World Forsaken, Words Forbidden - Part 17 - Last part

Amaziing! I wasn't expecting THAT ^^

Wow, thanks girls!
I'm satisfied if I managed to surprise you

I was wondering when he would get angry actually I mean, he took it quite good when his dad told him he'd to leave..
Poor guy.. Suffering to death seems a horrible way to go..

he's not gonna die,, right??

xxolympiaxx wrote:

he's not gonna die,, right??

*Dimi thinks tha's a stupid question*
if he died who would be the main character? >.>

ok i know it was stupid but you never know what a writer thinks!!

She's not Stephen King... my sis was reading a book of his and by the middle of the book he had killed all his characters xD

Dunno what I should say.... If the main character dies, it's end of the story...?

Lol, I'm definitely not Stephen King. His books are weird but good.

or Nickolas Sparks! don't forget him!.. he always kills the main characters! >.>

I dunno that man Oly... but I'm definitely NOT gonna read any of his books now xDDD

And don't forget Philip Pulman... hegets on my nerves killing everyone, and if not killing, the story will surely have a bad ending >.>

he's the man who wrote the notebook and dear john.. <3

ohhh... >.> He's mean!

i know.. =/ but i like his books

Stephen King has surely some weird books xD

I think it is possible to kill the main character (I did it too ) it only would be weird to read in the first person then xD

I heard how dad ordered everyone to go back to the city. It took a while before we were finally together there.
- So, what was so important that you had to send everybody away? I asked.
- Just say that it isn’t true… dad begged.
- But it’s true! I yelled and turned to look dad. My eyes were glimpsing angry.
- How did you think I could ever live here?! Without food, a place to live… It’s impossible! So your magic trick is really fixing itself. When elf won’t have magic skills, he’ll die. Simple.
- But there has to be something I could do, dad still tired.
- Yes, there WAS. You could’ve closed your eyes from my mistakes but no, you decided to play the most honest king ever. Have you ever thought why I was the first one who was deported? Maybe because other kings knew the effects of that magic trick and didn’t want to kill anybody, I talked. – So, if you could leave me alone now?
- But…
- NO! Leave me now and forget you even had a son! I said strictly and sat down on a stone.
I hear how dad was moving behind me. I guess he still wanted to do something. But finally I heard his footsteps getting away.

I was wondering what I should do now. It was winter, there wasn’t enough snow so I could’ve made a cover of it for me. I didn’t have food. I couldn’t get it anymore from the forest. So I could sit here until I would be totally frozen and hungry or I could walk somewhere and be warm and hungry. I chose walking. I didn’t want to see anyone anymore and if I stayed here somebody could find me easily. I left to walk towards my city. Of course I couldn’t see it because there were magic walls around it. But I knew where the border line went so I walked around the city without touching the magic wall. When I was other side of the city I started to walk deeper to the forest. There should be less people than if I had left to walk towards the humans’ city. And there weren’t many elves either because they didn’t have any reason to be there in winter. Soon I was out of my land. Now I was walking other elf folk’s lands. But evening was already near, darkness was covering the view. It had started to snow quietly. Snowflakes were tiny and when I looked up to sky, I noticed some stars there already. The full moon was also rising to the sky. It was going to be a cold night since the sky was so clear. My stomach was keeping terrible noise but I couldn’t do anything. I would die because of hunger if I wasn’t a completely frozen ice cube before that. And there was still that annoying miserable sound echoing in my head. It had become louder all the time so I guess I didn’t have much time anymore.

I heard how wolves were howling somewhere. I guess it was because of the full moon. I wasn’t afraid of them but I still hoped they wouldn’t come near me. I didn’t have any way to protect me. Though I wouldn’t be here long anyway. And I was tired and hungry too. Soon I couldn’t take any steps forward. I sat down under a tree. It was a birch so it didn’t give much cover for me. Now that I was sitting, cold started to fill up my veins. I knew how dangerous it was to stay in one place. I didn’t have any other choice and besides it was totally same what I would do now. I would die, no matter what.

It started to snow faster. The snow would cover me soon. It wouldn’t warm me because I couldn’t feel the cold anymore. Actually I couldn’t feel my fingers and toes at all. And I felt really sleepy. It was normal if you were as frozen as I was now. I would fall asleep soon and perhaps never wake up. I guess I had fallen asleep because there was so much snow above me. Something had woken me up. Then I noticed it. The music, that miserable sound had disappeared. Sacred silence. I sighed and leaned my head against the birch. I had never thought this kind of death. Not here, somewhere in the forest, alone, hungry, frozen… Not like this… Warm, burning tears ran over my cheeks warming my face a bit. Tears dropped on the snow and melted it little. I closed my eyes but tears were coming even so. I never meant it to be like this… I started to hallucinate. I saw my dad talking to me, Inaila was there too. Then mom appeared there. I tried to say I was so sorry I had caused all this. But I was too weak to say anything. But I heard what mom said. Now I knew what I was going to do here. Now I could’ve answered to all those questions which were asked me. Now I knew it.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zaLoBdqcvVY
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I thought he would seriously die there
Poor fellow..

awww i feel really sorry for him..=/ he didn't do anything wrong!

so sad

Poor thing... but I'm soooo curious to know what he knew now!
Oh and one thing... if there is full moon and stars in the sky and the sky was clear, how can it snow then? Usually the sky is not clear when it snows and he is not even in elf world anymore Well, it's not that it would bother me too much, but it just hit me in the eye
The end of the part was however good, you could really feel the athmosfere...^^

Lol, I didn't notice that... xD I was writing the scene which I had in front of my eyes but you can for example imagine that the snow fell from the trees and he thought it was snowing.. Or something, dunno. xD And in the end of the part you can think the sky has then more clouds and it's snowing for real.

Kun jos se lumi on semmosta hötyä, niin sehän voi tippua puista ilman että sitä ees aattelee mistä se tulee.. En tiiä oliko fiksua huomauttaa tuosta, kun voin kehitellä semmoset selitykset, ettei mtn järkee..

Anyway, thanks for your comments. I guess I'll post the last part tomorrow

Very nice part Heli! I liked it a lot ^^
The description of his emotions in the end and how everything was turning out from his tears was amazing!

I also liked that it was snowing, metaphorically depicting what was going on inside his own heart ^^

Naw, thanks a lot Dimitra!

Btw, the last part is on its way!

last part? Wait... is it over so soon? 0.o

Yes, it is... And this is more like epilogue, not even a real part...

Can't wait to read it =]