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 The Stolen Hearts ~Part 19 The End~

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PostSubject: The Stolen Hearts ~Part 19 The End~   The Stolen Hearts ~Part 19 The End~ EmptyFri Jan 15, 2010 11:13 pm

This time I post my own story and I hope you would like it Very Happy

Prologue

I so like to go out with my friends. But no, I have to do my so called job. Don't get me wrong, I do love my job. But this would have been special night. I have met one really amazing guy and I would have meet him tonight. We were planning to drink some alcohol and keep fun. And maybe much later we would have go to my home alone. I have really wait this night and I'm sure he will forget me. I did send a message to him that I can't come. It was ok to him and we could meet some other day. But I know guys and his message means that we don't meet anymore. Well I hope that I could be wrong and we would meet someday again.
My job is steal stuff from rich people. I love stealing and I'm very good of it. Police have never catch me even I have done this so long. I'm so smart and careful. And I always plan everything so well.
My parenst have tauch me and they still help me. They are my hero's. I can always tell to them everything and ask everything. We are so close and others can't understand it. Always when we are together others looks us weird way. Like they would have never seen a family. Maybe they look us because we walk hand by hand. They can watch us as much as they want. I don't care. Also I have a brother who is doing this same thing what I do. I'm pretty close with him and he is older than me.


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PostSubject: Re: The Stolen Hearts ~Part 19 The End~   The Stolen Hearts ~Part 19 The End~ EmptySat Jan 16, 2010 3:24 pm

Sounds good... ^^
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Thank you Very Happy
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nice Smile i'm waiting more!
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Thank you Very Happy And here is more

Part 1

I have find and chose one house. Or should I say villa. It was quite big but very nice. Also I have find out when the owner is not home so I can go to visit. I took my stuff and I went there.
First I went to living room and I took stereo's. Those looked quite expensive and it was good. Then I took his TV and some other stuff. I brought them to my car and then I went back to inside. I began to search some other stuff but then I heard voices.
-Damn it. They can't come back yet. He or they, who really cares.- I thought.
I dropped my stuff and I went to hide. I realized too late that they can see my stuff but it was too late. I saw when he came to living room with his friends. And they saw missing stuff and also mine.
-Hey Basty your stereo's are not here.- Black haired guy said.
-What??! Damn it. Those were brand new stereo and tv.- Basty said.
Then they saw my stuff and took them.
-That one who broke in is here still. We need to find him or her.- Basty said.
They began to search me but they didn't find. It was my luck but then I notice that they stayed in living room. I didn't feel so lucky anymore because now I can't go away. What I do now?
-Are you going to call to police?- Other guy asked.
-Hmmm... Maybe not yet. Because he or she can't hide forever. I'm caunting on that.- Basty said.
-Maybe we could eat something while waiting. At least i'm hungry.- Black haired guy said.
-You and your hungry Javi. I go to do something and you have to stay here.- Basty said and went to kitchen.
Why Javi and other guy can't go to kitchen also. I wanna go away from here and I'm a bit hungry. I did mistake somewhere and now I have to pay it. But I can't let them catch me. Then I heard that Basty came back and something smelled good. Now I'm even more hungry. And I'd like to eat something.
-Here guys something to eat.- Basty said.
-Thank you Basty.- Javi said.
They began to eat and they really enjoyed eating. That something smelled so good and I became even more hungry. I hope that my stomack don't betray me.
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PostSubject: Re: The Stolen Hearts ~Part 19 The End~   The Stolen Hearts ~Part 19 The End~ EmptySun Jan 17, 2010 12:22 am

Talking 'bout bad luck pal Razz

Great part Katja =]
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Thank you Mar Very Happy
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Great parts Smile
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Thank you Hen Very Happy
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No prolem haha (:

Can't wait for more Very Happy
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You will get new part later today Razz
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Haha glad to hear that Razz flower
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Part 2

They were still awake and they talked about something. I didn't hear so well and I was a bit tired. But I can't fell asleep.
-Where he or she can be?- Javi asked.
-Somehow I'm sure that one who broke in have to be a girl and tiny. So let's check that kind of places now. Mikel stay here in living room.- Basty said.
Basty and Javi left and Mikel stayed. I saw how he began to search in living room. He looked at everywhere and I was afraid. He came closer and closer that place where I was. And then he found me.
-Catch ya...- He said and grabbed my leg.
He pulled me out from my hiding place. I just looked at him and stayed quiet. I tried to kick him but he stopped me. He sat on my legs and looked at me. I looked at him back and tried to free myself.
-No, no, no... I'm not going to let you run away. You will stay here. Maybe I should call my friends back.- Mikel said.
-Please don't call them back.- I said.
-Yes I will. Where have you put those stuff that you stole from Basty?- Mikel said.
-I'm not going to tell you that. I'm not so stupid. Can I sit at least? This is not so comfortable.- I said.
Mikel nodded and let me sat. I looked around to find something what I could use. I planned to hit him so I could run away before others comes. Then I saw a lamp next to me. I took it quickly and hit him on his head. He fell on the floor and I got up. I left before others came and soon I was at home.
I think I have to go back there but not soon. I will steal some other houses before I go there back. Then I notice my bro in living room. I smiled and went to hug him.
-So nice to see you. Have you been long here?- I said.
-You too... About a few hours.- He said and I nodded.
But then I yawned and my bro notice that.
-Go to sleep now and let's talk when you wake up.- He said.
I nodded and went to sleep.
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Hitting Mikel Evil or Very Mad

Great part Katja (:
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She had to do that Razz

Thank you Very Happy
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Haha great part Laughing
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Thank you Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Stolen Hearts ~Part 19 The End~   The Stolen Hearts ~Part 19 The End~ EmptySun Jan 17, 2010 11:13 pm

how dare she??? no one can hit Mikelito like that! Evil or Very Mad
anyway.. great parts!
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Well she had to Razz
But thank you Very Happy
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xxolympiaxx wrote:
how dare she??? no one can hit Mikelito like that! Evil or Very Mad
anyway.. great parts!

agreed Oly batman
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Part 3

In morning I woke up smell of fresh coffee. I got up from bed and put some clothes on. Then I went to kitchen.
-Morning bro...- I said and took coffee.
-Morning sis. Tell me about last night.- He said.
-Everything went so well. But then owner of the house called Basty came home a bit too earlier. I went to hide and I dropped my stuff. They saw it and realized that I'm still there. I mean Basty and his two friends. They ate and talked before they began to search me. Mikel found me but he didn't call his friends right away. And I hit him one head with a lamp. Basty and Javi didn't see me when I run away.- I say.
-Dear sis you made mistake by dropping your stuff. You have to go back but not yet.- He said.
-Yeah I know that so well. I will steal some other houses before I will go back. And I couldn't know that he came back earlier what I waited.- I said and took breakfast and another cup of coffee.
-Yeah it's true you couldn't knew. Did you se if Basty was good looking guy? Because I have a plan.- He said.
-Yes he was good looking guy. What kind of plan?- I said.
He told to me his plan and I listen to him. And I have to say that I like his plan. It's going to be fun and I like everything that is fun. Maybe that's why I don't have a boyfriend. But who needs boyfriend anyway.


Part 4

A few days later I went to the beach. I had my new bikinis on and I search place. Then I saw Basty and he were alone. I smiled and I went to him.
-Hey...Could you put some sun cream on my back. Because I can't do it by myself.- I said and smiled.
-Oh hey...Yeah sure I can.- Basty said.
I laid down on his blanket and I gave sun cream to him. He took it and began to pu some sun cream on my back. His hands felt so good on my back and I smiled. But too soon he were ready and I wanted more. I turned around and looked at him.
-Now you can't sunburn.- He said and smiled.
-Thank you so much. Can I stay here with you or do you wait someone.- I said and smiled back.
-I came here alone so you can stay. Could you look after my stuff because I would like to go to swimm.- He said.
I nodded and he stood up. He went to swimm and I looked after him. He really looked good with shorts. Soon He came back and sat next to me.
-Btw what's your name?- He said.
-I'm Josie... What about you?- I said.
-I'm Esteban but everyone call me Basty. It's nice to meet you.- Basty said and I nodded.
We were there a few hours and we had fun. He is so nice guy.
-I should go to shopping tomorrow and I don't like shopping.- Basty said.
-Why you have to go?- I asked even I knew.
-Someone stole my stereo's and tv a few days ago. Also she stole some other stuff.- Basty said.
-Maybe I could come to help you.- I said and smiled.
-That would be so great... Thank you so much.- Basty said and smiled.
He gave to me his phone number and soon I went home. I smiled whole time and so many looked at me. But I didn't care about it beacause I was happy. I didn't wait that it would have been so easy. I think it's only good thing. When I was at home I told everything to my brother.
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Oehh bad plan, but that's why I like it Laughing

Great parts again Kat Very Happy
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Thank you Hen Very Happy
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aww poor Basty, she tricked him =/
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