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Marjolein

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Sad Poor poor Mikel.. *Creeps into the story, sneeks into Mikel's room and jumps on the bed* Wake uhuhuuup! *jumps up and down* wakker worden wak-wak-wakker worden, wakker worden, wak-wak-wakker worden!
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oh no!!!! i hope he wakes up =/
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PostSubject: Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~   Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~ - Page 5 EmptyTue Jun 16, 2009 11:39 pm

Part 33

basty: btw katja...you haven't talk about your third bro at all...
katja: well yeah...i haven't
Javi: Okaaaay..?
katja: he's a police
Basty: I think I met him once
katja: really?
basty nodded
katja: i saw him last time when i was 18 and i had just find out that i'm pregnant...
basty: ok
katja: guess what he said
ony: taht you were a whore?
katja: nope
ony: I don't know..
katja: that you have to find that guy and marry him
basty: okaay..
katja: but i said to him that i don't know anything about that guy so i can't find him
they nodded
katja: i think that he works in USA now
basty: cool
katja: yeah
she smiled
ony: mar i'm sorry that i have call you as bitch...
mar: It's ok.. I understand it
ony nodded
mar: but I'm glad you apologise
ony smiled
a nurse walked to them: WHo of you is Mar?
mar: me
nurse: He asked for you
mar stood up
she followed teh nurse
they went to mikel's room
Mikel: h-ey sweety
mar: heyy
Miekl smiled
mar: everyone is here
Mikel nodded
mar sat down next to him
Mar: How do you feel?
mikel: a bit weak at the moment
Mar: get some sleep.. I'm here..
mikel nodded
Mar took his hand and caressed it slowly. Soon he was sleeping
she looked at him when he were sleeping
his hair was a mess
she made his hair better
she pressed a kiss on his forehead
mar: i love you
she sat back down
meanwhile others
Ony: Thank God, he woke up..
katja: yeah...oh ony try *took ony's hand and put on her belly*
Ony: It's kicking!
katja nodded and smiled
Ony smiled as well and kissed her
she kissed him back
javi: Aww,,,
basty: cute
both smiled
then mar came back to them
mar: he's sleeping now
basty: okey
Ony: you look much better now
mar: thanks
she sat back down

Part 34

much later katja and ony left
mar: Javi, I bet jairo and your wife are waiting for you..
javi: yeah they are
mar: Go..
javi nodded and left
basty stayed
basty: i can stay here with you
mar: thank you..
basty: no problem
mar: I'm glad Ony and Katja are together
basty: you are?
mar nodded
basty: ony is lucky guy
mar: yup.. Katja is a really nice girl
basty: yes she is
mar: you love her, don't you?
basty: yes
mar smiled
basty: but don't tell her
Mar: I won't
basty: thanks
both smiled
basty: it's good that she told to tommy about me
mar: I agree
basty: but she doesn't trust me enough
Mar: It will come, little by little
basty: yeah...always when i meet tommy she comes with us or alex...or marcus
mar: give it some time.. Tommy means a lot to her
basty: yeah i have see
mar: I think you would have done the same
basty: yeah
he smiled
basty: but she is great mom
mar nodded
they were quiet
basty: do you wanna have kids?
mar: maybe some day
basty: Aww...
mar: do you want more kids?
basty: Maybe.. if I find the right girl..
mar: and you will find
she smiled
basty: hope so
mar: Do you want some coffee?
basty: yes i want
mar: good
she went to get coffee to them
basty looked through the window at Mikel
soon mar came back
mar: coffee
basty: thanks
mar: no problem
basty: someone have been very busy stealing cars last 2 months...
mar: I heard..
basty: police doesn't know who
mar walked to Mikel's door
mar: but you have you thoughts who stole
basty: maybe.. I'm not sure
mar nodded
basty: it could be Katja..
basty: and alex
mar shrugged: I don't know..
basty: yeah...but it's not my problem
mar: true
basty: but that paint on katja's face...
mar: Maybe she was painting the baby room..?
basty: yeah maybe
they drank their coffee
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Marjolein

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Go Mikel *cheers*

Thankingyou for the parts <3*
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You're welcome Very Happy
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awwww Mikelito!!!! get well soon honey!! Smile
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Very Happy Very Happy
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Part 35

and later also basty left home
mar walked into Mikel's room and sat down
she looked at him
he looked peaceful
a few days later mikel were ready to go home
Mikel: Finally.. Home sweet home..
mar smiled
she helped him to teh couch
she sat next to him
Mikel laid his arm around her
mar: i love you
Mikel: I love you too
mar: good
she smiled
mikel smiled back
he gave her a kiss
she kissed him back
mar: So now I have to play nurse for a while?
mikel: yes you have to
mar: Mmm.. Do I need to wear the outfit as well?
mikel: that would be nice
mar: I see what I can do hennet
mikel: very short skirt and some kind of top
mar: oi!
mikel grinned
mar: fine.. Everything to make you feel better
mikel: yay
he smiled
two days later basty's boss wanted to move him back to police.to help finding cars stealers
basty: *Right.. You can work there. No, now you will work on balistics.. You know what? Go back to your own department.. Ugh..*
one guy: are you basty?
basty: I think so yes, it was my name the last time I checked
guy: good...i came to help you to catch those cars stealers
basty: And you are... who?
nick: my name is nick
basty: Nice to meet you
nick: nice to meet you too...it's nice to be back here
basty: Where were you before then?
nick: in USA
basty nodded: Cool
nick: yeah
he sat down on a chair
nick: i have 3 kids and i wanna that they would speak better spanish
he rubbed his hair
basty nodded
Nick: Do you have kids?
basty: yes...son
nick: Cool
basty: yeah...he's now a bit over 3
nick: Awww.. they're cute at that age
basty: yes they are
he smiled

Part 36

nick: i came back here a few days ago...and i should call to my sis and bro's
basty: There's a phone over there.. I still need to decorate my desk
nick: i can call to them later...they doesn't even know that i'm here
basty shrugged: it's yourcall dude
nick: yeah...we are not so close because i'm a police
basty: Wait a minute..
nick nodded
basty went through a few boxes and dug a photoframe up
nick looked at him
basty: Is this your sister?
nick: yes...katja
basty nodded
nick: how you know her?
basty: She's the mother of my son
nick: okey
basty putted the frame down on his desk
nick: are you together?
basty shook his head
nick nodded
Basty: she's together with one of my friends
nick: okey...
basty: it's complicated
nick: how?
basty: Do you know Mar?
nick: yes...katja's friend
basty: Vale.. That friend was first Mar's boyfriend and katja had a relation with my other friend. But they cheated, Mar and katja's former BF, and now she has with him, and Katja with Mar's ex
nick nodded
basty: Complicated
nick: yeah...what you feel about katja?
basty: Just..
nick: what?
basty: I..
nick: yes?
Basty: Iloveherbutcan'ttellhercozshe'swithmyfriend..
nick: awwww
basty sighed
then basty's phone ring
basty: Yes?
katja: heyy...
basty: hey katja
katja: do you have time to meet tommy today?
basty: Sure..
katja: good...when?
basty: When I cleaned my desk.. which will take about an hour..
katja: okey...come to park then
basty: I will
katja: good...see ya then *she ended*
basty laid hisphone on his desk
nick looked at him
basty: katja
nick: what she called?
basty: when i could meet my son
nick: okey
basty began to put his stuff back on his desk
soon he were done
basty: good meeting my son
nick: can i come with you
basty: why not?
they went to park
katja was there with tommy
tommy: daddyy *run to basty*
basty: hey big man
tommy: i missed you
basty: i missed you too
katja: he talked about you these last days so much
she smiled
then she notice nick and stared at him
nick: hey
katja: nick?
nick: the one and only
katja: omg you are back *smile and hugs him*
nick smiled as well
katja: when you came?
nick: A few days ago
katja: okey
nick: I'm basty's new colleugue
katja: hmmm nice
she smiled
nick: police really want to catch those cars stealers
basty: Then they will leave us alone again..
katja: *damn it...nick is way too good police*
basty: We'll take tommy to see some cars. There are races at teh circuit now, and I got tickets
katja nodded
basty: I wanted to ask you first katja, but is it ok if I take Nick with us? So Tommy can meet him..?
katja: yes it's ok
tommy:Bye mummy!
katja: keep fun sweety
she wavedand turned around
katja: basty...bring tommy home
basty: Don't worry, I will
katja nodded
Basty, tommy and Nick left
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Marjolein

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Naww.. I got Mikel back home <3
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Part 37

katja went to home
basty: ready for some cars mate?
tommy: yessss
basty laughed
they went to watch it
tommy even got on photos with racers
meanwhile katja and alex worked that they would get a few cars away before basty bring tommy
katja: Nick is back
alex: what??
katja: Nick is here
alex: damn it...
he threw a brush in the paint
alex: we have to be more carefully
katja nodded
they finished cars
and also tommy came back
katja and alex were in livingroom
basty carried him inside
katja: hey...you came
basty: yes
katja: did you have fun?
basty: he had.. He was so tired that he fell asleep
katja: okey...give him to me so i go to put him on bed
basty gave him tokatja
katja went to put tommy to bed
basty sat down
also nick came inside
nick: heyAlex
alex: hey nick
also nick sat down
alex: why you came back?
nick: Carla wanted to go back to Spain, adn I could easely get a job here.. Besides; Europe is safer for teh kids
alex nodded
soon katja came back
she sat down next to alex and nick notice her belly
nick: Pregnant again?
katja: yes
nick nodded
katja: aaah look like that you are not going to say anything about marriage like last time...
nick shrugged: You know how I think about it, so..
katja: yeah i know
nick: Who's the father?
katja: my ex
nick: The boyfriend of Mar, right?
katja: yes...how you know it?
nick: basty explained
katja: okey
nick: Kinda complicated..
katja: yeah it's true
basty: before you get mad, I didn;t told him names, which made it even more complicated
katja nodded
basty looked at his watch: i have to run, before Ony will kill me.. Practise
katja: then go *smile*
basty got up and left
others stayed there
Soon Nick left as well

Part 38

two nights later katja and alex went steal cars
alex: I don't like Nick being here aat ALL...
katja: i don't like either
they quickly brought the cars back home
next day on police station
Nick: There are a few new cars stolen
basty: yeah i heard
nick: We need to do something..
basty: yes
they sighed
basty: he or they are so good...
nick: You say he.. why not she?
basty: yeah maybe she...we don't know who steals those cars
nick: The pint is.. Where will he/she/they go stealing now?
basty: good guestion
nick: We can't check every house in Mdrid
basty: no, we can't
nick walked to the window
basty: he/she/they took older cars and also brand new cars
nick: It's too hard..
basty: yeah
nick: Let's go through this one moretime..
basty nodded and they did it
basty: Ok, I give up..
nick: yeah me too
basty looked at the clock
nick: do you have to go somewhere
basty: not really.. I onlywanna visit my old partner
nick: go
basty got up and walked all the way to Mikel's house
mar had her nurse costume on
basty: wow, what a view
mar: oh hey
Mikel: hey mate
basty: hey
Mikel smiled
basty sat down on sofa
mar: Do you want something to drink Basty?
basty: yes
mar: What?
basty: you can choose
mar: ok
mar went to get something to basty
basty: Why are you wearing the outfit mar?
mar: mikel wanted
Mikel grinned
basty: hmmm nice
Mikel: hehe.. I'm smart
basty: yeah....i have get new work mate
Mikel: tell me
basty: his name is nick
mar dropped a glass: shoot!
mikel: mar?
mar: Yes darling?
mikel: are you okey?
mar: ehh.. yes.. I dropped a glass
mikel looked at her
she kneeled down to pick the fragments up
mikel: tell me what is wrong?
mar: Nothing... Just.. that name brings back some memories
mikel: tell me
mar: Nick is Katja's third brother.. I know him quite some time.. You can say, we have a sort of history..
mikel nodded
mar took another glass
she gave drink to basty
she sat down next to Mikel: I was 16, and had my first real boyfriend..
mikel nodded
mar: He was elder, if I remember i right he was 18. I was so naive and in love..
mikel: okey...
mar: The last schoolday he told me he had a surprise.. He took me to his place, and pushed me on his bed. He tied my wrists to teh headboard and he.. he..
mikel: shhhhh...*he hugs her*
mar: I didn't dare to tell my parents.. My dad would have gone mad.. When he found out he got a heartattack and died.. I still feel guilty about that.. But I told Katja about it, and she said that Nick could help me, to lock him up..
mikel: and he helped you...
mar: yes.. Nick helped me a lot, and when my parents found out he asked katja if I could live with her.. That was right before he took of with his wife to the USA
mikel: he sounds nice guy
mar: he is..
basty: he is nice guy...but katja and alex are not happy that he's back
mar: i can imagine..
basty: yeah...
mar: Where is he now? I have missed him.. He became sort of my brother Inever had..
basty: maybe i could call to him that he would come here
mar: then I'm gonnachange my clothes first
basty called to nick

Part 39

mar ran upstairs and changed her nurse-costume for a pair of jeans and a T-shirt
soon nick came
Mar: hey Nick!
nick: heyy mar *smile*
Mar: So good to see you
nick: you too
they hugged each other
nick: how are you?
mar: fine *smile*
nick: good *smile*
mar: Met mr. RightI hope
nick: let's hope the best
Mikel: That was about me, right?
mar: yes
Mikel: Don't worry
mar: i don't
she smiled
mikel smiled back
nick: You must be the dad of my new nephew
mikel: yes
nick: I'm Nick, katja's brother
mikel: nice to meet you....i'm mikel
Nick: Agreed
mikel: but she are not going to let me meet my child
Nick: Coz you were unfaithful?
mikel: yeah
Nick: And now she has with your ex, right Mar?
mar: yes
Nick nodded
mar: i hope good luck to them
Nick: I haven't met him yet
mar: maybe you meet him some day
she smiled
nick: yeah maybe
mar: Sit down. Do you wanna drink something?
nick: yes thanks *sat down*
mar: What do you want?
nick: what do you have?
mar: lots.. Coz Mikel is still recovering..
nick: you can choose
mar: ok
she went to get some drink
soon she came back
she gave to nick his drink
nick: thanks
mar: you're welcome
mar: I need to clean up.. If you need anything just call me ok honey?
mikel nodded
mar smiled and walked into the kitchen
guys started to talk
Mikel mumbled under his breath
basty: do you have problems mikel?
Mikel: yes.. Well.. For me it is hehe
basty: what?
Mikel: I liked mar's other outfit more..
basty: aaah *grinned*
Mikel grinned
nick looked at them
mar: I heard it Hennet!
mikel: sorry
Nick: Oufit..? Huh?
mikel: nurse outfit
he smiled childish
nick: aah now i understand
and also Nick smiled
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yey Cool
Go nick *cheers*
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Nice Story girls!!!!!!! Very Happy
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Part 40

next day nick went to visit on katja's home and he saw katja kissing with ony
he smiled and waited
they kissed quite long
nick knocked on the window
katja: oh...hey nick
nick:hey sis
katja: when you came?
nick: Afew minutes ago
katja: okey
nick smiled
katja: he's ony my boyfriend and he's my bro nick
ony: Nice to meet you Nick
nick: nice to meet you too
they shook hands
they went to kitchen have coffee
ony: So you're the last bro?
nick: yeah it's me
he sipped from his coffee
katja: he's almost 10 years older than me
ony:begin thirty, right?
nick: yeah
Ony: Mar has told some about you, the first time we met
nick: okey
ony: About when she was 16.. I think both of you remember
katja: yes we remember...it's something what you can't forget
she looked at her mug
katja: but it's good that she have get over it
Nick: i agree. She seems really happy now
ony: yeah
Katja: I'm glad that she found her Mr. Right.. Coz now I found mine as well
nick: good *smile*
katja smiled as well
a few months later katja got her baby
she wasreally happy
ony were with her there
Ony: Awesome! I'm a dad, I think
katja: yeah you are...sort of
ony: Cool
katja: could you call to mikel?
Ony: Sure
katja: thanks
she smiled and looked at her baby
katja: also you can ask him to come here
ony: oky-doky
ony went to call
Mikel: Yes?
ony: you are daddy now
Mikel: Awesome!
ony: you are welcome to meet your child
Mikel: Really?
ony: yes
Mikel: Is it a girl or a boy?
ony: a girl
Mikel: okay. Mar and I will be there soon
they ended
not muchlater they were there
katja: hey
Mikel: hey
katja: here is your daughter
Mikel: She'sadorable..
katja: yes she is
Mar: She looks like both of you
ony: yes it's true
Mikel: But she has your eyes..
katja: hmmm yeah
Mikel smiled
katja smiled back
Mikelhe's gorgeous
katja: do you wanna hold her?
Mikel: yes please
katja gave her to mikel
Mikel looked at her
mikel: i can't believe that i'm dad
he smiledand a tear rolled over his cheek
katja: i'm not mad at you anymore...
Mikel: No?
katja: nope
Mar smiled and laid her hand on Mikel's shoulder

Part 41

two years later katja were stealing cars with alex
soon lights blinded them
katja: oh fuck
she held her hand above her eyes
katja: damn it
alex: shit
police catch them
katja was sitting in a small room
waiting what will happen next
soon teh door opened, and an unhappy looking manwalked inside
Katja: o let me guess.. You're the bad cop
katja: where's good cop?
guy: He'll be soon here
katja: okey
the door opened again and a younger guy walked inside
katja: hmmm...you are cute
first cop: You'd better behave madam. Maybe we will be nice for you
katja: okey i will behave
she smiledand crossedher arms
she looked at them
the cute one opened his mouth: I'm agent Lopez, and that's agent Van Buren
katja nodded
Van Buren took it over
katja looked at him
van buren: Look, we can arest you, but we have heard you ahve two little children. We have two options for you
katja: yes i have two little children and they need me...what options?
van buren: A) Go toprison, or B) Marry acop
katja: what??? i'm already engaged
van buren: Sorry
katja: how many years i would get?
van buren: Probably, because you ahev been stealing many cars, about 5 till 10
katja: that would be so hard to explain to kids because they doesn't know anything what i'm doing...
she looked at teh table
katja: damn it....
van buren: So what will you do?
katja: marry a cop
van buren smiled
katja: who is that cop?
lopez: i think you know him..
katja: really?
lopez nodded
katja: who?
lopez gave her a photo
katja: damn it...does he know?
lopez: Well, he does now
katja: okey
a door opened
katja looked
the man of tehphoto walked inside
katja didn't say anything
'I knewit was you Katja.. iknew you were behind this..'
katja: behind what?
'behind all thos cars..'
katja: hmmm yeah
the man sat down in front of her: Lopez, van Buren: leave.
they left
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Part 42

katja looked at him: And somehow I knew it would be you, Basty..
basty: you do?
katja: you are theonly cop i know, who doesn't have a girl yet
basty: well yeah...
katja: it could have been Mikel..
basty: but he's with mar
katja: Exactly
katja: what happen to alex?
basty shrugged: nick is talking with him now
katja: okey
katja: Soo.. Ihave to marry you huh?
basty nodded
katja: pretty ironic..
katja: i need to talk with ony
basty: of course
katja: when i can talk with him?
basty: Shall i call him?
katja nodded
basty took his cell and called Ony
meanwhile nick and alex
nick: i never expected to be the one who'd question you
alex: yeah
alex sat relaxed at his cahir
he looked at his bro
nick: you think this is funny, don't you?
alex: hmmm yeah
he grinned
alex: but you don't?
nick: Not at all
alex: i can believe it
they were quiet for a while
alex: what question you have?
nick: Why the fuck have you been stealing?
alex: it's sort of hobby
nick: Nice hobby you got *sarcastic*
alex: oh yeah *grinned*
nick rolled hsi eyes
alex: i'm so good of that
nick: *You mean I am so full of myself*
alex looked at him
*Nick sighed
alex: any other question?
Nick: not really
alex: okey
They were quiet for a while
Nick: Got laid recently?
alex: why you ask?
Nick: Coz I can't think of anything else
alex: yes i have get
Nick: With who?
alex: one girl who i met on bar
nick nodded
alex: what about you?
Nick: Carla and I just sit in front of the TV, waiting for the kids to go to bed
alex nodded
Nick: Tonight they're gone, so Carla and I ahve teh house for us alone
alex: nice *smile*
nick: i hope so yeah
ony came to police station
He walked to the room where katja was sitting
katja went to kiss him
ony: hey babe
katja: hey
he smiled
katja: police gave me two option
ony: tell me
katja: prison or marry a cop
ony: o-ok
katja: and i chose marry a cop
ony nodded
katja: guess who that cop is
ony: basty?
katja: yes
ony nodded
katja were quiet
ony: I understand
katja: thanks
basty walked inside
katja looked at him
basty: I'm sorry ony..
ony: i understand...and it's not your fault
basty: thanks

Part 43

next day were their wedding and police gave to them keys to one cottage in teneriffe
basty: Tenerife.. long time ago..
katja: oh yeah
both smiled
they went to inside of cottage
basty: Maybe we can meet mrs and mister hennet
katja: yeah maybe
she sat down on the sofa
but then she looked around of cottage
katja: damn it...nice...
basty: What's nice?
katja: only one bedroom
basty: O awesome! *sarcastic*
katja: what we do?
basty: I'll sleep on the sofa
katja: good...even we are married i'm not going to sleep with you
basty: i agree
katja: good
she laid her suitcase down on the bed
she put her clothes and other stuff on their place
basty laid his suitcase down as well
katja went outside and sat down on ground
she looked at the sea
katja: *maybe i could go to swim later*
she inhaled the salty air
she laid down on ground and looked at sky
clouds were passing by, and she could recognise a few shapes
meanwhile basty were inside
he was putting his clothes in thecloseth
basty: *why i still have to love her*
he sighed
basty: *why she can't love me*
*He shook his head
basty: *first mikel and then ony...but not me*
Basty: Stupid.. ugh
then also he went outside
katja: look, it's more a monkey than a cloud
basty: hmmm yeah
he laid down as well
basty: there is a dog
katja; heh yeah
katja: btw why you haven't find girlfriend yourself?
basty: Coz I haven't met the right girl yet..
katja: awwww
she smiled
katja: what kind of girl would be right one?
basty shrugged
katja: tell me...i wanna know
basty: One where I can talk freely with, who will understand me.. AndI will be like that for her too..
katja: sounds good
basty: Call it a soulmate..
katja: yeah
tehy looked at the clouds some more
katja: is there any girl who you like a bit more...
basty: not really
katja: okey...then you don't love any girl either
basty: nope
katja: okey...shame
she smiled
basty: why it's shame
katja: you're a nice guy
basty: thanks
katja: no problem
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Poor Basty crying!

Great parts, thanks Katja (:
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Poor Basty!!!! But I'm sure she'll love him eventually xD

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awwww...=/
well done chicas!
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Thanks Oli (:
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Thanks girls Very Happy
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Part 44

later they went to sleep but basty couldn't sleep on sofa so well
he just stared at teh ceiling
basty: *i can't go to sleep on bed...damn it*
he sighed, got upand carried his blanket and pillow outside
he tried to sleep outside
he just laid under teh blanket staring at the stars
katja find him there in morning
katja: Hey, wake up
basty: what? oh morning
he yawned
katja: haven't you sleep at all?
basty: A bit..
katja: bed is free so go to sleep
basty: tahnks..
katja: you're welcome...i will put bikini's on and sunbathing
basty: 'kay
basty went to sleep and katja put bikini's on
she took a towel and laid down on teh beach
katja: mmmmm
she smiled
later basty came there and he stared at katja but she didn't notice
basty: *God freaking darn it*
basty: *why she have to be so hot*
He sighed and ran into the ocean to cool down
soon he came back
katja opened her eyes
katja: oh hey
basty: Hola
katja: did you sleep well?
basty: yes
katja: good
she smiled
basty smiled back
basty: Are you hungry?
katja: yes
basty: Shall I make something?
katja: that would be great
basty walked inside
katja follow him
she sat down while he began to cook
she still wear her bikini's
basty: *Focus*
katja went to get some juice and she touched basty by accidentally
chills arn down his spine
she took her juice and went to sit
basty: Good.. its almost ready
katja: mmmm
basty smiled
katja smiled back
soon they could eat
katja: mmmm this is good
basty: thankyou
katja: you're welcome
she began to eat
katja: mmmm...it was good
basty: I'm glad you liked it
katja: i can do something tomorrow
basty: Sure
soon katja went to continue sunbathing
basty stayed inside

Part 45

also next day katja went to sunbathing and this time she took her bikini top off
basty quicklyturned his head away
basty: *damn it*
he felt blood running to his cheeks
he tried to keep his eye away from her
basty: *book*
then katja stood up and went to swim
basty relaxed a bit
soon katja came back
basty concentrated at his book
katja laid on her belly: is that good book?
basty nodded
katja: what is about?
basty: Spanish civil war
katja: okey
she got up again
basty try not to look at her
basty: *You read a book, and it needs your atention*
but still he looked at her
basty: *Ooooo my god..*
he felt that his thing grow
katja: Are you ok?
basty nodded
katja: ok
katja: yay...no bikini limit..or do i?
she looked at basty
basty swallowed
katja: Well?
basty: you don't have limit's...well pants limit you will have
katja nodded
katja: maybe i could sunbathing totally naked tomorrow...but now i go to make some food to us
bastyshook that image away
katja went to make food
basty: *Madre de dνos.. dear god, I will not susrvive these days.. maybe weeks!*
he took his phone and called to mikel
Mikel: Yes?
basty: hey
Mikel: hey mate
basty: i don't know how i will survive here with katja
Mikel: How do you mean?
basty: she were sunbathing without bikini top
Mikel: O-oh
basty: yeah
Mikel: You'll survive
basty: hope so...tomorrow she maybe will sunbathing totally naked
Mikel: haha! Good luck pal
basty: yeah i need that
Mikel: Dont worry, you'll survive
basty: yeah have to
Mikel: I have to go now..
basty: me too...dinner is ready
Mikel: Have a tasty one
basty: katja's turn to cook
Mikel: Hope it's good
basty: yeah
they ended
mar: who it was?
Mikel: basty
mar: okey...what he?
Mikel: He has some trouble...
mar nodded
Mikel: He had to marry katja remember?
mar: yes i remember
Mikel: And katja is sunbathing without bikinitop.. it's hard for him
mar: awww poor basty
mikel: yup..
mar: he loves katja but she doesn't know anything about that
Mikel: It might be better, but he is suffering now
mar: yeah
mar: I hope they will find a way for this..
mikel: i hope too
mar: Good.. what shall we do?
mikel: something nice
he smiled
mar smiled back
mar: What do you wanna do then?
mikel kissed her
mar kissed him back
mikel start to take her clothes off
mar: Mmm..
they had very passionately moment
mar: that has been a while ago..
mikel: yeah
both smiled
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