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We're gonna make a dictonairy here Laughing
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Awwwwwww so cute I love you
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haha yeah Mar that would be perfect!xD

thanks Katja x x x
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Crying crying! crying!!! Crying!! Hearts Ntountouka

That was sooooo great Oly!!!!
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thank you darling! i appreciate that Smile
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Finally I managed to read all the parts! cheers I guess I'm repeating others while saying it (maybe because it's true) but Eric seems to be a perfect guy. I'm not pretty sure if that is a good or a bad thing. Suspect
And since Carol hasn't told anything about him to her parents... Somehow I smell troubles there..
Anyway, I'm waiting for more Wink
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aww thank you so much Heli for reading my story!! Smile
hehe i would say that's a great thing since we don't have such nice guys in our days xD
you will see you will see.. when i write the next part Smile
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Haha, okay Laughing
So, when are you writing more...? What a Face
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i don't know..i must find time and the mood to write so..you have to wait Smile but i will! i'm not gonna leave it! for that i'm sure about xD
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Geez... you have to have the mood... and I had the mood and wrote 2 parts at school (at least I wasn't bored xD) and I don't have time to type them xDDD
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Alright. We'll wait then. (:
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ok as i promised there is the next part! it's a bit long but it's very very interesting..Razz and kinda emotional xD

Part 26

“So that’s it! I’m done!” I hoped on my feet and took my plate into the kitchen sink, then I moved forward to the door “See ya”
“Where are you going?” my mom spoke as they were all still being gathered to the table.
“Um..out! obviously, I’m going to meet the girls..” I answered confused.
“No for today honey, we have to talk about something”
I got more confused “can’t it wait?”
“No”
I sighed. Okay.. That was not the first time that they were playing pesky “Ok then tell me” I said and sat on the chair again impatient.
They were all silent.
“So…?? What is it?” I asked more impatient.
“You have to stay at home” my mom finally spoke after she had looked dad and David.
“Ok.. for how long?”
“For a while”
“Huh? Why?”
“Things got little dangerous for you out there and we have to be aware…It’s not only you, all the parents have these conversation with their daughters right now” mom said little guardedly.
I made a grimace “Mom..i really don’t understand what’re you saying”
“It’s what we talked yesterday Carol. You’re not gonna get hurt with a little abstinence” dad said.
“What??” I shouted and stood up “please tell me that this is not about Ryan! For God’s sake!”
“It is honey! It sounds silly but it’s not! It’s serious! More than we expected.”
“Oh kill me now please!!!!” I shouted.
“Your mother has right Carol, there’re things you don’t know.. and we just learnt about them” dad spoke and looked at David seriously, when their eyes met David looked down miserable.
“What things?” I made an inquisitive look at David and then looked my father.
Mom looked at David.
“Did something happen? Someone got hurt? Is everyone alright?” I shouted anxiously.
“No everyone is ok, nothing happened..not recently at least.. it’s in the past” mom answered.
“oh! So why we have to care so much about?”
“Because it came on the surface now! And concern us all!”
“So what is it! Speak! Someone! I’m not famous for my patience” I yelled one more time.
“It has to do with Ryan and his pack..and Eric” David said almost whispering.
I was way too shocked to concentrate to the question my father made to David when he told Eric’s name. What Eric has to do with all of these?
“What do you mean?” was the only thing I could ask. My father was still confused about the new character in the story.
“I wish I have seen it before, at the first time he came in town but it has been years and I could barely remember him since I had seen him only twice in my life.”
His words was like a rush.. I concentrated so I could catch them all, I didn’t speak and I let him finish.
«It was the summer in 2005 when I used to hanging out with Ryan and his pack (Peter and Joe). The same summer when Eric and his family came to town to spend the holidays. We met him in a bonfire, him and his sister Amy- »
shocked encircled me as the sound of her name sent cold shivers down my back.
«- Eric wasn’t really outgoing, he wasn’t talking too much, just the typical words but Amy was…boy she was different!» David said shaking his head “you could tell that she wasn’t like the other usual girls from town, she was unique! Her laugh, her sense of humor, her knowledge, her confidence, her outstanding beauty even her voice! Everyone loved her that day!”
»Of course Ryan couldn’t just let such an opportunity go, so he soon enough got to know her.» He made a grimace and continued. «We didn’t want a fight with him so we backed off, she was interested too anyway, so we let them be. The one who couldn’t stand his sister’s new boyfriend was Eric, he was younger than her, younger than Ryan but he still had the guts to threaten him thinking that he could protect his sister like that.» David chuckled.
»Two weeks had past and Amy and Ryan were still together, we used to hanging out with them a lot so I got to know her better as time went by, she was really an interesting person, she had her opinion for everything! We became great friends… » he made a miserable face.
»but then.. they had a fight and Amy kept her distance from all of us, at that time some old friends of Ryan came to town, they were those guys who think that they can have whatever they want and do whatever they want, they were rude and we’ve been fighting with them a lot. Peter and Joe decided that they would take a break from all these until they leave and I agreed with them. We kept our distance too but one night, I don’t know how that happened but Amy called me, her voice was trembled I could tell that she was shaking, she was crying. The only thing she said was my name and then she hung up»
He looked at me with bleeding eyes as I was deep in the story. Mom made a short gasp.
»I couldn’t do anything! I didn’t know where she was living, I didn’t know any phone number, the only thing I could do was to go look for Ryan. So I did, he was somewhere near the beach when I found him, he looked terrible like he was drank or something, I got close to him and demanded to know where Amy was.. he didn’t answered me and he was denying everything I was telling him and he was blaming his stupid friends, then I understood.. Whatever Amy had, whatever had happened to her was his fault or theirs!»
»I fought him, it was the first time I was fighting with hate and eager, I wanted to kill him for what he had done. After we finished and we were both bleeding he threatened me that if I ever opened my mouth to give him in he would say that we were together in that. I was too young and too frightened to think clearly, I agreed. I went back home and never talked about that, even if it hurt me.»
Tears were rolling on my eyes as my mom put her hand on her mouth to hold back her sob, dad was listening carefully still serious looking at David who continued..
»The next morning the news said that they found her dead in the bathroom, she took overdose and they couldn’t save her, they said that they found her in awful condition. Nobody talked about it later, she was like any other simple girl whose fate betrayed her.»
»After that I learnt that it had been a case and Ryan was on trial, because according to some people he was the last person she saw, but he managed to take postponement to a year imprisonment and leave town for couple of years. The case closed and Amy’s death became a history, her parents decided to leave Capitola and never come back and the last time I saw her brother was in the funeral.. He wasn’t crying, he wasn’t replying to people’s ‘sorry’ he had that blank face that couldn’t be talked. I tried to talk him after that but he looked at me hatefully and then he left. I had never seen him since that day.. »
»Things changed few days ago when I met Ryan, Peter and Joe again, they were upset about something and they wanted my help. They told me that Eric was in town and he wanted revenge! He had a plan, they were sure about that. They also told me that he met you, and… you were a couple- »
he looked at me half smiling with an apologetic look as dad opened his mouth to speak but David caught him.
«- they said that he was probably using you to take his revenge but I didn’t know why he would do that, I found it unreasonable. But then it came to me the picture of the last day I saw him, his hard face, his hateful look and I understood why he was like that, he knew that I was Ryan’s friend and he knew that Ryan and his pack did that to Amy..he thought that I was responsible for her death as well… that I killed her!»
Mom and dad were breathless, mom touched David’s arm.
»Ryan suggested me being a member of his pack again, now that his brother, Ben, was in it we could ‘fight’ Eric back and win, we would be more- so more powerful- whatever plan he had.»
Mom gasped and David shook his head «I didn’t accept, I know Ryan and I know how he likes to work. Whatever issue he’s got he has to deal with it alone, but I promised myself that I would do something about my issue, and that is you Carol… I wish it was a lie but it isn’t, it makes a sense… I’m sorry I haven’t seen it at the first time but now that I know, forgive me but I won’t allow you see him anymore. Not until I find out what he really thinks and deal with it.»
He was staring at me when he was speaking in order to see my reactions but I really couldn’t react. I should have screamed I should have drowned myself into tears but I did nothing. I was looking at him full of tears trembling from eager and disappointment. If that wasn’t true, it was true, but if it wasn’t true then could I stay with Eric after that story? Could I live with a person that all he wants in his life is revenge that he’s still living in the past? Is this really the reason why he couldn’t tell me all about his past? Because I would be so scared that I would leave him and ruin his plan? All these words, all these promises, all these days we spent together, last night… Have these things meant something to him? Have he ever loved me?
Then everything went black…
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i'm speechless...but on good way...
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Daviiiid! batman

Poor Carol.. I hope it's not true Sad
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Shocked
That's it, I'm quiting my story... I'll dedicate my life to reading whatever you write I love you
That was so COOL!!!!
And exactly how I thought the story would be apart from the revenge part xD I haven't given so much thought to that one xD
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;D thanks so much girls!!! x x x x x x x x x x x x x x

Dimitra don't you dare! i feakin' love your story!!! I love you
you know, i was about to leave that part too but i said "hell why not?!" xD but you will see in the next parts if it's true or not... ;)i think we are getting closer to the end.
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Yaaa right... even I don't like it so much as yours xD
mmm... I think I know if it's true or not xDDD
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shhhhh!!! you say that because you're the one who write the story, i feel the same about mine story- believe it or not i find it boring at some parts!

yeah..it's kinda obvious, isn't it? Rolling Eyes xD
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yaaa right....
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right! ;P
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Suspect Anyway!!! Razz
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Oooh, this is going interesting now! Laughing But poor Carol.. Neutral
Anyway, great part! Wink
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Very Happy thanks Heli!! x x
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Part 27

My head was still spinning, still asking all these unanswered questions. I was feeling like someone stabbed my chest with a knife, I couldn’t breathe. I wish there would be a hole in the ground so I could make myself fall in and never come back, I wish it was a lie, a bad dream, a nightmare, that I could wake up in the morning and everything was in their places again.
I had still my eyes closed though I could hear their voices.
“I shouldn’t have said that to her…” David spoke and I could feel him next to me.
“It was little too much for her..” mom agreed and stroked my hair.
“She must know! And why I didn’t know anything about this story? I thought you were going to tell her what you told us before!” dad said furious.
“Things are more complicated than what you think dad, she had to know the whole story… she has the right”
“I really can’t believe where you two had put yourself into!” mom spoke with trembling voice and squeezed my hand.
“Everything is gonna be ok mom… I will talk to him” David started but dad caught him.
“You’re not gonna do a thing! You have done enough, you and your sister are going to stay away from all these and…”
“Eric…” I whispered unconsciousness I couldn’t tell if that was from inside or out loud.
A long silence.
Then dad spoke a bit louder than before “Who the hell is he anyway? And what Carol has to do with him!”
“Honey, don’t you get it? She’s in love with that boy and he betrayed her” mom’s sad voice sounded calmly.
“You knew it too and you didn’t tell me? She is in a more trouble than she thinks!” he said angrily.
“Dad not now!” David said in the same tone.
“So you are sure,.. about him, you said the only thing he wants is revenge? What if… what if he feels something about her, there’s a chance…”
“What chance mom? He knows her only for 2 and a half months! Even if he hadn’t had any plan even if he hadn’t come for revenge in the first place there would be no way he could love her in so little time! Carol may love him but… I don’t think that he feels the same way about her..” David spoke.
“You could…” mom almost whispered.
“What do you mean?” David and dad asked.
“C’mon Dave, I’m your mother, from the first time you spoke about that girl, Amy, I understood that you had feelings for her.”
David didn’t make a comment about that and I felt mom’s hand leaving mine to place it somewhere else.
“I’m so sorry baby… I wish you had talked that time, to open your heart to me..”
“You couldn’t do anything, nobody could” He answered with hard voice.
“Maybe I couldn’t help her but.. I could help you honey, you’re my son and I can’t stand watching you hurt”
“I’m ok mom.. Carol needs your help now, she is the one in hurt”
I was trying to concentrate in the present, trying to catch their words and to realize that I had woken up and the nightmare had ended but his final words reminded my pain that I had forgotten before, a punch in my chest then in my stomach and finally the knife in my heart..
She is the one in hurt, yes I am, I am hurting too much that I can barely breathe.
She needs your help, no.. I don't! I wish she could but she can’t help me… nobody can.
My thoughts made me realize that I was exactly in the same situation as Amy, she couldn’t help herself, nobody could help her, neither do i… She was hurt…I was hurt, she died… I died.
But the thing is… I was hurt because of her… I have never met her, I don’t know her but because of her… my life had ended.

I moved my head like I wanted this thought to end and then I heard my mom’s voice again.
“Honey you’re awake?”
I opened my eyes to face them. Mom was sitting beside me with her hand on my face, dad standing next to mom and David sitting on the sofa’s arm.
“Oh thank God you’re ok!” mom said and hugged me “you have been like this for about ten minutes!”
“What happened?” I asked with weak voice.
“You passed out” David answered.
“How you feeling?” dad asked worried.
I looked around “I’m ok.. I think, can I stand up?” I looked my mom who moved making place for me to stand on my feet.
I stood up and found my balance, my everything were still hurting though “I need to go outside” I made stepped forward but mom took my hand.
“You shouldn’t…”
Then my dad spoke “Carol, what your brother told you is the one part of the story…-” so there’ s more? “- the fact that really upset everyone is that Ryan’s friends came back to town and they are troublemakers.. I’m sure your friends have been informed about that.”
Oh..
“Ok.. I’ll go to my room then” I said after one minute unemotional.
I made my move towards the stairs and I heard my mom’s voice “I’m sorry honey… we ruined your birthday…” she whispered the last one.
I sighed “I haven’t really given much thought to it…” I murmured without turning back and then I continued my dull steps to my room.
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Noo! They must be happy together, not seperated like this!
Olyy! Not fair.. Sad
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