Comments & Critics about *Summer Love* by Olympia ;)

Feel free to write whatever you want about my story, things that you didn't like, things that you liked, any suggestions, and of course how you pictured my fictional characters!
i'm not gonna be offended i promise

i found a cover for my story, check it out =P

I imagine eric as a combination of Kellan Lutz and Edward Cullen xD
Blond hair, blue eyes, protective, kind, careing.. The perfect man

Exactly what I was thinking of Eric, I imagine him blonda, with perfect blue eyes, perfect body, tall and I usually imagine he's wearing white shirts xD

As for Carol, black hair, long, thin, a bit storter than Eric, eyes brown-green, a combination, a carin' friend, kinda likes fightin' with her bro' and always calmed down.

haha you pass girls!!

Mar you found the protecting, careing,kind and the perfect man xD and yes he is kind of a combination between Edward and Kellan but still he's no blond i would like to imagine him like light brown hair or just brown and his eyes is ocean blue - that's the point! he's unique

Dimitra you found the prefect body, tall , the eyes and... white shirt (???) lol i don't know xD
you found everything for Carol!! yeyyy xD

Yeeeeeyyyyy!!! I'm so happy!!!!!

Yeah white shirt, coz my perfect guys usually wear white shirts, (poukamiso telos pantwn, shirt den einai?)

lol yeah i like white shirts too on men, i first saw Robert Pattinson wearing a white shirt on the set of Twilight - i think they were making the scene where he and Bella were dancing in his room- he was sooooo cute! so hot!!! but then they changed his clothes to a blue shirt..
anyway, from that day i loooove white shirts too! xD (nai, shirt legete to poukamiso xD )

No white shirts for me xD More.. dark blue, perhaps purple..? Or black shirts -the ones with buttons. well, yeah, I dunno why I picture him with blond hair xD
And I thought Carol would have dark brown hair, straight, green or gray-blue-ish eyes. She's a daydreamer, not that out going, but fond of having a good time with her gals. Her family means a lot to her, although she wishes not to have the pain-in-the-ass-brother every now and then.

yeah..well i had pictured from the first how Carol would look like and i always admire girls with black hair and light eyes(green, blue,hazel) like Lana in "Smallville" !! she's so beautiful

DAVID


JESSICA


LISA



that's how i imagined them, tell me what you think

I kinda imagined David allios >.>

But the othrs are nice ^^

xDD but why?.. he's so cute!

I know he is... I just imagined him kinda like him --> http://www.bscreview.com/wp-content/gallery/vampire-diaries/vampire-diaries-pics7.jpg

OMG WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME???!!!!! I FREAKIN LOVE HIM! HE'S SO DAMN HOT!
áëëÜ äåí èá ôïí Ýâáæá ãéá David ãéáôß ìïõ êÜíåé ðïëý.. ðùò íá ôï ðù.. áíáßóèçôïò êáé in pain! xD óõíÞèéóá ôï ÷áñáêôÞñá ôïõ óôï VD êáé äåí ìðïñþ íá ôïí äù óáí David!

but i'm thinking about an other role he may be good at!

What role? tell me tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

he's soooooo cute!!! I prefer him from Damon and... em... what's the other guy's name? Oh stephan yes xD

hahaha i don't know yet.. i have to download a photoshop first and then when i'll do some changes i will tell you

oh yes!!! i prefer him from all the guys in the series!!! ahhh... ôï Ý÷åé ï Üôéìïò,, áõôï ôï êÜôé!<3

íáé ñåå... åßíáé ôÝëåéïïïòòò!!! èÝëù Ýíá bf óáí êáé áõôüïïí xD

teeelll meeeeee *puppy eyes*

ahh êáé ôé äåí èá Ýäéíá ãéá åíá bf óáí ê áõôüí..=/

ok if you insist!.. i'm thinking about Eric.. but i really want a photoshop so i can change his eyes and some other things!!!

kai gw >.<

AAAAAAAaaaa kale... ela emena ti me exeis??? ^^
Photoshop thingies to me por favor :p

haha aaaaa alitheia?? mporeis na tou alakseis kapia xaraktiristika?? ti photoshop exeis?

to CS3

nomizw oti mporw na alla3w to xrwma twn matiwn... e3artati ti alla xaraktiristika 8es xD

dn kserw.. merikes ateleies, epd ipame, prepei na einai teleios! xD alla kirios ta matia!

tadaaa!!! here is all the character in my story and how i imagined them to be! i hope you like them

Carol


Eric


David (Carol's bro)


Ryan (Ben's big bro. he's the bad guy in the story)


Amy (Eric's dead sister)


Lisa (Carol's BFF)


Jessica (Carol's BFF)


Mike (Carol's friend and Jessica's bf)


Ben (Ryan's little bro and Carol's ex-bf )


Joe (Ryan's friend)


Peter (Ryan's friend)


Alex (one of the troublemakers, Ryan's friend and one of the boys who are responsible for Amy's death)



Jake (the other troublemaker, Ryan's friend and he's responsible for Amy's death too)


Sarah -Carol's mom


John - Carol's dad


Justin - one of the twins (Eric's cousin)


Merry - Justin's twin sister (Eric's cousin)


Emily - Ben's gf (she doesn't show up in the story but i mentioned her in two parts so.. xD )



tell me if you like them and if they are just like you imagined them. plus please if you don't like Eric just tell me i won't get offended or anything, he's the main character in the story and i wanted him to be perfect. of course i didn't found one perfect but i like that actor i think he's hot and beautiful and he fits with the character i made. anyway if you don't like him tell me

ps. did i forget someone except Eric's uncle? (i'm still looking for him)

Is it just me or does Eric's eyes look Photoshoped
They all look amazing, and some exactly like I pictured them

hahaha they are photoshoped! Dimitra made them:) actually i have change a lot of things on all of them!

The Ryan dude, he seems familiar.. Didn't he play in Twilight? Cam someting..