freedom!!yeah freedom!....

hello!!!!!!!!!!well i'm writing smt you know and i would like your opinion too!!if you have any questions i'm here to answer.here it is!!!!!!!!



Once apon a time in Valencia was a boy named Ony, with his 3 best friends, Javi, Mikel and Basty. They all living in an orphanage because of there parents. Well not exactly all of them. For example, Onys parents left him one cold night with rain out of a church. They never come back for him but Ony still waits them. Every night stands infrod of his window and he just waits, without talking, without smilling, without mooving, just hoping... Javis parents left him too but not because they didn't want him, they just couldn't afford him because of the money, because of the life. Mikels parents were take a divorce, non of them wanted to live with him! "What a poor boy!" were all saying in the court. They asked him: "Which one of your parents want to live with?" but Mikel saw them. He saw it in there eyes. They didn't want him at all. So he said: "I don't wan't non of them! They don't love me! They can't love me!!" But with Basty were all different. His parents loved him and take care of him. They were living happily at there village near Cadiz but they never thought that they could probably lose there children! So one day a man appear, a soldier. "What are you want?" they asked. "Everything!" he answered. "What are you mean with everything?" they asked again. "Oh! You don't catch it? Do you?" After a half hour the soldier said: "Bern it all! Kill them all! In the name off our king!!" Basty was there. He saw his family died while he was crying back of the fire. "Take the boy! He might be a good soldier one day..." The 4 kids transpored in Valencia. They took them all in an orphanage with sternly rools, with guards and insane teachers! Many children had ascaped of there but they catch them all again. The kids yelling, asked for help "Help us! They are all crazy there! They don't care for us! They don't love us! They don't want us! They are torturing us!! Don't let them doing that!! We are humans too!! Help! Please?..." No one seems to listen them, no one since today...

wow! well done dora! (anatrixiasa! xD) your story sounds very interesting! i want more!

Dora, your story is in English so if you don't mind I will transfer it to the English stories section so that the toher girsl will read it too, I don't think they will ever come to the Greek section!!!

Wooooooooooow That sounds truly amazing!!!!!!!!

This sounds intresting

Moooore!

Poor Mikel btw They are all poor..

When more?

ok dimitra!sorry!
here the next part!

We are now in the year 2355...

"RUN!!..."

Guard:Quickly! Move! What are you waiting for?.... Grr! You too! Move on! Move or I hit you!
A little boy:Ok... Please don't hurt me!!
Guard:Shut up and move!
They all now in the dining room.
Headmaster:Attention! Everyone is here?
Guard:Yeah sir!
Headmaster:I hope so. For your sake...
Guard:No matter to worry about sir. Everyone's here sir!
Headmaster:Very well... So! I heard something you know...Something strange, something funny I would say...
Everyone was standing there and watch him.
Mikel: Ony...
He wisper to his friend.
Ony:What?...
Mikel:I'm scary!...
Ony:Well, don't be! What ever hapened today isn't our fault.
Mikel don't answerd...
Ony:Right?
Ony's started to worry.
Mikel:....
Ony:Answer to me!
Headmaster:You two! Are everything ok?
Ony:Yes sir!
He said laudly.
Headmaster: Are you sure? Isn't there any problem? Something you want to tell us?
Ony:Nope! No sir! There isn't...
Headmaster:Very well. Then tell us that. Tell us what are you saying each other?
Ony:Nothing sir! I'm telling the truth!
Mikel:He is telling the truth sir! I just asked him what did you said erlier because I didn't heared...
Headmaster:Oh! Sorry then! Sorry! Hm... You must be same liltle boy!! Same on you! How you dare saying such a thing? I always speak laudly and everyone can hear me! So you must have a problem...
Mikel:....
Headmaster: Take him to the infirmary! Make him fine!
Ony:What? No!
Javi:No! You can't do it that to him!!!
Basty:Mikel run!!
Mikel:Gays I'm scary! Don't let them to take me! Please!!
Ony:Mikel!!! Don't worry! Everything is gonna be just fine!
Mikel:No!! Leave me alone!!
Mikel yelled to the guards.
Mikel:Guys!!
Basty:Mikel take care!!
Javi:We'll save you my brother....
He wisper the boy with the beautiful green eyes.
Headmaster:You three! Do not move!
Ony, Javi and Basty were standing there as he said their sir, their headmaster...

T.B.C.

Me wanna more...

Me too.. Poor Mikelito..

awww my baby... please don't hurt him!!!!

Nicee

hehe!i will try not to hurt him!! i am happy that you like it girls!

Awww..poor Mikel, I hope he won't get hurt!!!

hey!!the next part!

"THE APOCALIPSE"

The three boys are walking with two guards. In the end they will take them in the isolation rooms. Then they'll start talking outside of their rooms...

Guard1:Do you know what did happened today?
Guard2:No. Do you know?
Guard1:Yeap! Poor children!! hahahaha!!
Guard2:What are you talking about? Tell me dude!!
Guard1:Do you remenber the kid with the strange green eyes, the skiny one?
Guard2:Yeah. I think his name is Michael...
Guard1:Yeah. That one.
Guard2:What about him?
Guard:It seems that he was the one who done whatever he done this morning...
Guard2:Realy? What headmaster will do now?
Guard1:No idea. He'll probably vanance him, as always!!
Guard2:What do you mean?
Guard1:God! You're new here ha? It's ok. I will tell you everything! You see that is what headmaster doing here.
Guard2:You mean that he like it? He's enjoying vanances the kids?
Guard1:Yeah! Why? Aren't you?
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Ony:God! Why Mikel?....
Ony wispered. He's standing near his door and listening the convertation of the guards. The same thing are doing Javi and Basty. They are leaving...
Javi:Basty! Are you there?
Basty:Yeah man... Ony?
Ony: I'm here too...
Basty:Did you listen what he just said about Mikel?
Javi:Yes. We must do something! We must save him!!
Ony:Yeah. But first we must save ourselves. And that is not easy...
Basty:What are we doing now?....
Javi:I don't know but we must think something quickly because they will come for us!
Ony:I agree with you Javi. Because everytime they are coming everyting getting black. But it's ok for me. At least I am here because I defence a brother...
Basty:Don't worry dude. I think that I have an idea!
Javi:Ok! But hurry! I think that I heared something!!....
Basty had always with him something for the difficult times! So he opened their doors and left with his friends. Now the only thing that they are thinking about is to save Mikel!...

T.B.C.

Cool, they left!!! Now save Mikeeeeeeellll!!!

that's enough for me.thanks!the next part....

"WHERE IS HE ANYWAY?"

Javi:Eaaaaasy...
Ony:Be carefull... Carefull... Be MORE carefull...
Javi:Yeah. That's the way! Move on!
Basty:Could you please just shut the fuck up?!
Ony and Javi:Ok man...
Basty:That's my boys...
The three boys are trying to lock on the door where Mikel were.
Basty:I made it!
They are going inside.
Javi:Where is he?
Ony:Don't know. Let's look for him aside.
Basty:Ok. I'm going this way!
But Mikel wasn't there!
Javi:Where is he anyway?
Something heared. The boys are hiding...
Headmaster:I will kill him! How does he dare to ascape? Find him! I want him dead or alive! But my name will be remain clear!
He is leaving...
Ony:He escaped?
Basty:I think that is what I just heard.
Javi:Wait a sec. He left us?
Basty:What? No! How can you think such a thing about Mikel?!
Javi:Well, tell me about it! What am I sopose to think?
Ony:Sous! Guys think! Mikel is a smart boy. He can't be left us just like that!
Javi:What are you mean?
Ony:My opinion is to look out for something. Anything! He couldn't leave without leave us something!
Basty:Like what Ony?
Ony:A clue Basty. I am sure that something he left before he leave...
After a querter they had finaly find smt!
Javi:Look at that!
Basty:What is it Javi?
Javi:I found a note! And it's from Mikel!
Ony:See? I told you!
Basty:Well? What is it saying?
"You will find me back to the bloody forest. Remember that forest guys? I hope you are..."
Ony:Oh my God!
Basty:We must hurry!
Javi:Dude... One problem you know?....
Basty:What now?
Ony:Nothing! We must leave!
Javi:Oh yeah? What about the guards?

oups...big problem...i hope they will manage to leave.

I hope they'll be able to get out from there!!! Mikel is a clever boy xD That was funny xD

hehe!yes you will see my children!!!

"THE ESCAPE"

Mikel:Oh fuck! What is that? An airship? I thing so... What the fuck?! Oh no! Don't tell me... No my sister too!!! Guys I'm sorry... I have to go!!
Mikel is runing. He will stop next to a tree to take a breath but because of this he won't save his sister yet. So he is just standing there and watching the airship leaving. He wanted to save her but he failed.
Mikel:Why are YOU doing this? What have I done? What SHE have done?... God, please don't let them hurt her... Please...
Mikel said with tears in his eyes...

Basty:What about now?
Javi:Tsss! Don't know...
Ony:We must thing something...
The three kids are now at the square and trying to figer out their next step...
Suddenly a light turns on!
Basty:Quickly! Hide!
Guard:Who is there?
Javi:Oh God! They will find us!!
Basty:Sssss!
Guards:The dogs!! Let the dogs out first!
Javi:Oh man!!
Basty:Hehe! I smell smt you know!!
Javi:...What?...
Basty:FEAR!!hehe! Your fear!
Javi:Oh Basty stop it!
Basty:What? I didn't done anything...
Javi:Tssss! Forget it...
Ony:They're coming!
Javi:Oh no!
Basty:What we're gonna do now?
Ony:Don't know...
The boys are doing circles and the dogs are following them...
Guard:They must found something!! Let's go there!
Ony, Javi and Basty are terrifed. Suddenly something happens...
Ony:Aaaaa!!!
He is falling into a hole.
Basty:Ony!! No!!
Javi:Oh my God!! What we're gonna do Basty?
Basty:.....
The dogs have found them and the guarsds are coming.
Basty:I love you man...
Javi:Yeah... Me too...
Ony:What are you doing?
He is said smiling.
Ony:C'on! Follow me!
Basty and Javi jump into there too and then they close the hole with some woods. After a few seconds they started to run.

Oh!this story is very good!excellent my sisterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!

hehe thanx!!!

Tha was nice!!!! They at least managed to escape!!!