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katjuzka

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PostSubject: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~   Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~ EmptyThu Apr 30, 2009 8:57 pm

Okey here we go again Razz
New story from Mar and me. We wrote this same way like that other story...
We hope that you like this...

Part 1

it was dark night and two girls broke into one house
quietly they walked around
they found some money and jewelry
quickly they sneeked back out
but they didn't see owner of the house
eldest girl: Crap.. he's home
katja: oh fuck...what we do now?
mar: Yeah, o duh.. run
katja nodded and they started to run but then katja fell against of big window
katja: Auw!
she looked at her leg
mar didn't noticed it at all
katja stood up and tried to walk
it was hard
but she tried to run and she didn't give up
soon she saw a small cottage
katja: mar wait...
butmar couldn't hear her
katja: mar!!!
she turnedaround
katja: i can't run or even walk with this my leg
mar sighed and walked back
katja: but there are some cottage so i could go there...and you could get me later
mar: sure..
katja: thanks
mar ranaway
but first she helped katja to the cottage. meanwhile police came because owner the house called to them
mar: crap
they didn't saw mar and she went away
she wasworried about katja
police: they went to this way and other girl is bleeding
katja got as far as she could into the cottage
police: mikel let's search that bleeding one
Mikel: Sure.. we won't catch the other one now anyway
basty: yeah it's true
they walked away from the house
basty: she really are bleeding...look those blood trace
mikel: Ugh.. Well, we won't haveto clean up
basty just nodded and they started to follow trace
soon they arrived at the cottage
basty: hmmm nice cottage
mikel: Look einstein, our trail leads here
basty: yeah
they got insides, guns aiming into the emptyness
katja heard them and she were quiet
she hoped they wouldn't see her
but then mikel saw her
Mikel: Look who we have here
katja looked at him but didn't say anything
Mikel: Huh, guess she's shy or something
mikel: basty come here
basty walked to him
mikel: i found her
basty: amazing
katja just looked at her leg and tried to stop bleeding
Mikel: We'll take care of it
basty: maybe we should take her to hospital first
Mikel: that was my idea
basty nodded
they helped her up
katja: don't touch me!
she yanked her arm free
she tried to walk but she fell down
katja: god darn it
basty grabbed her and carried her to their car
she sat down on the backseat
basty and mikel sat on the front seat


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Hehe Razz 'mama mia, here we go again! Mama, how can I resist you' sorry
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It sounds so interesting girls. More? Rolling Eyes
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Ask my boss, katja Cool
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A bit later you will get more
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Part 2

quickly they drove to the hospital
basty carried her to inside
adoc was waiting
they went to room and doctor looked at katja's leg
katja was impatient
basty and mikel were whole time next to her
Mikel lent against the wall
katja: *oh fuck...he can't be that guy*
she looked weirdly at him
katja: oh fuck...fuck fuck *close her eyes*
Mikel: What?
katja: nothing
Mikel; right..
katja: well i have 3 years old child...and your friend is his father...
basty: pardon?
katja: you have 3 years old son
basty: ok?
katja: he looks just like you
basty thought deeply
katja looked at him
basty: I don'tremember you..
katja: it was just one night thing...almost 4 years ago...
basty: Wait..
katja: yes i wait
basty thoughtagain: wait.. I know you now yeah..
katja: you know?
basty: yup.. themartini-girl
katja: oh yeah...my favourite drink *smile*
basty smiled as well
katja: he have your smile
Mikel: He must look sort of cute then
katja: yes he is so cute
she smiledproud liek a real mum
katja: he's everything to me
Basty: i can imagine
katja: yeah
she smiled a crooked smile
doctor put gypsum to her leg and gave to her crutch
katja: great..
basty: mikel wait with her here so i get the car near of the doors
Mikel: yup
basty left and katja start to make a plan
If she could only liberate her arm from Mikel's iron grip..
katja: that hurts...
Mikel: Sorry
katja: can you let go...i'm not going anywhere
Mikel looked suspecting at her, but let go of her arm
katja: thank you
she rubbed over the soar spot on her arm
then she smiled and took her crutch and hit mikel quite hardly on his head
he groaned and fell on teh floor
katja left as fast as she could to the doors
Mikel was unconsious
doctors went to mikel
they laid him on a bed
then basty came
basty: what the hell happened?
doctor: it look like that someone hit him on his head
Mikel: that stupid bitch
basty: tell me everything
Mikel told what had happened
basty nodded: where she is now?
Mikel: Out.. somewhere
basty: damn it
Mikel: Probably looking for her partner.. try teh cottage
basty: okey i will...can you come or should you stay here?
Mikel: Ask the doc who will stitch me up
basty: doc...can he leave from here?
doc: not yet.. The blow was pretty hard, so he might have a concussion
basty nodded
basty: I'll come to visit later
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muahahaha Twisted Evil

Sorry,, weird mood tonight
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It's ok Mar Razz
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You know me; I'm loco Cool and I like it, ha
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And don't ever change Razz
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Of course not! Why would I? Razz
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Yeah Very Happy:D
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hahahaha i like this story!!
go on chicas!!! Very Happy
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Thank you Very Happy
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Part 3

then he went to out but he didn't see their car
basty: hail that woman.. hail her.. dude, my car!
one boy: sir...i saw one girl with the crutch taking a police car
basty: She stole my car!
boy: she drove away very fast...and almost drove over one old lady...
basty shook his head: is the lady ok?
boy: yes she is...
basty: good
basty went back to mikel
Mikel: Back already?
basty: she stole our car
Mikel: No
basty: yes
Mikel: No way! Our nice Impala?
basty: yes yes
Mikel: Bitch..
basty: yeah...bitch
they were quiet for a while
meanwhile katja drove to her and mar's home
her leg was hurting, but she didn't care
katja: aah...finally home
she stumled back to the house
katja: heyyy mar...i'm back
mar: finally
katja: police catched me and they got me into hospital
mar: well, I'm glad you're home now
katja: yeah me too...other police went to get car near the doors and other stayed with me...so i hit him on my crutch and then i stole their car
Mar: haha!
katja: car is there outside
mar: is it any good?
katja: it's good car
mar: As long as it's not a Fiantpanda
katja: go to outside and look
mar gave katja her son and walked outside
she stared at the car
mar: oooo my god!
katja came with her son outside: maybe we should paint that some other colour...and change those number plate
mar: Well, we can make it black.. I think the numberplate of my old opel will fit
katja nodded
mar: i'll check it right away
katja: good
she walkedaround toget the numberplate of her old car
soon she came back
she yanked the old one of teh impala
katja: hahaa we have a car now
mar: Better than that stupid Opel Agila
katja: yeah
mar: good, I'll drive it to the garage tomorrow to let it re-colored
katja nodded
they got back inside
next morning basty and mikel went to practise with javi and ony
Mikel: don't besurprised if I stop all thesudden
ony: dude what happen to you? you have nice bruise
Mikel: his previous one night stand hit me with her crutch
ony: what??
Basty: one of my one night stands hit him in an atempt to take of
ony: why?
Mikel: Cozshe wanted to be free..?
ony nodded
Mikel: Look, she was involved with a robery last night
ony: okey
Mikel: Herpartner was probably waiting so she took of
basty: and she stole our car
Mikel: my beautiful Impala
javi: smart girl
Mikel: I don't like her
javi nodded
Mikel:We won't see that car again
basty: unfortunately
Mikel: You will buy me a new car mate
basty: okey i will buy
Mikel: And do not dare to think about a Fiat or an Opel
basty: i don't
Mikel: good
basty: i'm still a bit shock what she told
ony and javi looked curious
basty: she told that i have 3 years old son
guys:Whaat?
javi: wait..
javi: okey now i understand why one little boy look like you
basty: right
javi: i have seen him on the park sometimes...and he play with my son...
basty: could you take a photo of him?
javi: yes i can
basty: thanks
javi: sometimes he is there with his mom and sometimes with nanny or something...
Mikel: describe them
javi describe them
Mikel: Well, teh mum is the lady who hit me
javi nodded
Mikel: And I think, that the nanny is her partner
javi: okey
Basty: Any ideawhere she lives?
javi: nope
mikel: We'll find out
javi nodded
ony: can we dance now?
basty: yes
ony: awesome
they started to Dance
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Razz We're baaaaaaaaaaaaaad Laughing
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Oh yeah Very Happy:P
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lol..xD
nice part!Smile
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Part 4

while at the house of Katja
katja: mar i didn't tell you one thing
mar: tellme
katja: i met my son father yesterday
mar: ok..?
katja: he's that other police
mar: the blondeone, right?
katja: yes
mar: nowyousay so.. he looks liek your son
katja: yes he looks like
they looked at the little boy
katja: somehow i don't want that he would meet his father
mar:eventually, he will
katja: yeah
tommy looked up
katja looked at him and smiled
tommy:Mummy? Will youplay with me?
katja: yes of course
she sat down next to him
they started to play
mar looked at them
two days later katja went to park with tommy and javi where there with his son and ony
tommy played with the little copyof Javi
katja looked at them and smiled
javi: isthat your son?
katja: yes
javi: He's cute
katja: yeah he is...also your son is cute
javi: thank you
katja: you're welcome
javi"what's your son's name?
katja: tommy...your?
Javi: Jairo
katja: cute name *smile*
Javi: My wife chose it
katja: she have good taste...how long you have been married?
javi: nearly two years
katja: okey
javi:Areyoumarried?
katja: nope
javi: ok
katja: and i don't have even boyfriend
javi: but.. who's the dad oftommy then?
katja: it was just one night thing
javi nodded
ony looked at her
katja: what?
ony: nothing
soon jairo and tommywalked back
katja: did you have fun sweety? *smile*
tommy nodded
katja: good...
tommy: jairo is a really nice friend mummy
katja: that is great thing *smile*
jairo: And I played nice with you Tommy
tommy: yeah
jairo: do you wanna be my friend?
tommy: yes i wanna be *smile*
jairo smiled as well
katja: awww so cute
javi: agreed
ony: yeah he really look like basty...
javi kicked against hisleg
katja: what??? you know his father?
javi: you stupid cow *whispers*
ony ignored him. Ony: yes
katja: damn it...
she lifted Tommy up: i ahve to go
she left
quickly she got home
she went to livingroom
there she found mar doing the laundry
katja: hey
mar: hey
katja: i met two guys on the park
mar: tell me
katja: they are tommy's fathers friends
mar: no way, blondies friends?
katja: yes
mar: ok
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awesomeness
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Very Happy:D
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Part 5

meanwhile javi and ony went to basty's place
basty opened teh door
javi: hey
basty: hola
javi: i have some pics for you
he took his phone and showed them
basty: he's cute
ony: he looks like you
basty nodded
they sat down
javi: he were there with his mom
basty: can you describeher?
javi: she had cructhes
basty: Duh
javi: and she left right away when ony said that we know you
ony: sorry
basty nodded
javi: She's not married nor has a bf
basty: okey
javi: i haven't seen the nanny
basty: i like to meet my son
javi: I can imagine
basty: yeah
javi: come with me the next time I go to tha park
basty: okey i come
javinodded
one week later katja and mar went to park with tommy
basty and Javi were there as well
katja: oh fuck
mar: wha? O crap.. Blondie
katja: oh yeah
they walked to another bench
tommy: jairoo *smile*
katja smiled
jairo: tommy come to play with me
tommy: sure
tommy: can i go mom?
katja: Sure honey
tommy went to play with jairo
javi and basty looked at the girls
katja looked back but then she turned her head away
mar: I gotta be honnest.. Blondies friend is cute
katja: yes he is
both girls smiled
katja: i could take him but he's married
mar: Aww... too bad
katja: yeah...
they watched tommy play
also basty looked at tommy and also he looked at katja
basty: my son.. I can't believe it..
javi: he's cute and jairo's friend
basty smiled
javi smiled back
basty: Shall we talk to them?
javi nodded
they got up and walked to the girls
girls looked at them
javi: Look basty, this is tommy's mum and that her nanny, I think..
katja: she's not tommy's nanny...
javi: Sorry..
katja: it's ok
mar: I'm just a friend of her
katja: yeah...we have know each other quite long
mar: Since high school
katja: actually earlier...we have quite same kind of backround
mar: O yeah..
katja: our dad's knew each other
javi nodded
katja: i miss my dad...i haven't meet him for long time
mar: Mine is in the ground..
katja: i don't even know where my dad is
mar: We won't give up searching, remember?
katja: yeah i remember...but maybe it's good that he doesn't come here anymore...
javi: what do you mean?
katja: police would catch him right away...
javi was even more confused now
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Hah, we confused Basty I need the batman-smily..
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I like it.More? Rolling Eyes
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Part 6

basty: don't say that your father is that drug dealer and almost terrorist...
katja: yup..
katja: he's my father...
basty nodded
katja: he saw tommy when he born...
katja: And after that he disappeared
she were quiet
mar: It's not personal honey..
katja: yeah i know that...my bro keep saying that a lot to me
mar: how is he btw?
katja: he's fine
mar: good *smile*
katja: he's getting married soon...they just have to find perfect day and place
mar: That's cool
katja: yeah...i'm so happy for him...well they have to find some safe place what police can't find
mar shrugged: That's what you get eventually
katja: yeah hope so
javi: Right.. Well, I know your name, but what's your name then?
And he looked at mar
mar: i'm mar
javi: Nice to meet you, I'm Javi
mar: nice to meet you too
katja: you have nice name
javi: thank you
katja: you're welcome
basty: And my name is Basty
katja: you have nice name too
mar: So taht's blondies name *smile* Nice to meet you
basty: nice to meet you too...even i should arrest both of you
mar: pardon?
basty: because of that robbery
mar: who says we were part of it? Where the hell are you talking about?
basty: nice try...at least your friend were part of that robbery
mar: then why are you saying you should arrest both of us if you only know she was part in it?
basty: owner the house told that he saw two girls
mar: and who says I amnumber two?
basty: my instinct
mar: well, your instinct stinks
katja: and you are not going to arrest me front of my son
javi: She has a point..
katja: of course i have a point
basty rolled with his eyes
katja: because you are police....do you know ashley?ex-police
basty: She was one of my partners
katja nodded: she's nice girl
basty: How do you know her?
katja: she is my bro's girlfriend
basty: No way
katja: yes
basty: so your borther's name must be Marcus..
katja: yeah
javi: is it ok if we sit down..?
mar: yes it's ok
they sat down
katja: i have 3 brothers
basty: Are they all like Marcus?
katja: oh yeah...how you know marcus?
basty: ashley introduced him
katja: okey...what do you think about marcus?
basty: he's ok, I suppose
katja: also he have done some robberies but not so much than rest of us
bastynodded
suddenly mikel came there
Mikel: hey guys
basty: hey mikel
hesat down
katja: is your head okey?
Mikel: Not thanks to you
katja: yeah but i had to do something
mar: haha, you are the fool she hit?
mikel: yeah that's me
he rubbed his hair and smiled
mar smiled back to him
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