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Marjolein

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Barbara ;D
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That name were your idea Razz
I have read our olders stories..because i have been bored or something Razz
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heh nice! i love 'loco' too! it's one of my favourites! Smile
well done girlitas! xD
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Gracias Oly
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Thanks Oly Very Happy
Mar when you will post next part Razz
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Ehmm.. Now? Razz


Part 6



The guys were dancing. Basty was off minded and just danced on automatic pilot. Suddenly the sound of high heels on a wooden floor filled the dance hall. A blonde woman, with her short hair in a ponytail and some loose hair covering her blue eyes walked to them. She wore a skinny jeans, blouse and waist coat. She smiled friendly to them. Mikel was glowing, Basty saw it.
-So, this is your mystery girlfriend?- Ony said with a grin.
-Ony, shut your big mouth..- Mikel said back and sighed. He got up and walked to the woman.
-Guys.. Let me introduce you to my wife, Marjolein. Yes Ony. I’m married..
-Nice to meet you guys..- She smiled friendly and stroke the hair out of her face. Basty noticed that she wore glasses now.
-Honey, you forgot your glasses this morning.- And she handed them to Mikel. Basty shook his head.
-Be happy your butt’s attached to the rest of your body Mikel.- Mikel made a face to him. Suddenly Basty got an idea. He got up and walked to the lady.
-Mate, can I borrow your wife for a few seconds?
-As long as you won’t try to hit on her..- He looked suspicious at Basty. Basty smiled and nodded. He took her arm and led her away from his friends.
-I know we just met, but I need your help. Next to being all popular around Spain, I’m a private investigator. And I need to find a woman. The point is, she asked me to. She lost her memory. My question was if you could go shopping with her. She serious needs some new clothes.- Marjolein looked askew at him.
-Sure, why not. I don’t have that much work to do tomorrow so we could go then. Is that ok with you?
-Yes. I’ll pay for the clothes.- Marjolein nodded and walked back to the others.
-Baby, I gotta go now. See you tonight.- She gave him a kiss and walked away.
-Ony, shut your mouth.- Basty said with his back facing his friends and turned the music back on.
-Five, six, seven, eight!- And they continued dancing.
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Part 7

The next morning Barbara tried so hard to remember things and sat down behind the piano and began to play a play. At the same time she got flash backs and also Basty came to livingroom.
-Why the hell you did stole my shirt?- Basty asked.
-Oh... You scared me. I love this shirt and I have to wear something when I go shopping today. And I just got some flash backs when you came.- Barbara said.
-But that shirt is my favourite... Tell me what kind of flash back.- Basty said and sat next to her.
-I played piano at someone's house and that piano was black.- Barbara said.
-Do you remember anything else?- Basty asked.
-No, I don't remember...- Barbara said and continue playing.
Little bit later Marjolein came to Basty's house to get Barbara for shopping. Basty gave his credit card to Barbara that she can buy some clothes.

-You have a beautiful ring.- Marjolein said and smiled.
-Thank you. Yes this is beautiful but I think that this is a quite expensive ring. But I don't remember who gave this to me. Am I married or something?- Barbara said and played with a ring.
-What about your clothes? Basty said to me that you need new clothes.- Marjolein said.
-These clothes? I borrowed this shirt from Basty and he didn't like that at all. This is so long so I thought this would be great dress to me. Also I borrowed this belt from him.- Barbara said.
-You look so great but let's go over there. I really love this shop.- Marjolein said and smiled.
-At least it looks like nice...- Barbara said and they went to the shop.
There were all kind of clothes and both girls took a few clothes what they tried on. Marjolein didn't like her chosen clothes and she brought them back. She went to look if Barbara were ready with her clothes.
-Barbara, are you ready?- Marjolein asked.
-No, I'm not yet. I think that these jeans are good but what do you think.- Barbara said and came to show her jeans.
-That look so great on you. I think that you should buy that jeans.- Marjolein said. Barbara nodded and went back to fitting room.
Barbara put her own clothes back on and went to Marjolein. They went to pay Barbara's clothes and then they went to some other clothes shop and shoe shop. They both bought a lot of clothes and shoes and they had great time together.


-O my God! How much did you buy?!- Basty said and looked a little bit shocked.
-Well, I really needed clothes. I can't use your clothes or the ones I wore when I came to meet you.- Barbara said.
-But, but... Women.- Basty said and shook his head.
-And I don't know how long it takes when my memory comes back.- Barbara said.
-Well, yes you are right...- Basty said,
-Of course I'm right.- Barbara said and grinned.
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LOL... I need to go shopping too xD
Nice parts girls!!!
I bet the girl's name is Katja Razz
heheh xD
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Thank you Very Happy
Yeah maybe it is or maybe not Razz
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Lol xD Thanks Dimitra (:
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ahhhhhhhhhh don't remind me of shopping!!!! i so need new clothes! thank God it's Christmas in few days Laughing
great parts girls!! keep it up Smile
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Part 8


It was early in the morning. Basty woke up from some strange sounds which he couldn’t place.
-What is that for Christ’s sake?- He got out of bed and walked into the livingroom. Barbara was playing piano. She didn’t notice him coming inside, she was focused on her music. Basty sat down on a chair near her. With his head leaning on his hand, he looked at her. Her brown hair covered her face, so he couldn’t see her expression. She hummed along with it and he could here vague some words.
-Crap..- She stopped and laid with her head on her arms down on the keys. A loud pling filled the house. Basty got up and sat down next to her.
-Why I can’t remember who I am?- she turned her face his way, still laying on her arms.
-I only have that stupid ring..- Basty laid his arm around her.
-What did you saw?
-I was playing piano.. At someone’s house.. It was classy styled with black and white. I was playing this song, when a person walked inside. He was smiling and said my name. It was vague and I couldn’t hear it.. Then the house became vague and disappeared, and the man..- Basty pulled her against himself.
-It will come back, really. Don’t worry about it.- He smiled. He looked at the small clock on top of the piano. It was almost six o’ clock.
-Come, I’ll make breakfast.. It’s useless to go back to sleep now. Over fifteen minutes I had to wake up anyway.. He walked into the kitchen, stretching his arms. Barbara looked at him and felt her face was glowing. He turned the radio on and sang along while making sandwiches. After a while also she got up and sat down at the bar on one of the crutches. She lend with her head on her hands while looking at him.
-Remember that you can’t fall in love with him. He has to help you, and when you know who and what you are, it will be time to live your own life..- She said to herself. Basty handed her a sandwich. He was already chewing and began to make coffee. Not much later the kitchen was filled with the smell of fresh coffee. He poured her a mug and one for himself.
-I’ll get dressed.- He said and walked away. Barbara took the mug in her hands and walked back to the piano.
-Why are you keep attracting me? Is there something you wanna tell me?- She sighed and drank her coffee. Also she got dressed.
-I’m off to work.- Basty said. He wore a suit and took his hat. Barbara smiled.
-See you tonight then, I guess.- She said. Basty nodded and laid a key of the house on the table.
-You don’t have to sit here all day.- He smiled and left. Barbara took the key and putted it in her shoulder bag. She walked back to the piano. Her boots made a clicking sound on the floor. Again she sat down and just began to play what she wanted to.
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Very Happy Very Happy
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nice!! i begin to like the plot more! Smile
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It was Katja's idea (:
I'm just a co-writer Razz
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heh well done Katja then! (^_^)
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Thank you Very Happy
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Sounds good! Wink
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Thanks girls
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Part 9

-Hey... Anyone here?- Marjolein came in.
-Oh hey... Yes I'm here in the livingroom.- Barbara said and came to her.
-I came by to look if you needed some company.- Marjolein said.
-Company would be nice. Basty went to work and I don't wanna be alone. Because then I keep thinking about who I am.- Barbara said.
-I'm sure that you will remember everything sooner or later.- Marjolein said.
Barbara nodded and girls went to kitchen. She made coffee and they sat down at the table. Then they just talked and got to know each other better. Marjolein thought that Barbara is a nice girl and she really liked to know her better.
Suddenly Barbara closed her eyes and shook her head.
-What happen? Did you remember something?- Marjolein asked.
Barbara nodded and went to get coffee to herself. She sat back down and she looked at her ring. She took it off and looked a bit closer but then she put it back on finger.
-I'm quite sure that I have to love all kind of expensive stuff. I just remember that someone gave to me very expensive and a beautiful car. But I can't see who that someone is.- Barbara said and closed her eyes.

Meanwhile Basty is on his office and he worked hard. He tried to find out who is that mystery woman and where is Ony's wife. He made a few phone calls but those didn't help him.
-Damn it... Why I keep thinking about that woman. Obviously she's married. Help her and then forget.- Basty shook his head.
-But it's not so easy to forget her.- Basty continue of thinking.

-Do you know anything about my wife?- Ony came to Basty's office.
-I'm working I'm working. Tell me about your wife.- Basty sat behind his desk.
-She have long brown hair and green eyes. Also she have glasses- Ony said and looked around of office.
-Why she sounds familiar? Well mystery woman have short hair and no glasses.- Basty thought.
-How long you have been married?- Basty asked.
-Don't you remember when I told you that I get married with my girlfriend. We have been married two years.- Ony looked at Basty.
-Yeah I remember now. There has to be something wrong because you haven't show her to us.- Basty said.
-There is nothing wrong with her. I have want to keep her only myself.- Ony said.
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omg why i have this feeling that 'Barbara' is Ony's lost wife?? Shocked
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I don't know why you have that feeling...
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xxolympiaxx wrote:
omg why i have this feeling that 'Barbara' is Ony's lost wife?? Shocked

Why I wonder why xD
Come ooonnn... I was thinking the same thing too! Rolling Eyes
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At least i'm not going to tell anything Razz
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Ony is greedy Razz

Mwehehe, I ain't gonna tell it Razz
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