What do you think about the story Hitch-Hiking?

Just wondering what I can do diffrent or something. If you like it or not. I'm not really a writer for a stoty when I start I got a lot of ideas and then it's gone after a while then I stop writing. But just say it . Im open for critics

I liked the whole concept of the story, I kinda had an idea similar to your before, traveling to defferent places, every part a city, I think that the main character kinda trusted Victor(Dima) too easily, I think you could have made it a bit more difficult there, make him save her or something so she can actually see that she can trust him, but otherwise it seems nice till now!!!

I like to story. It's easy going, and amazingly well written. Keep coming with the wicked stuff dude

Thanks girls

That was maybe also a good idea Dimitra haha maybe for the next time..

And Mar don't call me a dude I'm a Dudette

ok now that i read it too i have to say that i liked the plot, though their love came a little bit soon but who cares! the story is great
i have a question by the way, how didn't you notice that Victor was Dima? i mean he changed his name -ok, but his characteristics are the same so..how?=T

Sorry Dudette
If you would travel with a famous guy Oly, would you recognise him the instant you see him? I wouldn't haha

ok but she stayed with him one whole day!

He knows the way around there, and it's always nice to have a travel-buddy (:

It's and he's sexy I guess

Ha, I knooow he is

Haha I"m glad you know he's. Because he's hot

Somebody ideas for a bad ex-girlfriend in my story?

Ideas for what exactly??? ^^

i think what she means is that she wants our opinion about putting a new character in her story like an x-gf of Dima.. hmm not bad.. i kinda like the idea Hen

Good (: but I only have the basic ideas like kissing and something else,, someone else some other ideas?

Kissing, sleeping together.. oh, stalking, threatening letters and phone calls