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Marjolein

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Twisted Evil I knooooow What a Face Love that piece hehe
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Part 21

but a few months later mikel and mar did something not nice
katja came home from doing groceries
katja: what is that noise?
she recognised a voice
katja: aah mar and ony...
'Ahh! Mikel.. mmm'
katja: what the hell??!!!
she ran upstairs
she went to mar's room
she yanked teh door open
katja: what the hell!! Mikel!!!
He pulled of quickly and laid under the blanket, staring at her
katja: go to the hell...both of you *tears in her eyes*
she turned around and ran downstairs
mikel run after her
Mikel: Katja!
katja: go to the hell
she opened the door and left
she went to the beach and sat down
There she began to cry
suddenly ony came there
Ony: hey chica
katja: hey
ony: Why so sad?
katja: mikel were in bed with other girl
ony: What?
katja: he cheated on me...with my best friend
ony: O my.. i never expected him to do that
katja: neither i...
ony: But with who?
katja: mar
ony: WHAT!
katja: yeah with mar...
Ony: That bitch!
katja: yeah that bitch
Ony: Are they still there?
katja: i don't know
ony: I'll speak with her when she comes over
katja: best part or worst part is that i'm pregnant
ony: no way.. from that.. guy?
katja: yeah
ony: what now?
katja: i'm not going to tell this to mikel
ony nodded
katja: and i will kick mar out of our house
ony: good idea
katja: yeah...actually i own that house
ony nodded
katja were quiet
ony laid his arm around her
she put her head on his shoulder
ony: It will be ok..
katja: yeah hope so
she smiled a tad
katja: tommy is with alex and marcus now
ony: you can pick him up later
katja: actually they will bring him tomorrow
ony: ow... time enough to calm down
katja: yeah it's true
ony: come, let's go home.. I was about to pick mar up..
katja nodded
they got up

Part 22

they went to katja's home
Mikel and mar were watching TV
katja and ony went inside
Mar: hey guys
katja: mar...you don't live here anymore so get your stuff...and then get out of here
mar got up and went to get her stuff
katja went to kitchen
Ony sat down next to her
katja: thanks
Ony: it's ok
katja nodded
Mikel walked inside
katja just looked at him
Mikel: I guess it's over between us, isn't it?
katja: yes it's over...or are you so stupid that you think i could be still with you after what you did
Mikel: of course not. I just wanted to know it for sure
katja nodded
mar ran downstairs with her suitcase
katja didn't say anything to her
mar: Byee..
katja looked at the table
Ony: O, mar.. Before I forget.. Katja told me about what happened.. It's over
mar: i'm sorry
Ony: that won't solve it mar..
mar: i know
ony: have fun with Mikel
mar and mikel left
mar sighed deeply
mar: damn it...what i will do now
Mikel: if you want, you can get a room at my place..
mar: hmmm okey
she smiled
they went to mikel's home
Mikel showed her where she could sleep
mar: thanks
Mikel: it's ok..
mar nodded
He turned around and walked into the kitchen
mar sat down on the bed
and laid down, pulling a cushion against her belly
mar: *i think that i lost a friend*
a tear rolled over her cheek
she started to cry
Miekl ran inside
she didn't notice him
Mikel pulled her to sit and she fell against his chest
mar: i lost a friend
she burried her face in his T-shirt
mar: i have know her so many years...
Mikel caressed her hair
soon she calm down
mar: I'm sorry about your shirt..
mikel: it's ok
he smiled
mar smiled little bit back
Mikel: Do you want something to eat? I made dinner
mar nodded
she got up adn follwed him
they went to kitchen
She sat down at the kitchen table
mikel gave food to her
mar: thanks..
mikel: you're welcome
he sat down as well
they started to eat
mar: thanks, it was good
mikel: i'm glad that you liked it
he smiled and brought the plates to the kitchen
mar: i don't wanna lose her friendship
she looked at the table
mar: but i don't know what to do about that
Mikel: Give it some time..
mar nodded
Mikel: Ony will be mad at me as well..
mar: yeah
Mikel: And katja of course
mar: yeah especially she
Mikel: I think you shouldn't worry too much about Katja. We are human and make mistakes. SOmetimes they are big, some times small
mar: yeah it's true
she looked up
mar: thank you for helping me
Mikel: it's ok
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Marjolein

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Razz

Poor me and Mikel..
Naughty me and Mikel
Poor Katja and Ony
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Oh yeah Razz
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awww how sad...
Evil or Very Mad shame on them!
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Part 23

next day
Mar woke up as first
she looked at mikel
mar: *Huh? I thought I had my own room..?*
mar: *what i'm doing his room and bed*
She rubbed her eyes and poked him
mikel: mmmm what?
Mar: What teh fuck am I doing in your bed?
mikel: i don't know...you went to sleep on your own room
mar: Huh..
meanwhile at katja's home
she woke up
she didn't stand up right away
she stared at teh ceiling
katja: why everyone always hurt me
she laid down on her side and pulled her legs up
then she heard that someone came inside
she tried to ignore
tommy: mummyyy
he jumped on her bed
he kissed her on cheek
tommy: Mummy?
katja: hey sweety
tommy caressed her cheek
alex: morning dear sis
he sat down on her bed
katja: morning
tommy: are you ok mummy?
katja: yes i'm ok
he smiled
katja: but hush both of you now...i wanna put some clothes on
quickly both of them left
katja put some clothes on
soon she was in the livingroom
she sat down on sofa
tommy and alex were playing
katja looked at them
a smile appeared on her face, though it was a sad one
alex notice that
he walked to her and sat down
katja put her head on his shoulder
alex laid his arm around her
katja: come to live with me here
alex: Why not
katja: thank you *smile* because i don't wanna live alone here
alex: What happened? I thought Mikel lived here..?
katja: he have never live here when we were together
alex: Sorry, my mistake..
katja: it's ok
alex: But what happened? you look so sad..
katja: he slept with mar
alex: WHAT?!
katja: i saw it
alex: That..!
katja: yeah
alex: When I get them both.. I swear..
katja: i kicked mar out of this house yesterday
alex: Good
katja: and i'm not going to tell mikel one thing
alex: What?
katja: i'm pregnant
alex stared at her
katja: yeah it's true
she looked at her son
tommy played on the floor
he looked up and smiled
katja smiled back
tommy continued playing
katja: tommy is so cute
alex: Indeed.. He has your sparkling eyes
katja: yes he have
alex smiled
katja: but he looks so much like his father
alex: i agree
katja: tommy doesn't know anything about his father
alex: will you tell him?
katja: maybe i should
katja: someday..
alex nodded
alex: Do you want some breakfast?
katja: yes i want
alex got up and made something eatable
he gave it to katja
katja: thankyou
alex: you're welcome
he smiled and sat back down

Part 24

one week later katja went to the beach alone
not much later she noticed how someone sat down next to her
katja: oh hey ony
ony: hey katja
katja: how are you?
ony: pretty ok.. you?
katja: yeah me too
ony: good
katja: yeah...alex moved to live with me *smile*
ony: cool *smile*
katja: so i don't have to live alone
ony: better, no?
katja: yes it's better to live with someone
she smiled
ony smiled back
he laid his arm around her
she smiled and put her head on his shoulder
katja: I bet Mikel and Mar are together now..
ony: yeah maybe...i haven't heard anything
katja: me neither
katja: and i don't wanna hear even anything
ony: that will be one hell of a practise today..
katja: awww...you have practise today?
ony: yup.. maybe Javi ad basty get mad at him..
katja: awww poor you *hugs him*
ony hugge dher back
katja kissed him on his cheek
ony blushed
katja: awww you blushed...so cute
he stuck his tongue out
katja grinned
they looked at each other
they didn't turn their head away
soon their faces came closer
they kissed
ony pulled her closer
katja put her hands around his neck
ony pushed her down on teh beach
katja: mmmm you are good kisser
ony: Mmm.. so are you.
katja: thanks
she smiled
ony smiled back
he kissed her again
she kissed him back
he rolled on top of her
but suddenly his phone ring
ony: noooo...
ony: damn you phone
ony: no, not now..
katja: answer or forget whole phone
he pressed teh red button
katja: good boy
she smiled
she kissed him again
but soon his phone rang again
katja: answer
ony sighed and picked up
basty: where are you?
ony: hello basty, yes I am fine. I am on teh beach
basty: you should be on the practise
ony: craaaap!
basty: hurry up *ended*
ony got up: practise
katja: okey
he gave her a last kiss
she kissed him back and gave her phone number to him
soon he left
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Aww.. Antonio is in love I love you And so's Katja -I think- naww..
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Very Happy Very Happy
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lol they switched "partners"!! Laughing
awww
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Guess I liked Mikel more xD
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Razz Razz
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who doesn't Mar?.. who doesn't!?! Hearts
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Part 25

he went to practise
Basty was waiting for him
ony: sorry
basty: yeah, right
ony: i forget totally time
basty: hup, get dressed
ony nodded
soon he walked into teh dancehall
he didn't look at mikel
basty: so, now we have everyone here..
ony: i'm sorry that i was late
basty: you're here now
ony: yeah
javi turned teh music on for their warming up
they started to warm up
soon the music changed to their own
they started to dance
soon they had a break
ony took water bottle and sat down on the floor
javi sat down next to him
ony: what a week this have been
javi: What do you mean?
ony: mikel slept with mar a week ago
javi spit his water out
ony: katja saw it
javi stared at him
ony: it's true
basty: what is true?
ony: mikel slept with mar a week ago and katja saw it
basty: HENNET!
mikel: what?
basty: get your ass here!
mikel came to them: what?
basty: What did I hear?
mikel: what are you talking about?
basty: you cheated on katja?
mikel: yes
javi: with her best friend? wtfeck were you thinking?
mikel: nothing
javi and basty looked in disbelieve at him.
Javi: I never thought he could be that stupid..
basty: me neither
he shook his head
basty: ony do you know how katja is now?
ony: she's ok
basty: good
ony: i just saw her at teh beach
basty: okey
he smiled
ony: she told me that alex moved to live with her
javi: wicked
ony: yeah
he smiled
soon they continue
ony was satisfied
then they ended their practise
soon each went his own way

Part 26

two nights later katja and alex went to steal cars
it was weird not to do it with Mar
they stole 10 cars
alex: Pa his depts better be over soon
katja: stealing cars don't have anything to do with that
alex: No?
katja: don't you remember...this is like hobby to us
alex: o yeah!
katja nodded
alex: Sometimes I'm blonde
katja: oh yeah you are
she smiled
next day on the police station
Mikel was sitting at his desk
police: someone stole 10 cars last night
Mikel: ok
police: and we don't know who
Mikel: So?
police: we have nothing
Mikel: I can't help.. Not my department..
police: yeah i know
Mikel: then why are you cming here?
police: sorry *left*
Mikel: Serious.. *shakes his head*
also two nights later they stole 10 cars
Mikel didn't want to get involved with it at all. He had a case to work on
katja were working with the cars when suddenly ony came to visit
ony: nice ride
katja: thanks
she smiled
katja: but these are not mine
ony: no?
katja: nope
ony: been stealing again?
katja: hmmm....yeah...but you have to keep your mouth shut about that
ony: sure.. I think it's sexy..
katja: what is sexy?
ony: you and stealing..
katja: oh thanks
she smiled
ony smiled back
he kissed her
she kissed him back
ony: mm..
katja: mmmm
she swapped her arms around him
alex: krhm...we have some work to do sis
katja: oops
alex grinned
ony smiled as well
alex: what is between you two?
katja and ony looked at each other
katja: i don't know
ony: me neither
alex: okey
ony: is there something then? I mean.. I don't know.. let's see.. *Kisses her*
katja: yeah let's see...*kissed him back*
it soon turned into a French kiss
alex smiled
ony: yes, there's.. something *gasps for air*
katja: oh...yeah...
ony smiled and pushed her against teh car to kiss her again
alex: krhm
ony just ignored him
katja really enjoy of kissing him
alex smiled and walked back inside
katja: mmmm yeah i like kissing you...but maybe i should do some work now...you can stay and watch
ony: deal
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Naww, three against 1.. Unfair

Aww.. katja and Ony are cute together
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hihi like it! Very Happy
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Thank you Very Happy
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Part 27

she started to work again and alex came to help her
alex: finally
katja just smiled
ony: I might come and steal a kissie
katja: you are free to do that
he got up and stole a kiss from her
a bit later they got car ready
alex: and now I'm outta here, later!
katja: yeah later
Ony smiled
katja: do you wanna see how that car looked when we took it
ony: sure
katja: here *show a pic*
ony: i like it more now..
katja: yeah me too
she looked satisfied at the car
katja: this is our hobby
ony: cool hobby
katja: oh yeah...but police doesn't like that
she smiled mischiefous
katja: actually that's why alex were in prison over 3 years
ony: as long as you don't get cought, I dont care
katja nodded
he stole another kiss
she kissed him back
ony: mmm..
katja: i like kissing you
ony: i like kissing you as well
katja: good...btw i have heard that you like only blondes...but i'm not blonde
ony: Maybe my taste has changed..
katja nodded
ony smiled
katja smiled
they kissed again
katja: i like you but i don't wanna get hurt again
ony: I understand how you feel.. I have the same thing
katja: yes you have
ony: And I like you too
katja: nice *smile*
she pressed him against the car
and kissed him
he kissed her back and laid his arms around her
katja put her hands under of his shirt
soon it fell on the floor
she started to open his jeans
ony unbuttoned her blouse
they had some passionately moment
ony: mmm..
katja: that was wow
ony: agreed
they put clothes back on
and walked inside
tommy: mummyyy i draw this to you
katja: Show me
tommy: here
he gave a piece of paper to her
katja: wow...this is great
ony looked over her shoulder
ony: yeah it's great
tommy looked up to him
tommy: who are you?
katja: don't you remember sweety?
tommy: yes
katja: it's Ony
tommy smiled
ony kneeled down
tommy looked at him
ony: nice to meet you tommy
tommy nodded
ony smiled

Part 28

two months later katja and tommy came to dance studio suddenly when boys were practising
tommy: ony!
ony: hey lil man *smile*
tommy ran to him
ony took him to his arm
tommy: i missed you
ony: i missed you too
tommy: and mummy missed you too
ony: really?
tommy nodded
tommy: mummy...my dad?
he pointed at basty
katja: yes he is your dad...like i told you
tommy: daddy!
he run to basty
basty lifted him up
basty: hey
tommy: you are my papa?
basty: yes
tommy smiled
basty smiled back
he gave basty a hug: papa..
basty hugged him back
javi: naww...
mikel stared at katja's belly
mikel: *no. frigging. way*
katja: basty would you like to come with us to the zoo
basty: sure
katja: good...so you can get to know your son
basty nodded
katja: ony do you come with us?
ony: sure
katja: good
katja: come tommy, we will watch them Dance
tommy nodded and they went to sit
katja sat down as well
boys continue dancing and mikel did mistakes
javi: HENNET! fo-cus
mikel nodded
javi sighed
soon they ended and mikel stared at katja
Katja looked back
katja: what are you staring?
Mikel: Nothing.. just..
katja: what?
Mikel: Since when are you pregnant?
katja: a few months
she saw him thinking
she looked at him
mikel: Is it.. mine?
katja: yes
Mikel was quiet
katja: i'm not going to let you meet this baby
Mikel: i understand
katja nodded
ony: but how are things going between you and that bitch?
mikel: she's not bitch
ony: what ever..
mikel: we are happy
ony: good
katja: ony and basty let's go to the zoo
basty: sounds healthy
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *cough* I feel bad for Mikel..

Great parts! Very Happy
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Very Happy Very Happy
Yeah poor Mikel...
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me too..:S he is so cute to treat him like that!xD
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Part 29

they went to the zoo and mikel went to home
mar was cleaning
mikel: hey
mar: hey
mikel sat on sofa and he were quiet
marsat down next to him
mikel: i find out one thing
mar: tell me
mikel: katja is pregnant
mar: ..okay..?
mikel: i'm father of that baby
he stared at the wall
mar hugged him
Mikel: She won't let me meet my child..
mar: what??
Mikel: because I cheated on her..
mar nodded
Mikel: I'd do the same..
mar: yeah
She caressed his cheek
mikel: i love you
Mar: I love you too
next day mar were shopping when suddenly she saw katja
mar: *o-oh..*
katja didn't saw mar
mar walked into the same shop as her
katja were looking some clothes
mar: Hey..
katja: oh hey
mar: how are you?
katja: i'm fine...you?
mar: also. Mikel and I are happy
katja nodded
mar: i heard that you're pregnant, congratulations
katja: thank you
she smiled
katja: tommy keep asking when that baby will born
mar: he has always been cute
katja: yeah
mar: Mikel told me it's his
katja: yes it's his
mar: please, don't be too hard for him..
katja: why?
mar: because it is all my fault
katja: he made his choice sleeping with you
mar: Istarted it.. I don't care you are mad and angry at me, but please.. say taht you can forgive him.. it's eating at him..
katja: i can't forgive him
mar: at least, try not to be mad at him.. Please katja
katja: i can't...sorry
mar looked down
katja: he hurted me so badly
*Mar: So did I... with you and with Ony..
katja: yeah...but ony is happy again
mar: good
katja: i was with him and basty in the zoo yesterday....well also tommy were with us
mar: you told tommy about basty?
katja: yes i told
mar: good *smile*
katja: yeah
mar: Well, I have to go now..
katja: or do you wanna go to a coffee with me
mar: sure
they went to a coffee
mar: is ony very mad?
katja: yes to you
mar: I didn't expect it to be easy..
katja: he call you as a bitch
mar: still?
katja: yeah
Mar shrugged: If it satisfies him..
katja: he have a girlfriend
mar: good
katja: yeah
mar: Do I know her?
katja: yes you know her
mar looked askew
katja: it's me
mar: O-kay
katja nodded
mar: I hope you can make him happy
katja: yes i can
mar: good.. tell him I wish him the best of the world.. I have to go now..
katja: yes i tell him...it was...it was nice to talk with you
mar: I.. agree
katja: let's see what will happen on future
mar nodded and left
also katja left

Part 30

mar was confused
she didn't know what to believe
she could understand why Ony hated her, but she didn't want him to be mad at Mikel.. neither should Katja
she went to home
Mikel was sitting on a chair in teh garden
mar went to the garden
Helooked upfrom a magazine
mar: hey
Mikel: Hey. how was shopping?
mar: it was okey
she sat down
mar: i saw katja
Miekl: Okay..
mar: we talked a bit
Mikel nodded
mar: i tried to get her forgive you
mar: she can't, she said
mikel nodded
mar: I'm sorry..
mikel: it's ok
mar: She should be mad at me, not you.. It was my fault..
mikel: it was also my fault
mar burried her face in her hands
mikel: it's good that she even talked with you
mar: Ony calls me bitch..
mikel: yeah i know
she sat against him
mikel looked at her
mar: I hope he will forgive you..
mikel: yeah me too
mar: and I hiope tehsame about katja..
mikel: i don't believe that she would forgive me
mar: She has to!
mikel: nope if she doesn't want
mar: She has to! I mean.. How shedislikes you, hurts you.. I can see it Mikel.. I canevenfeel it..
mikel: yes it's true...it's hurt me
he laid his hand against her cheek: But I have you..
mar nodded
Mikel: And I love you, ok?
mar: and i love you
Mikel: good *smile*
mar smile back
he kissedher
she kissed him back
Mikel: My heart beats solo para ti...
mar: i heard
she smiled
mikel smiled back
they sat there for quite some time
meanwhile katja's home
ony was playing with tommy
katja: hey
ony: hey sweety
tommy: mummy call me always sweety
ony: but you are sweet
tommy nodded
ony smiled
tommy smiled back
theygot up
katja sat down on sofa
ony sat down next toher
tommy went to play on his room
katja: i met Mar..
ony: what she?
*Katja: yes..
ony: did you talked with her?
katja: she started a talk, yes
ony: what she talked?
katja: she asked if it was Mikel's baby
ony: okey
katja: Just the random, and she asked if I could please forgive Mikel
ony: but you can't
katja: no
ony: i really understand you
katja smiled
ony smiled back
katja: He has made a mistake..
ony: yeah he made
katja: And so has Mar
ony: yeah also she
hesighed
ony: but i have you now *smile*
katja: And I have you
katja: and i'm happy with you
ony:good
katja nodded
he kissed her
she kissed him back
tommy came back
he went to sit katja's lap
tommy: my action man lost his arm in a fight..
katja: awwww
tommy: can you help him?
katja: okey let's see
he gotr his dolll
katja helped tommy's action man
tommy: yay!
tommy: thank you mummy
katja: it's ok honey
he went to play again
ony: he is really cute
katja: yes he is
she smiled
katja: he doesn't know anything about my other life
katja: and it's better that he doesn't
ony: yeah it's better
they sat there for quite some time
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Part 31

4 nights later alex and katja went to stole cars
thistime it went more difficult
katja: damn it...police are over there
alex: let's get teh hell outtahere
katja nodded
they sneaked away
they went to home
katja: stupid police
alex: oh yeah
katja: all the bad guys work there..
alex nodded
they walked inside
they went to sleep
the next day Mikel got a call for an undercover operation
mikel: yes?
Mikel: Okay.. yes, I'll be there..
he ended
mar: whowa tha?
mikel: from work
mar: 'kay..
mikel: i have to go
mar: huh?
mikel: i have to go to work...and i don't know when i come back
mar: undercover?
mikel: yes
mar: can you come at least back in bed for a few minutes before you leave for a while?
mikel nodded
he got back in bed
but soon he left
mar sighed
mikel went to work
mar: And now I willbe alone for at least three months
mar: what i should do
shestretched her arms
one month later mar got a call
mar: yes?
doctor: do you know mikel hennet?
mar: yes.. he's my boyfriend
doctor: he's in hospital
mar: o-okay
doctor: he have get a shot
mar: what?
doctor told everything
mar was crying on the phone
soon they ended
mar called katja
katja: yes?
mar: Mikel..
katja: what about him?
mar: he.. he..
katja: what?
mar: he gotshot..
katja: what?? omg
mar: he's in the hospital.. please, katja I need your support now..
katja: yes you will get
mar: thank you..
katja: where are you now?
mar: home..
katja: okey i come there or are do you go to hospital
mar: no..
katja: no what?
mar: I'm at home, and too messed up to drive..
katja: i can drive
mar: please bring me to Mikel..
katja: i'm soon there
mar: ok
they ended
mar pased up and down

Part 32

soon katja came with ony
mar opened
katja: hey
mar: hey
katja: let's go
they walked to teh car
katja: i was working when you called to me...
mar: I am sorry.. I didn't knowwho to call..
katja: it's ok...it's good that you called to me
she smiled a bit
ony: btw katja...you have pink paint on your face
katja: oops..
soon they were on hospital
mar ran inside
also katja and ony went inside
mar: Michael hennet?
nurse: over there
mar thanked her and ran faster
she went to mikel's room
she saw him lying in a bed
tears came in her eyes
also ony and katja came
katja hugged mar
mar: He lays sostill...
katja: yeah
Mar: I'm scared
katja: me too
also ony gave her a hug: it will be fine..
then basty and javi came
javi: Are you ok Mar?
mar: i'm scared
javihugged her
she hugged him back
the door opened
mar looked
a doctor walked outside
mar: does he survive?
doctor: with enough rest, I hope so
mar nodded
mar: can.. can I go to him?
doctor: yes
she walked inside
others stayed on corridos
Mikel was asleep
mar looked at him
tears came into her eyes
mar: my poor baby..
meanwhile others talked
javi:never expected this..
basty: me neither
ony: that's teh risk of being a cop
basty: yeah it's true
katja: he better survive..
ony: he will
they sighed
basty: nice colour on your face katja *grinned*
katja: yeah i know...i was working when mar called to me
she rubbed over her cheek
katja: i didn't have time to wash these away
basty: we understand
katja: good
mar came back
katja went to hugs her
mar: he won't wake up..
katja: he have to
mar: I know.. O god.. I'm scared.. so scared..
katja: me too
mar sat down
also katja sat down
javi laid his arm around mar
then ony came to hugs her
mar began to cry: what if he won't wake up..?
ony: shhhh...he will wake up
he rocked her back and forth
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