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Heli

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PostSubject: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySat Sep 26, 2009 9:36 pm

I thought to start this topic finally, since everybody else has done the same already...
Here are some helping questions if you don't know where to start. Laughing
What do you think about the whole story?
Positive/negative sides?
What do you think about Pete? Why he is teasing Eve so much?
How do you think Eve is going to revenge Pete?
...

And I'm also open to any critique about it. I know I'm not a perfect writer so sometimes hearing something negative is also welcome. I've noticed that mainly everybody are saying only the good sides of the story (I know I'm doing that myself too..) but negative sides stay hidden. I guess it's because nobody wants to hurt anybody here..

What a Face
So, feel free to say anything you want!


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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySat Sep 26, 2009 11:54 pm

The story is truly amazing Heli, don't worry Wink
You've written it in such a way that you're able to inmagine Eve's thoughts, the things she does and why.
I think Pete teases her, coz secretly he has a cruch on him. I also predict Eve will find out and get even to kiss the other guy, Vili or something (My finish sucks, sorry)
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 12:03 pm

Mmmm... the story is really something different, I like the whole concept of the boy-girl she is and how she deals with other's comms about her personal life. I think all of us, in some time of our lives have felt this way... (at least I've been kinda like this, you know, who cares about boys and so on, even though I hate to say I'm not anymore). I like how you let the whole thing out, how you describe the circumstances, although I think I'd like to learn a bit more about Vili's character, he seems to be one of the main characters but we've seen nothing of him yet (here's a kinda negative xD). Mmmm... what else? I think that's all I can think for now... maybe later I'll have more inspiration....xD
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Heli

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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 1:42 pm

Thanks for your opinions! Very Happy

Mar, you're thinking right, some way... Wink

Dimitra, I noticed myself too that I had left Vili to the background even I thought first he would have bigger part of this story. Neutral I guess I'm concentrating now so much what's going on with Eve and Pete so I had to forget Vili for a while. But I promise he will appear more in the future, I've some bigger plans for him.. Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 2:09 pm

Cool, that's what I wanted to hear! Can't wait for that!
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySat May 15, 2010 5:30 pm

So, here are pics I managed to found for some characters.
I'll add later more if I find any.
Dunno if these looks are even near of them what you've imagined... Laughing


Eve:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Eve10

Elina:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Elina10

Timo:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Timo10

Aila, Eve's mom:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Aila10

Pekka, Eve's dad:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Pekka10

And now the most interesting pics I suppose... xD

Vili:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Vili10

Pete:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Pete10

Paula:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Paula11

Liisa:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Liisa11

Mirkku:
Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! Mirkku11

Enjoy! Wink And comments are always welcome.
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySat May 15, 2010 7:16 pm

The photo of Timo made me giggle :')
Villi looks sort of cute. I had pictured Pete more.. annoying.. is that possible, to look annoying?
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySun May 16, 2010 3:05 pm

Laughing Why the pic of Timo was so funny?

Hmm... Yes, I think it's actually possible to look annoying. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySun May 16, 2010 6:00 pm

His facial expression xD
Good haha
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptyTue May 18, 2010 1:59 pm

LOL. Why I can't see anything funny in it? scratch
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptyTue May 18, 2010 7:49 pm

I have no idea, but it's not unusual for me. I tend to laugh at stuff that isn't funny Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptySat May 22, 2010 4:17 pm

Kind of EXACTLY how I imagined them :'D
You gave up the pictures pretty well of how you iagined them yourself :'D I like them a lot... especially Pete ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptyMon May 24, 2010 7:26 pm

Hahah, thanks Dimitra! Very Happy
Though I have to say I'm not thinking that much how the characters look like. I'm concentrating more on their nature. Many times they are only faceless characters, I dunno why. Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added!   Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~ Pics added! EmptyMon May 24, 2010 9:13 pm

Based on their personality, I can imagine at least how their faces look like (:
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