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Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Fri Aug 21, 2009 12:18 pm | |
| Soon Thanks Hen, aww is a nice reaction | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:04 pm | |
| Part 18
Julie was sitting on a chair, knees pulled up, a book laying against them. Suddenly a knock on her door caught her attention. She got up and opened the door. The man from the reception handed her a folded piece of paper. ‘Merci.’ She smiled, and closed the door. Quickly she folded it open, and began to read. ‘Who was there Jules?’ One of her best friends walked inside from the bathroom. ‘The guy from the ehm.. reception..’ She pulled her eyebrows into a frowns while reading the letter. ‘What did he got for you? A package from a secret lover you haven’t told us about?’ her other friend said, curiosity shining in her eyes. ‘Ugh, Ivana, you and your lover-theories..’ The first girl said, and rolled her eyes. Ivana made a face. ‘At least I have fantasy Sel.’ Selena raised an eyebrow. ‘Hush it you two. No Ivan, I didn’t got a letter from my lover, or you consider Javi as one.. I got a letter from him. He’s here, and I have 20 minutes to go to him.’ She looked at her friends. ‘What the hell are you still doing here? Come one Curly, get ready!’ Ivana said, and pushed her into the bathroom. Selena pulled some clothes out of the closet. ‘Here, a long, black skirt, a white blouse, and heels.’ Her friends got her ready for her date with Javi. Quickly she grabbed her winter coat –a black trench coat- and ran out of the door. Selena and Ivana looked after her. ‘I don’t think she’ll come back here tonight..’ Ivana slowly said. Selena laughed and closed the door. While holding the piece of paper in her gloved fist, she walked quickly to the address Javi had given her. She knew where it was, sort of. People were rushing by, trying to make their way home before dark. The sun was settling for sunset in the west. Julie had 10 minutes left, and the address was just a few blocks away. Why would Javi want to see her? What could be so important? And why on a cemetery? She frowned at that thought. She turned the corner, and could see the entrance of the cemetery. Javi was leaning against the wall. When he noticed her, he smiled. ‘Bonjour mon cherie.’ He walked to her, gave her the roses and kissed her. She kissed him back, still surprised about him being in Paris. He took her hand, and they walked inside. ‘Javi, why are we on a cemetery?’ He just smiled, and pulled her along over the path. Suddenly they stopped in front of an old grave. She looked at it. ‘A waitress told me that this was the grave of the son of an old landlord. His father found out he was having an affair with a girl, and he hired someone to kill her. The son found out about it, and committed suicide. Both are buried here..’ Julie looked back at him. ‘Ok?’ she was even more confused now. ‘He didn’t want to live, if living was without her, so he took his own life.’ He was quiet for a while. Then he turned to her, his hand in the pocket of his jacket. Slowly he kneeled down. ‘I can’t live If living is without you I can’t give I can’t give it anymore.’ Julie was speechless while he sang it for her. His voice was full emotions, sweet, tender.. Only for her. He showed his hand, and opened his fist. A tiny black box was laying on his palm. He closed his fingers around it. Julie gasped softly, and swapped her hand in front of her mouth. Tears formed in her eyes. ‘Dear Julie Lopez. I’m like that son; You are my life now, and if living means being without you, I don’t want to live.. I want to be there for you, protect you against all the dangers who will come on your path. I want to grow old with you, have children together, a family.. Please Julie.. Will you marry me?’ He opened the lit, and Julie saw a beautiful, golden ring, with a little stone. A tear escaped and rolled down her cheek. ‘Oh Javi..’ Her voice was full of emotions, and broke. ‘Yes, yes Javi, I do.’ She smiled, and sobbed. She stuck her right hand out to him, and he shove the ring around her finger. He got up, and kissed her. She kissed him back, and closed her eyes. ‘Te quiero Julie..’ He hugged her. ‘I love you too Javi..’ She smiled and kissed him again. Hand in hand they walked out of the cemetery. ‘Will you spend the night with me? I missed you so much.. Mikel and Basty got nuts of me, and practically kicked me in the first plane to Paris..’ He rubbed his hair. Julie laughed. ‘Of course I’ll stay with you tonight. I missed you too. Ivana and Selena were crazy, but no you..’ She blushed a bit. Javi smiled. Soon they arrived at his hotel. Quickly they went upstairs. Javi unlocked the door, and they walked inside. ‘We’ll order room service..’ Javi said, and closed the door. He turned around and kissed Julie. They began to open each other’s jackets, and undressed each other. Javi kissed her passionate, and they walked to the bed. That night they celebrated their engagement together. | |
| | | Hen
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| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:57 pm | |
| Aww how sweet | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Fri Aug 21, 2009 2:04 pm | |
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| | | xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Ôüðïò : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Fri Aug 21, 2009 6:44 pm | |
| awww Javi is so cute! what a romantic proposal! | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Fri Aug 21, 2009 7:24 pm | |
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| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:31 pm | |
| Part 19
Julie yawned and stretched her arms. Javi was still sleeping next to her. She smiled. Last night had been amazing. After they had made love, Javi had called for room service, and after dinner they did it again. She crawled against him and laid her head on his chest. Javi smiled and laid his arm around her. She opened her eyes, ad looked at his face. He looked back. ‘Morning Jules. Slept well?’ she nodded, and closed her eyes again. ‘Good.’ Javi said and smiled. They stayed in bed for a few more minutes before Javi’s stomach began to rumble. Julie laughed, and they got out of bed. Quickly they got dressed, and went to the restaurant. ‘How long will you stay here Javi?’ Julie asked him, while sipping from her coffee. ‘This afternoon I’ll have to go back to Spain. Mikel and Basty will pick me up from the airport.’ Julie nodded: ‘I’ll go with you. We have some things to do.’ She smiled, and began to eat her bread. Javi nodded. They finished their breakfast, and went to Javi’s room. Julie sat down on his bed while he began to pack his suitcase. ‘You know.. We should tell our parents.. My mum doesn’t even know that I have a new boyfriend..’ Javi laughed. ‘Neither does mine haha. You know what; we’ll ask them for Christmas. Then they can and meet each other and meet the partner of their child.’ Javi said. ‘Good idea.’ Julie said, and smiled. Javi locked his suitcase, and they walked to the reception He returned the key, and paid. They walked to Julie’s hotel. Her friends were watching the morning news when they walked inside. ‘Hey Curly, how was your date?’ Ivana said. Both girls looked at their friend with curious eyes. ‘It was.. romantic. We have news for you.’ Julie said, while getting rid of her coat. Also Javi took his jacket off. Selena turned the TV off, and both girls turned to them. ‘One; I’m leaving today already. Javi and I are going back to Spain today. And two.. Javi proposed me.’ Julie said and smiled. Ivana and Selena stared at her. ‘No. Frigging. Way!’ Ivana said. Javi and Julia laughed. ‘Yes way girl.’ Julie said, and showed her ring. Both girls squealed. Javi laughed even more. ‘And I thought Mikel was crazy haha!’ ‘That is so wicked! I’m happy for both of you.’ Selena said and hugged her best friend. Julie smiled and hugged her back. Javi sat down while she began to pack her bags. ‘Who will pick you up from the airport then?’ Selena asked. ‘Mikel and Basty will be waiting for us. They are also the ones who kicked me in the plane to Paris..’ Javi said. The girls laughed. Julie threw her suitcase on her bed. ‘I can imagine why they did that though.. I mean, it’s been a few years ago since you lost her. And same for me by the way, I know.’ Julie said and waved her hand guilty in the air. ‘I know Jules, but I got you now.’ Javi said and smiled. Julie smiled and gave him a kiss. ‘And I wouldn’t want it any other way.’ Selena and Ivana looked at them and smiled. ‘I’ll call Mikel.’ And Javi got up. He walked out of the room, and dialed the number of his friend. ‘Buongiorno!’ Javi shook his head. ‘Mikel, I’m in Paris, not Roma or Venice.’ ‘Oh, right.. Bonjour, that better?’ Javi laughed. ‘Guess that’s a yes. How did it go? Did you saw the Eiffel-tower?’ ‘Ehm.. I think I drove past it on my way to the hotel. Didn’t went to it. And yes, the plan worked. We’re coming back this afternoon. Jules is packing and saying goodbye to her friends now. Then we’ll go to the airport, and buy a ticket for her coz she’s going back earlier than her own ticket says. It’s now.. Nearly noon, so we’ll try to catch the plane of half past twelve, so we can be in Madrid around one or so.’ Javi rubbed his neck and walked back and forth over the hallway. Some people who were making their way to their rooms looked weird at him. ‘Ok, Basty and I will be there around one then. See you then pal. Bye!’ and he hung up. Javi walked back into the room. ‘Basty and Mikel will be waiting for us. We need to get going now. Are you ready?’ Julie nodded, and grabbed her suitcase. Javi took his jacket, and they left. They took a cab to the airport, and Javi went to buy a ticket for Julie. Soon both were having lunch, waiting for the plane to take off. ‘How long do we have left?’ Julie asked while sipping from her tea. ‘Nearly half an hour.’ Javi answered. Julie nodded. Both just looked at each other while they finished their lunch. They didn’t need words. Twenty minutes later, a voice called off their flight in French, followed by English. Quickly they went to the gate, and into the plane. Javi sighed and fell down on his chair. Julie chuckled and sat down next to him. Javi smiled, and laid his arm around her. ‘How many hours of sleep did we have?’ he asked. Julie thought deep. ‘Maybe about.. Eight or so. Why?’ Javi grinned and closed his eyes. ‘I’m le tired. Eight hours of sleep isn’t enough.’ Julie laughed and shook her head. Soon she heard him softly snoring next to her. ‘My little tiger..’ She laid her head against his shoulder and fell asleep as well.
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| | | xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Ôüðïò : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sat Aug 22, 2009 8:07 pm | |
| awww how cute.. tell me about the eight hours! this is my sleeping time when i have to go to that freaky school | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:18 pm | |
| I have enough with six hours of sleep Part 20
Mikel and Basty were waiting in the terminal. ‘I think I see them.’ Mikel said, and pointed at a man and a woman, looking around. Basty smiled. ‘Yup, that’s Javi.’ The two friends yelled, and waved to get their attention. Soon the four walked out of the airport. Basty laid the suitcases in the trunk of his car. Julie and Javi crawled onto the backseat. Mikel turned around in his chair. ‘Good to see you again Julie.’ He smiled. ‘It’s nice to see you too Mikel.’ She smiled back and muffled a yawn. Basty laughed. ‘I won’t take the short cut. Try to catch some sleep, otherwise we won’t be able to hear the whole story haha.’ Javi and Julie nodded grateful, and lent against each other. Soon both were asleep. Mikel and Basty were quiet, and the radio played quietly. Not much later they arrived at Javi’s house. Basty woke them up, while Mikel got the luggage. ‘Wake up. We’re home.’ Slowly Julie opened her eyes, yawned and looked around her. ‘Home..?’ Basty smiled and nodded. ‘Psst.. Javi..? We’re home..’ She poked him between his ribs, and got out of the car. ‘Mum, lemme sleep..’ He sighed annoyed. Mikel shook his head. ‘Shall we carry him out of it?’ Basty nodded. They turned Javi, and pulled him out of the car. Skillful Mikel catched his arms, and together they carried their friend inside. Julie was sitting on the couch, rubbing her eyes. They laid Javi down next to her. Mikel sat down on a chair, while Basty went to make coffee. Javi sniffed. ‘I smell coffee..’ He opened one eye, followed by the other, and he sat up. Mikel chuckled. Basty walked back. ‘The coffee will be ready soon. Now tell me, how was Paris?’ He sat down next to Mikel. ‘I didn’t saw much of it.. When I arrived in Paris, I held a cab, went to my hotel, checked in, took a shower, called Mikel to tell I arrived safely, and then I went to sleep. Later that afternoon I woke up, and had lunch down town. After I talked with a waitress, I went to Julie’s hotel, wrote down where to meet me, bought a rose, and made my way to our meeting. That night I spent with Julie at my room, and the next day we went to tell her friends.’ He shrugged. ‘And now we’re here.’ Julie laid her hands in her lap. Basty got up to get the coffee, and came back soon with four mugs. They all took a sip before Julie continued Javi’s story. ‘He wanted me to meet me at a cemetery. Mikel, don’t make any comments on that or I’ll slap you. So, after I got his note, my friends got me ready, and I walked to the cemetery. He was leaning against the wall, a red rose in his hand. He pulled me along over the paths until we reached a grave. He told me a story about a man who had killed himself after his father had killed his lover. Then he took his hand out of his pocket, kneeled down in front of me, and asked me to marry me. It was the most romantic thing someone has done for me..’ She looked at her hand. ‘It still feels like a dream.’ She smiled and wiggled the finger with the ring. ‘But.. Mark proposed you as well, right? Wasn’t he romantic?’ Javi asked. ‘Mark was a soldier, Javi. They tend to be rough, and romance wasn’t his strong point. Mark proposed me in a restaurant.. You found something special, made it special..’ She lent against him. Javi smiled. ‘So.. If I get it right, you’re engaged now? Why the hell are we drinking coffee then?’ Basty said, and brought the mugs back to the kitchen. ‘Is Ony in town?’ Mikel thought out loud. ‘Yes, in fact he’s standing behind you.’ Mikel fell of his chair and stared at his friend. Javi and Julie laughed. Basty walked back, carrying four glasses, and a bottle of champagne. ‘Wow, champagne? Who got engaged with who, or who is getting a baby?’ Ony said, and sat down next to Julie. ‘Nice to see you too Ony. Julie and Javi are engaged. Hold on, I’ll get an extra glass.’ Mikel climbed back in his chair. ‘Jesus Ony, do you always scare people?’ Mikel said, his hand on his chest. ‘I heard that before yes. It wasn’t my intention to, sorry mate.’ Ony grinned. Mikel made a face, and Basty walked back into the room with an extra glass. ‘Psst.. Javi? Your friends are a bit weird..’ Julie half-whispered. They all laughed. ‘I thought you knew that Jules!’ Javi said. ‘Well, yeah.. About Mikel. But the blond guy and him together are just as terrible as you two together!’ Basty laughed even harder. ‘You can call me Ony, blond guy is from 2000.’ Ony said, and smiled. ‘I’m Julie, nice to meet you.’ They shook hands. ‘Ah, Julie Lopez, Javi’s girlfriend, no? Or, must I say fiancée now?’ He smiled. Julie blushed a bit. Javi smiled, and pulled her against himself. ‘Yes, Julie and I are engaged.’ He looked at her. Julie looked back and smiled. Javi pressed a soft kiss on her lips. The others smiled. Basty was struggling with the champagne, but soon the cork hit the ceiling before falling on the ground. He quickly poured some in the glasses. ‘Let’s make a toast.’ Ony said, standing up, raising his glass. The others followed his example. ‘Let’s hope Javi and Julie will be together for the last of many days, may they have a wonderful life together, with –hopefully- many children. May this marriage last longer than their previous ones, and may death come to take the other away at old age.’ ‘Cheers.’ Everyone else said as one, and they took a sip. Julie stood on her toes, and kissed Javi again. ‘Let’s hope Ony’s words will become true.’ Javi said, and kissed her back. | |
| | | Hen
Number of posts : 757 Age : 32 Ôüðïò : Rokytnice nad Jizerou Registration date : 2008-12-29
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:04 pm | |
| Great parts Mar! | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:06 pm | |
| Thankies (: Love your ava | |
| | | Hen
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| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:16 pm | |
| Haha thank you DIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAA | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:28 pm | |
| Part 21
It was a rainy, cold night. A man was driving home after having a firm chat with his girlfriend. He looked at his right hand. The knuckles were bruised from hitting the wall. He tightened his grip around the steering wheel. His hand grabbed the bottle and brought it to his mouth. ‘That lying piece of..’ and he took a big sip. The bottle of Vodka he had taken with him when he left the apartment of his girlfriend had been full when he grabbed it. Now it was half empty. The man was getting more and more drunk.
‘Yes, I love you too honey. Javi, I really have to hang you. Calling while driving is illegal.’ She smiled and putted her phone back in her shoulder bag. She laid a hand on her belly. ‘Hey little baby..’ She smiled wider by thinking of them having a baby. The radio was playing a CD. Happy she sang along. Suddenly the headlights of a car shined into her’s. She stopped singing. Her eyes widened and she just stared in front of her. ‘.. no.. No. No! NO!’ She didn’t waited for the crash, and made a sharp turn to the right. The black Corvette rushed past her, while her white Seat crashed against a tree. It went pretty fast. She hit her head against the steering wheel. ‘Ja.. vii..’ Was all she could say before losing consiousness. The CD was still playing. ‘-ay Darkness take over now Stay No thinking twice Stay for tonight The sound of your heart racing faster for me Is what will safe me..’ was all Emmy Rossum could sing before shutting up. | |
| | | Hen
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| | | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:33 pm | |
| Ehmm.. | |
| | | Hen
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| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:11 pm | |
| No? | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:13 pm | |
| Maybe..? | |
| | | xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Ôüðïò : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:11 am | |
| oh C'MON!!!!!!! NOT AGAIN!!! Javi must be the most unlucky man in the whole world! | |
| | | Hen
Number of posts : 757 Age : 32 Ôüðïò : Rokytnice nad Jizerou Registration date : 2008-12-29
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Mon Aug 24, 2009 10:44 am | |
| Be happy it's a STORY Oly | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:56 pm | |
| I have one part left.. who knows what will happen? | |
| | | Hen
Number of posts : 757 Age : 32 Ôüðïò : Rokytnice nad Jizerou Registration date : 2008-12-29
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:27 pm | |
| I'll know.. | |
| | | xxolympiaxx Moderator
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 32 Ôüðïò : Cyprus (Greece) Registration date : 2008-12-20
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Mon Aug 24, 2009 4:07 pm | |
| one part left huh? then must be a good ending..i guess | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:25 pm | |
| Part 22
Javi was sitting on the cough, reading a book. His wife had a meeting from work, and should be home soon. He glanced swiftly at their wedding photo. It had been one of the best days in his entire life. He smiled while thinking back. Ony had been attacked by some of Julie’s colleagues, Mikel got stares from her best friends, and Basty tripped over the table cloth, causing him to pull a girl down with him. Apparently, it had been one of Javi’s cousins. The day had been so full of joy and sunlight, it felt like it was heaven. The radio played quietly on the background. Suddenly the peace was rudely interrupted by the ringing of the phone. ‘Javi Álvarez speaking. Yes, that’s my wife. Yes, she drives a white Seat Leon Cupra. Her name’s Julie Álvarez. What? Oh my.. I’m on my way.’ Quickly he pressed the red button, and dialed his best friend. After three times, and a stream of cursing, he managed to get the right number. ‘Basty! It’s Javi. I.. I need your help. Could you give me a ride? Sure, take him with you, I don’t care, I just need that ride! Ok, yes. Bye.’ He threw the phone on the couch, and putted his shoes on. While getting his jacket, he walked outside. Soon Basty’s car pulled up in front of his house. Quickly Javi locked the door of his house, and got in the car. ‘Calle Doctor Esquerdo 46.’ Javi said while fastening his seatbelt. Basty took off, faster than the speed limit allowed him. ‘Wait.. That’s the hospital..’ Mikel said from the backseat, pulling his brows together. The others ignored him. Soon Basty turned onto the parking lot, and Javi jumped out of the car. He ran inside the hospital. Quickly Basty parked his car, and the two men followed their friend. Javi was standing in front of a glass door. Tears rolled down over his cheeks. ‘Damn it..’ He whispered, closed his eyes, and lent against the cold glass. A doctor pulled a green sheet over a body. Javi could see the curves of the woman. Basty laid his hand on Javi’s shoulder. ‘Not again..’ Javi said, and looked up. Mikel lent against the wall next to the door. A doctor walked to them. ‘Mr. Álvarez?’ Javi turned to him. ‘We tried our hardest to safe her, I am sorry sir.’ He took him to a room. There she was, laying tight under a white sheet. ‘Oh God, Julie..’ Again he began to cry. Her eyes were closed. It looked like she was asleep. He sat down next to her, and took her hand. ‘Oh Julie. Baby, I’m so sorry.. It should have been me, not you. Oh God, why?’ He laid her hand against his cheek, and cried quietly. ‘Ja.. vii..’ He looked up. Julie breathed hard, and her eyelids fluttered. With a loud gasp, she widened her eyes and stared at the ceiling. Her breathing was irregular. ‘Ja.. avii.. Javi..’ Tears rolled down her cheeks, making breathing even more difficult. ‘I.. lo-ove youu..’ with those words, she faded away again. Javi stared at her. Tears rolled over his cheeks, but he didn’t care about it. His wife.. He would lose her.. Suddenly the room began to turn, the walls became the floor. He twisted his eyes, and fell down. Images of Sophia and Julie melting into one, Sophia pregnant, Sophia painting the nursery, Julie cooking, Julie singing, Sophia in the operation room, Sophia in her coffin, the funeral, he, yelling at Ony, he, trying to take his own life, he and Julie together on their wedding, he and Sophia together on their wedding. He knew he’d lost her. He would never see her again. It was over.
Mikel catched his friend, before he would crash down on the floor. Basty grabbed his feet, and they laid him down on the floor. They looked worried at each other. The doctor came rushing back in, followed by a nurse. Slowly Javi opened his eyes again. A loud beeping filled his whole head. His world was a vague haze. People stood around the bed of his wife. He blinked a couple of times, trying to get a better image. He looked at the heart monitor. The green line, was dead. Julie was gone. He was lost. Basty laid his arm around him, clumsy trying to comfort him. ‘It will be ok Javi.. Sshh..’ Javi sobbed. ‘Don’t you get it? She is gone! Dead! It’s over Basty!’ He cried louder, and fell in the arms of his friend. Mikel and Basty exchanged a glance at each other. The doctors were trying to bring Julie back to life. ‘Charge to 300. Clear.’ ‘Again, 300. Clear.’ ‘Charge to 400. Clear.’ ‘500. I said 500! Clear!’ The sounds became a blur to Javi. Soon he couldn’t hear it anymore. He didn’t hear anything, only the sound of Julie’s voice echoing in his head: ‘I love you. I love you. I love you. I love you..’ | |
| | | Marjolein
Number of posts : 1616 Age : 31 Ôüðïò : The Netherlands Registration date : 2008-12-19
| Subject: Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*.. Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:28 pm | |
| Epilogue
~2 years later~
‘Christofer! Come here! You can’t run around naked!’ A man followed the little boy around in the garden. A lady stood in the doorway, laughing about her husband and son. ‘Come on Chris, time to get dressed. We will go to the beach today, remember?’ The little boy cheered, and ran in his dad’s arms. The man carried him inside. ‘Will the girls be there as well?’ he asked his wife. She nodded. ‘Just as the guys, as promised. You know we have news for them.’ She smiled and patted her belly. The man bent, and kissed it softly. ‘Mummy? Is baby awake?’ Chris asked and looked at the tiny bump in his mother’s T-shirt. She laughed lightly. ‘I don’t know Chris. Maybe you should ask him.’ ‘Baby? You awake?’ Christofer asked, a serious look in his brown eyes. ‘Yes, he’s awake,’ his mother made a face, ‘he just kicked me.’ Chris stared at her. ‘Bad baby! You can’t kick mummy!’ Both his parents laughed. ‘Come on big guy. I’ll get you dressed.’ The man laid Chris over his shoulder, and walked upstairs, singing one of Christofer’s favorite songs. ‘Baby mírame y dime quien. Te puede hacer vibrar más que yo. Tú lo sabes bien, acércate. Y desvélame cual es tu secreto..’ The woman smiled, and sat down on the couch, holding one of Christofer’s toys. The last years had been crazy. Since the car accident now two years ago, their lives had been a mess. Julie shook her head. The red curls moved along in their ponytail. She had been awake for a brief moment, and Javi had been sitting next to her. After that, it was black. No memories. What she’d heard from Javi, her heart had stopped beating for a couple of minutes. The doctors had really saved the life of not only herself, but also of their little baby. The impact of the accident had given her a pneumothorax, and a couple bruised ribs. The windshield of her car was broken, and some of the glass fragments had been in her face. Thank God they hadn’t left big scars. She looked at the car in her hands. Javi was a wretch afterwards, when she finally woke up again. Mikel told her he fainted when she lost consciousness again. He had been sitting at her bed all night, holding her hand, telling everything would be ok, he was there to protect her. Two years ago.. She smiled absentmindedly and turned the car around. A car accident and a gorgeous baby boy. Life had strange paths. ‘Hey gorgeous. Where are you thinking about?’ Javi asked, and sat down next to her. She lent against him. ‘About us. You, me, Chris, and little baby here.’ She took his hand, and laid it on her belly. He smiled, and felt a foot. ‘That’s one of me.’ Julie laughed. ‘Did you ever doubted that?’ Javi’s eyes twinkled. ‘Of course not Jules.’ He kissed her. ‘Mmm.. Good.’ She smiled and kissed him back. ‘Are we going? I want to see sea!’ Chris laughed, and ran into the hallway to get his bucket. ‘Let’s go then! Mummy, get up and take baby with you! Chris and daddy want to make a sand castle, and the best sand is now!’ he ran away with his son, leaving Julie laughing behind. She got up, grabbed the bottle of lemonade, and the box with sandwiches, and followed them. Her boys were already sitting in the car: Javi behind the steering wheel, Chris in his seat behind the passenger’s seat. She pulled the door shut behind her, and locked it. Not much later they took off.
I was sitting on my doorstep, I hung up the phone and it fell out of my hand, But I knew I had to do it, And he wouldn't understand, So hard to see myself without him, I felt a piece of my heart break, But when you're standing at a crossroad, There's a choice you gotta make.
I guess it's gonna have to hurt, I guess I'm gonna have to cry, And let go of some things I've loved, To get to the other side, I guess it's gonna break me down, Like falling when you try to fly, It's sad, but sometimes moving on with the rest of your life, Starts with goodbye.
I know there's a blue horizon, Somewhere up ahead, just waiting for me, Getting there means leaving things behind, Sometimes life's so bitter sweet.
I guess it's gonna have to hurt, I guess I'm gonna have to cry, And let go of some things I've loved, To get to the other side, I guess it's gonna break me down, Like falling when you try to fly, It's sad, but sometimes moving on with the rest of your life, Starts with goodbye.
Time, time heals, The wounds that you feel, Somehow, right now.
I guess it's gonna have to hurt, I guess I'm gonna have to cry, And let go of some things I've loved, To get to the other side, I guess it's gonna break me down, Like falling when you try to fly, It's sad, but sometimes moving on with the rest of your life, Starts with goodbye, I guess I'm gonna have to cry, And let go of some things I've loved, To get to the other side, Starts with goodbye, The only way you try to find, Moving on with the rest of your life, Starts with goodbye,
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