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Marjolein

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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyFri Sep 04, 2009 7:51 pm

Dimitra wrote:
You had a crush on him and she agreed to be his girlfriend? Soo not nice, but anyway, if you din't have a problem Wink Oh... so not cool of him to do!!! Jeez... Evil or Very Mad

Well, there were 18 months between me being in love and she getting something with him, soo.. But he was serious such an asshole! First he says he loves me, and a few months later he tells me to simply fuck off coz I'm annoying, and I stink, and blablablablabla.. She gave him a second change, and when she went to his house the other day, all he did was talking about other girls so she was like; see ya later alligator. You suck! and I was like; You go girl!

Oly, you know there's this saying I really love: Karma's a bitch and one day it'll turn around and bite you in the ass.. It suits your friend and that guy Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyFri Sep 04, 2009 9:13 pm

Oh....I see Mar...well, she did him well to leave him, he was so not worth it!!! Nice saying Mar hahahaha!!!

Oly... I'm sory about your friend... sorry to say but she mustn't be such a nice friend to do such a thing Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyFri Sep 04, 2009 9:15 pm

Yeah, I love it too I love you It will bite him too btw Laughing


Psst.. I just realized.. I ahve more posts than you, and you're the admin..
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyFri Sep 04, 2009 9:24 pm

Yeah, I saw it about the posts, it's ok, in the Greek forum of DNash I have more than 5000 and the admin has 3000+ xD You're writing too much xD

hahahaha bite hiiiimmm!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyFri Sep 04, 2009 9:39 pm

No, I spam. See, there's the diference Laughing

I will *batman-face* Ew, it's too gross to bite him in the ass y'know.. not hygenic..
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyFri Sep 04, 2009 9:41 pm

batman like it?
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyFri Sep 04, 2009 9:55 pm

batman Hell yes I do
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySat Sep 05, 2009 1:29 am

Marjolein wrote:

Oly, you know there's this saying I really love: Karma's a bitch and one day it'll turn around and bite you in the ass.. It suits your friend and that guy Laughing
Laughing i don't know who is Karma but i totally love this quote xD

Dimitra wrote:
Oly... I'm sory about your friend... sorry to say but she mustn't be such a nice friend to do such a thing

yeah..i know that, i guess i'm too patient but one day.... rambo
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySat Sep 05, 2009 12:43 pm

karma is like.. when you do good things, good things will come back to you. Same for bad things. that's karma
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySat Sep 05, 2009 5:06 pm

oh! hahahahaha that's funny then xDD
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySat Sep 05, 2009 8:49 pm

Hell yes it is ;D
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 06, 2009 11:30 pm

Part 7 (Sorry, I think it's kinda small xD)
One week past and Rose’s still not talking to me. And the weird thing was, that Joe was like best buddies with David. I think they’re up to something.
“Hey Lily, you ok?” it was David.
“Huh? Yeah, I’m fine, you?”
“I’m fine, wanna go out today?”
“Yeah sure, where?”
“Wanna come over to my house?”
“Huh? What?”
“If you want to, you could come over to my house. Nobody will be there. We’ll watch some TV, talk a bit, nothing special”
“Yeah, sure”
“Gotta go, I have PE”
“See you, have fun”
“You too”
Yeah, right, as if anyone, anyone at all could have fun at chemistry. I got in the classroom and the first person I saw was Rose. When she saw me she turned her look away. I sat to my seat, next to Mike, disgusting, and that’s when I saw someone in front of me. It was Rose. She was holding one of the vials we were using for experimenting. And suddenly, everything that was inside the vial was on my shirt.
“Rose? Why did you do that?”
But Rose was not answering, just looking at me with that empty I’m-flying-out-of-space-right-now look, and she got me so mad that I pushed her, and then the fight started. On the one side I was hearing the kids shouting and laughing, and on the other side Mr Brown shouting to stop. It was awful, and the last thing before being kicked out of class was “TO THE PRINCIPAL RIGHT NOW, YOU BOTH”
Jeez how could this happen to me? ME? Lily to the principal’s office? I don’t even know which way it is. We got there, and knocked the door.
“Come in”
“Excuse us sir, Mr Brown told us to come.”
“What happened?”
“Nothing actually...” started Rose talking.
“We kinda had a little fight”
And that’s when I saw Rose looking at me with that let’s-get-out-of-here-and-you’ll-see look. And what have I done? I just told the truth for God’s sake.
“Is everything ok? Did you break any bones? Everything’s in place?”
Huh? I told him we had a fight in the classroom and he was asking if we were injured?
“Yeah, we’re fine; won’t you punish us or something?”
“No! Why should I? Everything’s ok, apart from your blouse obviously, so why punishing you for something that had no effect on you or the classroom, I just want you to say sorry to each other and you may leave”
Huh? Just that?
“I’m sorry Rose”
“Me too”
Huh? She actually means it? What the heck? I thought we weren’t friends now.
“You may leave young ladies, and I hope the only day I’m going to see you again is for good news”
“Thank you Sir”
And we got out of the class.
“Rose... you ok?”
“Don’t talk to me you baka”
And she just left? Pfff...she’s so stupid... and should call herself baka, not me!
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 06, 2009 11:40 pm

it IS small ( Suspect ) but it's perfect!
looooooooool cat fight as Americans say!xD Rose starting getting on my nerves.. Suspect
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 06, 2009 11:47 pm

I know... sorry!!! I'll make it up with the next one Wink

Which will be put on when YOURS is, so hurry up Oly!!!! Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 07, 2009 12:05 am

omg you're making me nervous now... *looks at her clock "yeyy i have time to go write an other part!"* *opens new page and starts the writing*
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 07, 2009 5:02 pm

Amazing parts and some were also so cute Very Happy I love you
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 07, 2009 7:37 pm

what the F is baka Suspect
Rose is akward *sings the last word*
If I would be like that, I swear to God my friend would have kicked me in the ass, and hard to!
Great part Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 07, 2009 8:03 pm

xDD baka means stupid in Japanese
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 07, 2009 8:21 pm

Thanks for the translation ;D
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 07, 2009 9:54 pm

Yeah... I love the word baka xDDDD And I'm kinda making Rose like things that "normal" people don't... so... xD


Thanx Katja!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySat Sep 12, 2009 8:14 pm

Ok... this part is the last I've written so far... and I don't think you'll get more till next weekend at least, coz school started pale I'm sorry... so... try to enjoy this one... I really hope you'll like it!!

Part 8
“Hey Lily, I’m glad you came”
“Your house is very nice Dave, I was so little when I came here for the last time”
“Yeah, that’s true, have a seat, want to drink something?”
“Anything cold is fine”
“We have juice, cola and beer”
“Yeah, I’ll take the beer” He actually believed me? Jeez where’s his humour when you need it? “I’m kidding, I’ll take the juice”
“Oh...cool”
Their living room is so big! Ours is like a tiny, tiny part of it! And the fireplace with the photographs...
“Here’s your juice”
“Thanks, is that you?”
“Yeah, I was six and dressed up as Dracula, I didn’t like it, but my mom... you know how moms are”
“Yeah, I know, you’re really cute you know” I turned around and smiled. Ok... he really was closer than I thought he was...*inhale* *exhale* *inhale* *exhale* I have to remember.
“Lily? Are you ok?”
“Yeah sure, I’m... fine” I said and smiled to support my words.
“So... what do you want to do?”
“Dunno, don’t you have a plan or something?”
“I was thinking about a movie, but it kinda gets a bit all-times-the-same-thing”
“No, I’d like to see a movie, which one?”
“Hmmm... we’ll have to think about it, what kind of movie do you want to see?”
“Dunno, comedy?”
“I’m sure you meant romance”
“Huh? Oh... whatever you like” He can just read my thoughts, that’s all.
“I can’t read your thoughts but your face sweetie”
“Yeah right... I was just thinking the exact words you said, anyway, did you find a movie?”
“How about The Notebook?”
“Yeah, that would be nice, always wanted to see this movie”
And that’s when we sat down on the couch together to watch the movie... jeez I was so nervous...what now? And a few minutes later...
“Relax a bit Lily, I’m not going to bite you”
“I know that” I wish it were so easy and simple.
“Come here” he said and pulled me closer. I put my feet on the sofa to be more comfortable and before I knew it I was laying in the sofa with my head on his feet watching the movie. That was so amazing. I could feel his fingers passing through my hair every now and then. But before I knew it the movie had come to an end.
“Lily? Are you asleep?” I heard him whisper.
“No, I’m awake...sorry for putting you on the corner” I said and got up.
“It’s ok, I don’t mind. So, how did you like the movie?”
“Oh...it was great, the story, and the characters. I could never leave away from the man I love so much.”
“Do you really mean that?”
“Yeah, it’s just unbearable.”
“Then come here” he said and hugged me while pulling me on his side.
And just when I thought something was kinda awkward he like reading my mind started tickling me.
“Hey stop it”
“No I won’t” he said and out of laughter we fell on the floor and he...he...kissed me?! Ok, I know he’s my boyfriend but I just can’t get used to it when he kisses me. And then he suddenly got up.
“Lily, we have to talk”
“What’s wrong?” I said and sat on the ground.
“It’s about Rose”
“Huh?”
“I think you really shouldn’t have had a fight just because of me, it makes me feel bad, I beg you to make up with her”
“But... you don’t know what happened in chemistry today”
“Yes, I know, Joe told me, and he also told me that it was by mistake, that Vicky accidentally pushed Rose just when she was about to apologize and... what happened next”
“Yeah right, why should I believe what Rose says?”
“Honey, please, you’ve been friends for life and now you ask me why you should believe her?”
“”So...that’s why you and Joe were talking all the time?”
“Yeah, and I actually found out he’s a very cool guy, but that’s not the point, I believe that it was wrong of you to have a fight with Rose”
“I don’t know Dave... it’s just...”
“What? It’s just what?”
“I can’t choose”
“Choose what?”
“Between you and her, I mean, when we had the fight in the toilets, she told me that she didn’t want David’s Lily but Rose’s Lily? Am I really two personalities at the same time?”
“You don’t have to choose honey; we can all be together if we keep things in the right amount”
“Are you sure? Don’t you think I’ve changed since we’ve first gone out together?”
“No, I think you’re the same adorable little girl you always were”
“I hope you’re right... coz I don’t want to change into something that cares only for her boyfriend and loses all her friends, don’t take it wrong, I do care about you, but I think that I need my friends too”
“Of course you need them; friends are the most important thing”
“Thanks David, you really helped me” I said and gave him a big hug.
“I think I should help you more often if you’re always to give so big hugs”
“Really? How about doing my Math homework?”
“No, no thanks”
And that was it, everything had fallen into place.
“Hey, is this clock showing the right time?”
“Yeah why?”
“DAVID, it’s eleven o’clock! OMG I have to go”
“Relax Lily, come, I’ll take you home”
“No, it’s ok”
“For God’s sake, you know you never win this argument”
“Ok, ok, let’s go”
And that’s how that day came to an end!
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySat Sep 12, 2009 8:52 pm

So great part Very Happy

and now i'm ready to go to sleep Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySat Sep 12, 2009 10:58 pm

Aaaaaaw... <3
They're just too cute Laughing
Thanks Dimi
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 13, 2009 1:24 pm

I'm glad you liked it girls!!!!! ;D
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Life! Part 16   Teenage Life! Part 16 - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 13, 2009 2:58 pm

Finally I read this story! cheers
Lily and David are sooo cute together. ;D
Can't wait to know what happens next!
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