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 Something with a vampire.. xPart 12

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'Cause it's nice to let people wait Smile If they don't know what will happen and I know Smile
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he is.....what???? c'mon i want more!!!!Very Happy
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Maybe you can get more today Smile
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xPart 11…

He stopped talking: “Can I get one last kiss. For you break up with me?”. I looked scared but I kissed him quite passionate. “Look” Mick said. His face turned pale white and he got on each side of his mouth very sharp teeth. I looked shocked and stood up. “Bella, it’s still me baby”. “You…you..” Than I fainted. Mick catched me and laid me down on the couch. He sat on his knees in the front of the couch and laid his arms on the couch. Watching over me.

After a while…

I slowly opened my eyes: “Where am I?”. “With me baby”. “I saw you as a vampire”. “That’s true. Dare to see it again?”. I nodded Mick helped me to sit down. “Ready?” I nodded again. Again his skin was pale white. Now I looked with big eyes at him. “Are you a vampire?” Mick nodded and sat down next to me. I looked at him: “You look beautiful”. “Eeh, not right?”. “Really! Believe me” I touched his pale and cold hand. I took it. He closed his hand around me. We both were looking at each other. I smiled: “Hey, I still love you! Believe me”. Mick nodded and smiled. “You know what I said when you came and we watched Twilight”. “I know. You wanted to be a vampire and you’ve a boyfriend who’s a vampire” Mick smiled. I smiled back and pressed a kiss on his cheek. I didn’t dare to kiss him at his lips. “Ooh, I don’t agree with a kiss on my cheek” I looked a bit scared at him. “Hey, lil’vampire I won’t bite you”. “That isn’t the problem. But it’s so weir to kiss you if you have that teeth. “No of course not.. Come” he pulled me closer. “But did you ever kissed a human while you were vampire?”. Mick shook his head: “Do you know? I never had a relationship with a human when I was vampire. Can we try it?” Mick looked a bit desperate. I started to laugh. “Eeh?”. His cold and pale white face came closer to my face. His lips pressed softly against my lips. His tongue was brushing against my lips. Than I slowly opened my mouth. Our tongues met. Mick pushed me softly down on the couch and he laid on top of me. His hand went under my shirt. But now was his hand not pale white and cold anymore. I laid hands at his butt. Mick stopped kissing and said: “I want you. But do you want me?”. “Mick, please. Don’t be unsure. I’ve always dreamed of this” I smiled. Mick smiled back and kissed me again. His hands were moving up my t-shirt. “Beautiful body” He kissed my chest and lowered down to my belly. My breathing was getting faster. He stopped smiled and kissed me at my lips and took my shirt off. Soon as well were more clothes lying on the floor. Mick kissed me everywhere. We had a great afternoon.


it's not a long part and such boring Smile but here you go Wink


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boring?? boring??????? what?!!!! it's awesome!!! Very Happy
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Great part Very Happy
And it's not boring at all...
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PostSubject: Re: Something with a vampire.. xPart 12   Something with a vampire.. xPart 12 - Page 4 EmptyThu Jan 29, 2009 11:59 pm

Thanks girls,, Also part 12 is done I wanted to start with part 13 but I'm a bit outta inspiration Shocked
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But that's why they invented a Marjolein xD
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And I'm very happy with that Very Happy:D Not only for the ideas but you're a great friend! Very Happy
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Aww *hugs* So are you Hen (:
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awww i want a good friend too Crying
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I am sure you have *hugs*

I think you are on of my friends at least (:
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awww thanks honey! you're my friend too! kisses
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Yay! kisses
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Sorry Girls I cancel this story
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No problem Hen Wink I understand
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Thanks Mar
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why? what happened? is it only for a while?
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I don't know.. I lost my notebook with the other parts Rolling Eyes
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oh no...=[
i hope you find it!
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Me too hehe... But I also wasn't really in the mood for writing this story I think it was a stupido story
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O.o i liked this story! =p
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Hehe well thanks Smile..
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Wink
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It was a very nice story and I liked it bery much and not stupid at all!!! I hope you'll continue it!!! I'll put it on canceled stories and sent me a pm if you want it back Wink
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