Kings, Mysticisms and Betrayals Postponed

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Me likes it

MÁS

Really??? Thanks!!!
More tomorrow if I find time, I haven't written many parts and I need time to make some more



PS No t-word punishments here

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niceeeeee!!!!
i want more!! sounds interesting! go on dimitroula!!

Dimitra wrote:

Really??? Thanks!!!
More tomorrow if I find time, I haven't written many parts and I need time to make some more



PS No t-word punishments here

Thank God! I hate those punishments!

Haha, me too!!!

Woow sis it's AMAZING and I want more


P.S I liked those t-word punishments because I had only one
I liked to punish you or Marjolein

well, Marjolein didn't at all

Yeah, but I had amny punishments so I don't like it, neither does myself nor me!!!! Sooo.... no punishments at least for now

Part 1
Once upon a time, in the old and now forgotten neighborhoods of Madrid that in the old times were full of life and laughter, four friends were living. Friends since they were born meaning for 20 years already, friends “Today, tomorrow and forever” as they used to say. They were children of poor families whose money was enough only for the absolutely necessary stuff. It was the day that because of what will be said, their whole lives will change forever.
“Michael, please come in to help your father carry the wood to the fireplace” said Michael’s mother from the window when she saw her son coming near with his friends.
“I’m coming mother” he said and after saying goodbye to his friends he run into the house.
“Father, please, leave that to me” he said and took the woods from his father arms before he could even say anything and left them near the fireplace.
As soon as they finished their mother asked him and his sister to come to eat. When they sat on the table sadness came through Michael, always the same and the same soup every day, which you couldn’t even say it was soup, “a plate with water and salt” as his sister Maria used to call it.
“Father, me and the boys thought of something today while we were out”
“I’m listening son, I hope it won’t be a hotheadedness like the other time”
“No father, we decided to go and work to the palace”
Michael’s mother almost choked herself when she heard it.
“You mean soldiers?” Maria asked.
“Yes and no. We heard the sender of the King announcing to the plaza that the King himself is searching for a private guard after last week’s attack by “The Black Men” and after thinking about it we decided to go and see what is going on”
“Michael Hennet Sotomayor, what are you going to do is something very difficult, you must be very responsible to do it” Michael’s mother said.
“But mother, I AM responsible” Michael said while going to the sink with his plate on the hands.
“Ok, I’m going to trust you and let you go, but be aware of the difficulty and that you are alone in this” his father said.
“Thank you father” Michael said and went outside.
“Where are you going again?” his sister asked.
“My little and innocent sister, it’s now or never, I’m going to pick the others up and go to the palace” he said and closed the door behind him.

And then? What will happen next?

Wow it's so interesting....you stopped in wrong place and I want more

MORE ;D

More in a while, I have to translate it, but I promise I'll post today!!!

Part 2

Esteban, Javier and Antonio had almost the same conversation with their parents who thought it was right to let their children test their luck. So they all met and headed to the palace.
“Do you think we will be accepted for the job?” Antonio asked.
“I don’t know about us, but you will be just what they ask for” said Esteban giggling.
“Aww…but it’s another thing that worries me” said Javier touching his jaw as he always did when he was thinking.
“What?” the other three asked.
“What will be the test that will lead the to the conclusion that we are capable enough to guard the king!”
“A very good question indeed” Esteban said.
“I guess they will make us fence with someone strong” Antonio thought.
“Maybe…it’s good that we know how so fence ourselves” said Michael.
“Yeah, it wasn’t for nothing all those nights of not sleeping learning how to use a sword. Thanks to Mr. Francisco.” Esteban said and smiled evilly.
“Yeah, I was the one who was caught all the time out at night s from the guards” Michael said and grimaced.
“Guys, we are here” Antonio said when they suddenly found themselves in front of an iron gate.
The four friends were coming here when they were kinds a lot. They used to play pretending to be aristocrats until a soldier came and told them to leave coz they were too noisy. They had never imagined going back there because the King had forbidden passing from there when his son was born and he was afraid of his security. And so it was, after so many years, they finally passed that gate. They all shivered and suddenly it became too cold. All four of them jumped when they heard someone calling them.
“Hey you…where are you going?” a guard asked them running to them.
“Excuse us, but we heard that the King is looking for guards and we thought we could test our luck” Antonio said.
“I see…follow me” the guard said and moved towards a door the led to the dungeons.
Everything there was wet, the walls full with mold and the echo of their footsteps was big. They went very far until they reached some stairs and they went to a big hall. All around them you could see lit up candles, and portraits of aristocrats and former Kings. On the floor was a huge red carpet with a bit gold on the edges and the ceiling was so high above your head you could barely see the small rubies in the delicate painting.
“Wait here” the guard said and moved towards a huge door on the right.
“Jus don’t tell me that the King himself will see us” Michael said with his mouth wide open from surprise.
“I don’t think so. Good Lord, what was that corridor we passed through? I shuddered while we were passing. Did you hear the mumblings that were audible from the near corridor?” Javier said.
“Yes indeed, and apart from mumblings I heard some screaming too. I think we passed the cells and the torturing rooms.” Esteban said.
“Come” the guard said and made the four of them jump again from surprise.
They went to the door that the guard had entered. They got in and the guard closed the door behind them. They all stared amazed to who was sitting at the chair in front of them.

Was there a king?????????????????
I want more
It's so interesting that I could read it and read it

I'm glad you like the story so much sis!!! You make me happy!!!

ow! This reminds me of the fairy tales I'd love to read when I was a little girl.

I wanna know more as well

I already love this story

Aww... I wanna read more

And it serious looks like the fairytales in my books (:

Me wanna more

I'm glad you truly think of it as a fairytale, I didn't know whether I could catch the sense of Fairytales

More when I'll find time to translate it!!!

oh my godnessssssssssssssss!!!i like it i like it i like it!!

Marjolein wrote:

Aww... I wanna read more

And it serious looks like the fairytales in my books (:

----) i totaly agree with you girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!xD