real and if all those things were true! I needed to see him, even if that was gonna make me feel worst in the end. Just for the last time.. I stood up and moved forward to the open window. There was no way I could pass in front of my family and leave from the front door; I had to be more risky that moment. I looked down the floor outside “it’s not so high” I thought and then I remembered the first night Eric came to my place Pote min les Pote, that’s what he had told me- which means never say never- so that’s what I had to do now! Be risky but not for my pleasure, it was more for my mental safety. I climbed on my window and sat there, I hope there isn’t any neighbor outside this moment because he’ll definitely think that I’m crazy or worst, he’ll think that I was grounded and now I’m making my escape so he’s gonna call my dad. So I have to hurry! I thought, then I closed my eyes and jumped through my window. It wasn’t really high the truth is but I got hurt a little in my hands from the landing. I was a bit proud of myself that I had managed to escape from my house without any help! I just wished the reason wasn’t for what I was planning to do next.. I arrived at Eric’s house and thank God he was already outside so I wouldn’t need to go inside and had to face Mr. Banner.. that would be worse knowing that he knew all about it from the first time, that’s why he was warning me.. I felt another punch in my chest. Everyone knew except me.. Eric saw me and ran towards me “Carol! Hey what are you doing here?” He came with his breathtaking smile and stood in front of me, he was a bit confused, he didn’t kiss me or hug me I guess he noticed my bad mood. The thing that I wasn’t prepared for was his words, what “what are you doing here” means?? I didn’t speak, I was so angry with his ease that I wanted to cry! But I didn’t! I needed to talk.. I just didn’t know how.. “Are you ok?” he asked still confused “did you like the necklace?” he added smiling. “Oh yeah! That was intelligent; buy me over to keep me silent, that was very clever of you!” I said furious and took off the shiny necklace and I gave it to his hand abruptly “here, I don’t need it anymore!” “What do you mean?” he asked confused and a bit annoyed. “You don’t need to pretend anymore Eric! I know everything, everything! You can bring up yourself now!” I shouted. “What…? Carol what you are saying?!” “When would be the right time to tell me that your sister, Amy, killed herself because of Ryan? When would be the right time to tell me that you are blaming my brother and that you came in Capitola for revenge and only! That you didn’t love me and the only thing you wanted from me was revenge?” A gasp came out of my mouth saying that and my eyes got full of tears. He was shocked and speechless for a bit his eyes were bright open and when he spoke he wasn’t confused any more, he knew that I knew. “How do you know about that?” he asked still shocked and furious. I gasped “This is the only thing you have to say?” tears rolled down my cheek and I hated myself for not being as strong as I wanted me to be. He didn’t speak he just shook his head and after one minute he said “Carol who told you about Amy?” “How do you think I know? From my brother of course.. he told me everything!” I said through tears. “Okay then..” he sounded relieved “Do you want to come inside so we can talk calmly?” he offered his hand. “No I don’t! jeez!” I shouted “how could you Eric? How could you do that to me? After all these things I told you, after all these moments we have been through?! How could you treat me like that?” I was shouting and sobbing, all these thoughts I had before came to my mouth like a rush, I wanted to say so much more but I couldn’t; my whole body was shaking. “Carol no, it’s not what you think..i love you..” he begun to say “And you expect me to buy that?” “Yes! Because I can explain everything to you, just give me a minute, come inside please” he offered again his hand but I pushed it away and it hurt my wounded hand. “Ouch!” Ugh.. “Are you ok?” he asked worried “what happened to your hand?” he got closer to me and touched my arm. “Don’t touch me!” I shouted angrily and made a step back “I came here only to hear from you that all these things are true, I didn’t want to believe any of David’s words but now I know…” “Carol no, this is wrong! I thought I knew, listen, I came here for revenge indeed, that was my first thought but then I met you and everything changed! I’m not saying that I didn’t know who you were – of course I knew but after I met you I started looking more to the clews I had and I realized that your brother hadn’t anything to do with my sister’s death, I found some mails Amy had with your brother and he was telling her that he didn’t like Ryan and he was about to quit being in his pack. I understood that he really had feelings about my sister and that he would do anything to protect her! After that I tried to calm myself down and think.. but Ryan was in town, he knew the reason why I had come, Ben had told him, he was trying to find a way to make me leave town and he had been informed that we were together so he was threatened me that you would be the next if I wasn’t giving up. I didn’t want to leave, I wanted to fight, he is a murderer, he killed my sister Carol!” he said furious and desperate at the same time. Another punch in my chest, my throat was closed, I couldn’t breathe I gulped so I could keep myself away from another sobbing “So you stayed even though you knew that he would harm me?” again a tear escaped from my eye. “He wouldn’t! Since then you have been with me all the time! I haven’t left you once, Carol please believe me.. I really love you..” he made a step closer, his one hand touched my shoulder and the other rise my chin to look him in the eyes- though mine was so full of tears that I could see nothing. I shook his hand off “w-why… why y-you didn’t t-talk to me w-when I asked you?” “Because I was afraid you wouldn’t listen and you would go away from me.. I was stupid I know, but I was just too scared of that possibility” Before he finished I was shaking my head “I just wanted to know the truth” “I know… and I’m sorry, I’m so sorry Carol I didn’t want to hurt you, I love you!” he said taking softly my hands and he got closer. I was about to give up and forget everything as I closed my eyes and shivered from his warm touch but then a voiced broke the silence around us… “Let go off her now!” | |
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katjuzka
Number of posts : 873 Registration date : 2009-01-01
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Mon Dec 21, 2009 4:45 pm | |
| Awww so cute But that someone came on wrong moment...and i think i know who that someone is.Of course i'm not sure about that... | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:01 pm | |
| hihihi sorry i had to interrupt in some way! xD | |
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Dimitra Administrator
Number of posts : 1208 Age : 31 Τόπος : Thessaloniki Greece Registration date : 2008-02-29
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Mon Dec 21, 2009 7:11 pm | |
| Damn that someone... have I ever told you I hate him? xD Can't wait to see how you wrote the next part xD I hope it will come soon | |
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Heli
Number of posts : 392 Age : 33 Registration date : 2009-06-22
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Mon Dec 21, 2009 7:51 pm | |
| I want to know who interrupted them.. I have some ideas but still I would like to know... | |
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xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Τόπος : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Mon Dec 21, 2009 8:25 pm | |
| hahaha Dimitra no you don't! xDD you will see girls, just wait one week i have already written the next part thank you all x x x x | |
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Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Τόπος : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: *Summer Love* <3 <3 / Part 35 / NEW PART EVERYONE!!! Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:55 pm | |
| NOOOO! If that's her brother, Batman will kick his ass | |
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